LITEROTICA PODCAST
LIT CAMS (200 Free Tokens)ADULT TOYSVOD MOVIES

New Poetry Recommendations

Friday Review

23 new poems on this Friday the 13th. (Well, okay, Yesterday. I'm cheating.) This is a feast of liveliness today, with notables being
She said she was not too proud by KOLKORE
Inertia Alternator by MinorMonster
Beachdrift by NeonFlux
Cruciatus by everso bad (a bit talky but interesting images)
and writermike's whimsical Cooking.

Though it makes me wish my knowledge of Spanish were better, I really like lobomao's
the feast of Santa Yuerba Buena. Also, if you can look past the many technical errors, you might find MET's
Gravitational Upgrades to be a fun take on birthdays.

I mentioned only what really stood out to me, but there are several other poems here that might be of interest to others. There is halloween poetry, beach poetry, and rockstar for president poetry as well. Enjoy! :)
 
New Poems Reviews

seeking movement within
crossing pages with my eyes
Saturday's sunrise

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Perhaps one must have experienced such emotions to relate to this poem, even though it was so long ago, I can recall say
something similar to ...Yet Again by pmbluemoon

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

and speaking of memories...
Snowdrop by Hippokrene brought back some great feelings and wonderful memories. Thanks!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Have a super-fab-tabulous week (~_~)
 
I am not sure how I missed this poem, it is posted as oct 14 but was not out when I did reviews yesterday, anyhow;

Challah, hallah by Man Ray a picture paints a thousand words and this one may paint even more <bigrin
 
Monday Review!

Just one pen sparked response, maybe I need more java..it was freshly ground from costco organic beans ...I blame that ok..

I Feel by Neteru © ..nice images of soul love , but , the ending was off.
I couldn't figure if the mf was me or a name initial..and I feel You could have been worded different..but, I enjoyed the feeling... ;)
Go read comment and review if you find something to spark your day!!
blue
 
Tuesday, Full of Grace

17 on the 17th. This is my karmic payback for last Tuesday's lack. A lot of middle to good work this week, with a couple clunkers. However, only two really grabbed me.

iqespresso gives us Girls That Masturbate. The sexiest thing posted today, and damn fun. An excellent way for a girl in a cold climate to start the day.

Dragonfeather has a piece called Wednesday up for your perusal. Excellent stuff. It's almost a Western Australian Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock, except, you know, modern and a little dirty.

Beautiful rain here in Chicago. Best wishes, all.

Specs
 
Wednesday's Review

.

What a week it has been since last Wednesday! Two feet of snow came & melted but it's left behind 3 feet of tree branches covering the yard, waiting to be cut down to firewood size. Oh my back...

Yesterday Specs had 17 pieces; now it's the 18th and I'm facing - you guessed it - 18 pieces to look over. So let's see what is spread before us today:


The always prolific bluerains has gone green today with Muswell Revisited. Just wondering though ~ is it supposed to be Muswell or Muwell. Only blue's alt knows for sure. Hmmm.

oregon_gal has an interesting piece, Sex x 3. Dust bunnies and old sex tools makes for an interesting mix. What else is lurking in this gal's closet?

bigjim_100 has his premiere piece out today, a haiku-like quickie in Frozen Desire.

That's it for me today. But don't let that stop you; read, vote, comment ~ it's the least you can do. Above all, comment ~ a fair exchange for the pleasure of reading free poetry.


.
 
There are seven shiny new poems up today, folks. Let's take a quick lookie at 'em.
  • Finally, another new poet, Phenjo, tells us of The Bee's Needs in a manner von Frisch would have appreciated. I normally don't care for centered poems, but I think that alignment works well here.
That's it for today, people. Go welcome the newbies with your RVC and give RF a little smooch as well.
 
Friday Review

Wow. 33 new poems for Friday (I'm glad I'm just doing Friday and not Thursday, too! Thanks, Tzara).

Though I wish its punctuation were more regularly applied, I was drawn to Vapiredust's absurdist sermon Five ways of looking at a Frog. Follow that up with Ancient117331's Prose... then whip over to Preta's necro erotic Pillow talk and you'll feel like you've just been on a trip through the noir funhouse and landed on a dead redhead. In the best possible way.

I enjoyed the world view of lostandfounder's Paradox of the Ritual and much of the imagery in MET's The Road to Hondo.

My picks of the day are Bill Dada's The Practice of Unsafe Sects, where effortless wordplay announces a jarring, scrapyard collage of a poem, and naxie's bittersweet Moving from Memory.

Finish all this with a refreshing scrub in Tristesse's Christening the Claw-foot Tub. Though this is not as strong as much of this poet's work on the forums in my opinion, it is a relaxing finale to the journey and a great way to start a Saturday.

Enjoy your weekends!
 
Last edited:
New Poems Reviews
Saturday 21, 2006

27 poems blossomed this morn...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Once Upon a Ryhme by Gaia_Lorraine

clip~
Now you’re gone like melted snow
Yet still I dream you’ll come to me
Sleep once more within my arms
But there are dreams that cannot be

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Shut up and Fuck me by Vampiredust ... the alluring title says it all!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

and this is an excellent example of erotic illustrated poetry...
Knightdream by ManRay

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Have a poetic weekend (~_~)
 
New Poems Reviews

Blue is on vacation... ("lucky girl" <grin)
she asked me to cover for her in her absence.

seven new poems emerged today...

Congratualtions MinorMonster,
receiving a green "E" on an Erotic poem...Fabric of After Dark Obsessions

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

a collage of all things broken by vampiredust

for me... it was like shopping for jeans,
at The Gap

I like the look! <grin

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

a poet and his brush? Think again...
painting poems by steve porter

have a quality week! (~_~)
 
Tuesday, Excellent and Fair

To anyone that was discouraged from writing poetry last week because I mentioned a few clunkers, I sincerely hope you'll reconsider. However, in the pursuit of clarity, hearing there were clunkers always makes me want to write, so perhaps I made an assumption about some of the other authors. In any event:

There were precious few clunkers this week, mostly very nice work, but only one poem kicked my ass and took my name. That would be cunt by sweetjain. Good God Damn, girl can write. Cheers, indeed.

Please run your mouse over today's charming offerings and send feedback. Have a great Wednesday, all.
 
Wednesday's Review

.


Thank you Specs for your Tuesday work. Tis a lovely Wednesday already, in fact. And there are only 7 pieces posted. Tough to pick and choose when they're all so good. Let's see what we can find...

ZoieDoulos starts the list off watching her lover and Master as he sleeps in I count.

Welcome echoes_s to Lit. Her premiere poem, zephrys scream, is a fitting piece in keeping with next Tuesday's festivities. Not being familiar with every poet here at Lit, it seems I misspoke. echoes_s is an established personage and is just starting over; so let's just welcome her new iteration.

illustr8rrr has an interesting piece in The Merry Band of Misfits which, I swear, sounds like it's inspired by and for the Oakland Raiders.

tungtied2u offers up a chilling piece in Judgement Room. Could even be an interesting metaphor for the doctor as God, delivering the bad news. My favorite piece of the lot.

Scott N. Leavitt has an illustrated piece, Yin & Yang sure to resonate with some of Art's fans.

Finally, MistressJett has a pair out today. You must check out her Heat and This is a love poem. if you're a fan of her poetry.

Okay, I got a bit carried away today and listed 'em all. Go ahead and do the same. It won't take all that long! Enjoy.

.
 
Last edited:
Thursday, Far to Go

Y'all, I hate titles. Hate 'em. They're the cherry on top of the cake of writing's inherent difficulty. You go through the process of crafting something lovely in the hopes of making someone's day (or for whatever reason, I don't know why you do things), and then you have to sum up your little entity's theme and purpose in a word or phrase. It drives me insane. It's like when someone asks you to describe your piece in twenty-five words or less. I wrote it because I couldn't just explain myself with a summary, dude, back off. Titles suck, coming up with them sucks, and living with them really, really sucks.

But enough about my issues. The reason I bring this up is because one of the best poems today has a bad title. And the only reason I bring that up is because several people have commented on it under the piece. I want the author to know that I sympathize with the pain in the ass titles can be, and to assure him not to worry too much, because his work rocks certifiably. The writing is elegant, intelligent, and concise to the point of being arousing. The poem's not even erotic and I got a little hot. Anyway, please be so kind as to read bitter sweet sorrow by steve porter. You'll feel good about yourself afterwards, I promise.

There's a deliciously nasty little piece called I Love being the Farmer's Daughter by AnAmericanDarling. The sense of humor is what nails it, pun very much intended.

Have an excellent Friday, all. And don't worry about titles. A good poem with a bad title is without question better than its opposite.

Specs
 
Dunno who does the reviwing today but I'm gonna barge in an point y'all towards Man Ray's illustrated ...first impressions anyway.

I usually shy away from rhyming couplets, but here it's presented in style wthout ever feeling forced or trite. Give it a look-see.
 
I'm not sure how many poems were posted today in the second go 'round. But I want to make you all aware that at least one <shameless plug>The Lexicon was posted later this morning </shameless plug>. So, remember everyone :p.. sometimes it pays to check the New Poems for the 35plus submissions that the powers that be may be slipping by us ;).

Yes I know The Lexicon is my own poem.
 
New Poem Reviews

39 poems arise this day...

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
First poem of 38 more to follow...

5FU by oregon_gal ... also ...
men in chat rooms

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I agree with Liar, this illustrated poem is well worth the... viewing <grin
first impressions by ManRay

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

There are not enough words to describe... The Lexigon by champagne1982

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I enjoyed this poem's perspectives...
I am Glass by fallenfromgrace

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Prophacy by ShinigamiSama ... I enjoyed reading this poet. Also this poet's other poem ....Undisputed Impossibility ... both make for some interesting reading (~_*)

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~`

New Poems List ... there are many poems to endulge in this Saturday ... read, comment and enjoy!
 
Last edited:
The Sunday Review

Only 3 new poems up so far today

None has got my attention, i'll check later if more have appeared
 
Tuesday: All Hallowed

Happy Halloween, everyone, and happy new poems review! If you're so inclined, I am now accepting gifts of Peeps and candy corn.

If sugary gifts aren't your thing, than please read the new poems and lend some feedback. Make sure you stop and see At dawn I watched by MinorMonster.

Have a wonderful evening of costumes and juvenile delinquency.
 
You must log in or register to reply here.

Similar threads

42BelowsBack
POETRY. LINKED READINGS ONLY THREAD
2
Replies
31
Views
433
Waeponwifestre
Waeponwifestre
I
New Poems Publication
Replies
2
Views
95
SmilingLez
SmilingLez
Angeline
It's the 2026 Poem-a-Week Challenge (This is a *poems only* thread.)
5 6 7
Replies
155
Views
4K
Ash999
A
Angeline
PSA (Poetry Service Announcement)
Replies
6
Views
416
Ash999
A
Angeline
It's the 2026 Revise-a-Poem Challenge (Comments welcome!)
3 4 5
Replies
102
Views
2K
Waeponwifestre
Waeponwifestre
Back
Top