Need help with the idea

[russianguy30]

Hi.

Can you gimme some plot for my idea. Just I can't make it up.

The point is that I wanted to write a fucking long story about an unexperienced teen girl who had never tried anything of sexual nature and then she met a hot older guy. She was so much into him that he talked her into many things and their relationship was a secret, because her parents wouldn't accept the fact of their dating.

I just couldn't make the plot up. What was the lever to make her do something and the like. If she had a current boyfriend and so on? Can you be of any help?

I believe in you!

 

[nisha_in61]

You want a teen aged girl or a married woman?

 

[russianguy30]

Teen, a virgin, who could hardly kiss a guy

 

[LindsayRae]

...their relationship was a secret, because her...

So, if she was eighteen or nineteen there would be no need for a secret relationship because the older man isn't banging a kid. The parents couldn't legally do anything to the man. And Lit won't post your story of an under aged "teen" girl fucking an older man.

 

[LindsayRae]

Teen, a virgin, who could hardly kiss a guy

P.S.
You said it yourself in your other teenaged girl "idea"... How many high school kids are even virgins anymore? Knowing Lit's rules, you're actually going to try to write a convincing story of an OF AGE young lady who is not only a virgin but naïve as well? Good luck.

 

[soflabbwlvr]

Why don't you start by writing a shorter story about something you can write about, and eventually work yourself up to a fucking long story? You know, walk before you run.

 

[Fantasies_only]

P.S.
You said it yourself in your other teenaged girl "idea"... How many high school kids are even virgins anymore? Knowing Lit's rules, you're actually going to try to write a convincing story of an OF AGE young lady who is not only a virgin but naïve as well? Good luck.

There are more than you think.
In the 80s it wasn't "cool" to be a virgin after 15 or 16, but the 90s changed that idea with AIDS and other sexually transmitted diseases.
Alternate sexual preference was also a factor.

Now in the age of better sexual exploration, virginity might be hard to find unless you look closely enough.

By the way, I was a college virgin.

 

[mythtrav16]

There are more than you think.
In the 80s it wasn't "cool" to be a virgin after 15 or 16, but the 90s changed that idea with AIDS and other sexually transmitted diseases.
Alternate sexual preference was also a factor.

Now in the age of better sexual exploration, virginity might be hard to find unless you look closely enough.

By the way, I was a college virgin.

I agree. While I'm sure that the majority of girls leave highschool without a hymen these days, there are still a decent number of virgin graduates, of both genders. And I'm not just talking about unpopular kids, either.

Anyone who's seriously into religion probably won't succumb to temptation. I went to a religious school, and I'd say that about 15%-20% of the real lookers were definitely virgins when we graduated. You could tell by the way they acted towards boys who were interested in them, and just the way they talked about (or rather, avoided talking openly about) sex and dating.

And if you're deep in unrequited love, you'll keep pining for the one you want but can't have, and not even notice the easy scores. That situation certainly delayed my cumming of age by at least a couple of years. I had a couple of close friends who were in pretty much the same boat over other girls, too. Yeah, I was in the romantic geek club .

Also, an A-type personality who is obsessed with getting straight A's probably wouldn't have much time for dating and perhaps even sex. This is especially true for girls as, if they've got their whole college lives already mapped out to the last detail, they'd avoid the possibility of getting pregnant like the plague.

 

[russianguy30]

I'm from Moscow, Russia and there are no many crazy things like proms and other things. We are quiet about that and we don't rush to pop-up cherries at that memoriable night.
All that doesn't mean that we aren't adventurous, just we are not so stereotyped. No offense.

Not every one considers that if 18 y.o. girl dates a guy, say, of 30. We consider that dating with guys of your age is normal. Usually guys are older about 2-3 years than girls because females prefer to date with older males, just a bit. Also we don't think that interracial couples are OK.

Before writing a story it should be well-planned and not to make it sound stupid like virgins getting undressed and ask stupid questions like
- What is it? Cock. I have never seen it
and the like
Hard to believe that at 18, there people who didn't see porn flicks, porn pictures, masturbate and give head.

P.S. A few days ago I submitted one of my stories.

 

[CuCuKM]

Alright.
Whether a teen is legally bound to their parents or not, they can still feel pressured from them, perhaps scared of them even. But aren't yet finacially capable enough to go out and live on their own, fearing being homeless and the like.
A lot of kids up to 25 live with their parents in the states now days.

I don't know much about Russia however.


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Still living with her parents, not yet having graduated from high school, Milly Freckles never had much interest in dating when she was younger, but recently, a bunch of her friends had been pushing her to at least give dating a try, and finally after one of them convinced her that it would be riskless fun to just go on one date.

They take her to a popular hang-out for teens and some young adults, and she being used to being told what to do, found herself mostly uninterested in the young boys who simply winged it as they went, didn't even much know what they were doing themselves.
While there she finds herself interested in this mature man who is already well established, and happens to run the location she's currently at.
Asserting dominance, he suggests to her that they spend some private time together, away from the immature youth.
She knew that strangers were usually trouble, but, she couldn't help feeling she could trust this man, despite having just met him. The way he asserted himself gave her confidence in him.

They hang out for a few hours, her friends unaware that she was with a much older guy (having texted them and lieing to them that she was with a boy, getting them to shut up), and soo she finds herself... attached to him.

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Okay it isn't much, but I hope this helps.

 

[russianguy30]

The apartment prices in Moscow are the highest in the world (according to salaries).
For example, 2-room apartment on the seven storey at the edge of the city costed about 170 000 $. The medium salary in Moscow about 1 000 $. The usual rent is about 1000$... The apartment matter is very difficult in Moscow.
Unlike USA, there are no cottages in the city. They are only in bio blocks and there lives only celebrities and bags of money...
So the people here can't change places of leaving often.
Although it's possible to earn good money. For example, my salary is about 4000+$ that's much more than medium.

My bad, it's dead of night and my mind is blurred to write in a normal language

But if I wanted to make up that the girl's still in high school and she's into a 5-year student?

 

[CuCuKM]

A number of people boys and girls don't graduate until shortly after they turn 18, not graduate before they turn 18.

That is my only comment.

 

[LindsayRae]

A number of people boys and girls don't graduate until shortly after they turn 18, not graduate before they turn 18.

That is my only comment.

I was 17 when I graduated high school. So was my sister, and my fiancé for that matter. Two of my cousins were even 17 when they started their freshmen year in college. That happens with the summer babies. (And in the case of my two cousins, early September.)

 

[CuCuKM]

I did happen to know one boy who graduated at the age of 20 though...
Went to school with him.
He graduated in a class full of 17 year olds...
-.- My age then, but I was a junior.

 

[Cameo_Fleur]

I graduated from high school at the age of 15. I was the second generation to do that, my mother had also graduated at the age of 15.

 

[CuCuKM]

I've... only heard of people like that.



Also...
Sweet on you 69 posts.
Lol.

 

[roomfor1more]

There are a few suggestions I can give:

1. For Literotica all characters must be at least 18 years of age
2. Plan out the story and break it down into chapters
3. Story could be about a shy girl 18 or 19 living at home with her parents while attending university in order to keep costs down.
4. While at university she grows out of her shell, begins realizing she is missing a lot and begins trying new things.
5. She could then become involved with an older male professor who has to keep the relationship a secret in order to protect his job

 

[Great_Brit]

There are a few suggestions I can give:
... She could then become involved with an older male professor who has to keep the relationship a secret in order to protect his job

There are always plenty of older men hanging round Universities looking for young girls they can dazzle. Some of them are "mature students" and others have research grants, but there are always some who just use student hang-outs looking for opportunities.

If one such has money there will always be hard up students who can be dazzled.

 

[russianguy30]

One day I was hanging out near a local McDonal's and I witnessed a conversation like that. There were two girls and two men of 30-something. The men tried to talk them into something but the girls answered back like "We didn't promised anything and we're even under 18!"
Girls can take advantage of any situation too

 

[KristyLeigh]

RussianGuy, you're writing fantasy. Because it's fantasy, a girl can be a virgin at 18...or 19 or 20 or any other age. That's why fantasy so wonderful - it's your story, and anything can happen in it.

I wanted to write a long story about an inexperienced teen girl who had never tried anything of sexual nature and then she met a hot older guy.

In the past, it was normal for young girls to be virgins until they married. And it was not unusual for an 18 year old girl to marry a man of 30-35. Older men were considered attractive because they were mature, confident and (frequently) wealthier than younger men.

What was the lever to make her do something and the like?

Perhaps she isn't close to her parents. This is very common, even in the present day: when a father doesn't care about his daughter, she looks for a kind, loving man when she grows up. A man who gives her the attention she never received from her father.

Some women are so lonely for affection, they will do almost anything for the right man. A shy young woman might be reluctant at first, but eventually, she will surrender her body to the man she loves, because it is better than being alone.

 

[jeninflorida]

Teen, a virgin, who could hardly kiss a guy

well this mut be fiction

 

[russianguy30]

Virgin at 18... a real fiction
I dated with a girl whose cherry was broken at about 19-20 when she studied at college. She was a good fuck, although she disliked to give head and refused anal sex. And recently, when her baby fell asleep, she didn't protest anal sex. You can do anythink to keep your baby sleeping

And by the way, it's a lie that pussies of those who gave birth are loosened. Hers was tight as it was earlier. She's 25 now but I first fucked her at 21

 

[jeninflorida]

Well it does make for a great setup. Someone who is still a virgin tends to have a very religious family. So she is torn from what she wants to do and what she is told to do. The more she tries to fight bad boys the more she wants a bad boy to take her.

Virgin at 18... a real fiction
I dated with a girl whose cherry was broken at about 19-20 when she studied at college. She was a good fuck, although she disliked to give head and refused anal sex. And recently, when her baby fell asleep, she didn't protest anal sex. You can do anythink to keep your baby sleeping

And by the way, it's a lie that pussies of those who gave birth are loosened. Hers was tight as it was earlier. She's 25 now but I first fucked her at 21