LIDiver
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Thank you. I must admit, it’s been years since English class and unfortunately I never took a writing class.
Would you be kind enough to give me a couple specific examples?
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Would you be kind enough to give me a couple specific examples?
Priscilla_June
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So far the reception of The Barbarian: A Princess’ Fantasy Has been great! But readership has been slow, despite being in the Geek Pride event. Would love for everyone to give it a read!
HawkerPenn
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Today in 'Illustrated Poetry', my submission "Penny's Pose for a Vargas Salute" has been published. I hope you'll enjoy it. Penny is asked to pose for a picture that's too big, in a swimsuit that's too small, but it all ends up just right... 
https://literotica.com/p/pennys-pose-for-a-vargas-salute
https://literotica.com/p/pennys-pose-for-a-vargas-salute
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JuanSeiszFitzHall
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Posted today in Mature is “Kate and Hal in an Empty Nest.”
https://literotica.com/s/kate-and-hal-in-an-empty-nest
It’s about a married couple in their forties. Their son has moved out of the house to start classes at a faraway college. The spouses explore whether, and how, they can use the new freedom in their domicile to recharge their libidos. The couple is F+M, American, and generally prosperous (they can afford a house, after all). Some of their background is filled in through flashbacks. The sex is generally vanilla, but a bit adventurous. The story is about 9100 words. Enjoy!
https://literotica.com/s/kate-and-hal-in-an-empty-nest
It’s about a married couple in their forties. Their son has moved out of the house to start classes at a faraway college. The spouses explore whether, and how, they can use the new freedom in their domicile to recharge their libidos. The couple is F+M, American, and generally prosperous (they can afford a house, after all). Some of their background is filled in through flashbacks. The sex is generally vanilla, but a bit adventurous. The story is about 9100 words. Enjoy!
LIDiver
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Today in 'Illustrated Poetry', my submission "Penny's Pose for a Vargas Salute" has been published. I hope you'll enjoy it. Penny is asked to pose for a picture that's too big, in a swimsuit that's too small, but it all ends up just right...
https://literotica.com/p/pennys-pose-for-a-vargas-salute
It was short, fun, and hot. Loved it.Today in 'Illustrated Poetry', my submission "Penny's Pose for a Vargas Salute" has been published. I hope you'll enjoy it. Penny is asked to pose for a picture that's too big, in a swimsuit that's too small, but it all ends up just right...
https://literotica.com/p/pennys-pose-for-a-vargas-salute
BobbyandtheCabin
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Asleep in the Log Cabin Ch.01
Hi all. This is my new short story about a woman fellating and pleasing a sleeping man with her long silky hair.
I love a great head of hair more than the average, and have always had a kink for the idea of a woman getting off on my cock while I sleep (or pretend to).
This was an exciting story for me to write, and would love for others to enjoy it too.
Thank you <3
Asleep in the Log Cabin Ch.01
Hi all. This is my new short story about a woman fellating and pleasing a sleeping man with her long silky hair.
I love a great head of hair more than the average, and have always had a kink for the idea of a woman getting off on my cock while I sleep (or pretend to).
This was an exciting story for me to write, and would love for others to enjoy it too.
Thank you <3
Asleep in the Log Cabin Ch.01
Cacatua_Galerita
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Marching in March
Fetish. 5.1k words.
My second Lit story is about an Australian lesbian travelling home from the Sydney Pride March (which was on the 5th March this year).
A foot-fetish story with some humour (also note I’m spelling with Australian English for this story, due to the setting, but American readers should find some ‘humor’ in it too).
Fetish. 5.1k words.
My second Lit story is about an Australian lesbian travelling home from the Sydney Pride March (which was on the 5th March this year).
A foot-fetish story with some humour (also note I’m spelling with Australian English for this story, due to the setting, but American readers should find some ‘humor’ in it too).
Capt_Roger
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The Initiation (Full version)
Took my earlier 750 word submission and decided to flesh it out. Also welcoming any suggestions on whether it needs a part II and if so which direction it should go in...
Took my earlier 750 word submission and decided to flesh it out. Also welcoming any suggestions on whether it needs a part II and if so which direction it should go in...
Rob_Royale
with cheese
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The Colonel's Wife - my very first LW tale. So far it's been pretty well received.
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OlderFitterWiser
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I'm a beginner writer.
I have just written a story about a Teenager sharing his wild teenage girlfriend with an older man in the 80's.
It's called 1985 & it's awaiting publication in the loving wives section under the tag; 'Sharing.'
It is losely based on truth.
A previous version of my story was rejected, due to common beginner errors.
I hope it's published and the readers enjoy it.
OlderFitterWiser.
I have just written a story about a Teenager sharing his wild teenage girlfriend with an older man in the 80's.
It's called 1985 & it's awaiting publication in the loving wives section under the tag; 'Sharing.'
It is losely based on truth.
A previous version of my story was rejected, due to common beginner errors.
I hope it's published and the readers enjoy it.
OlderFitterWiser.
dmallord
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Hello everyone,
Lit posted my latest 49th work. It is a search for justice - vigilante style. It involves an ex-soldier turned accountant sleuthing out details for a ninja justice seeker under the guise of an FBI agent. It quickly becomes a rescue mission. Medium story size 15.5k. I'd appreciate your feedback, please.
The Swarm - Unraveling the Shadows of Trafficking
Lit posted my latest 49th work. It is a search for justice - vigilante style. It involves an ex-soldier turned accountant sleuthing out details for a ninja justice seeker under the guise of an FBI agent. It quickly becomes a rescue mission. Medium story size 15.5k. I'd appreciate your feedback, please.
The Swarm - Unraveling the Shadows of Trafficking
SoCalAshley
Wine, don't whine
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My latest story just posted:
https://www.literotica.com/s/pirates-cove-1
The story is about the first time I go to a clothing-optional beach and that leads to my love of exhibition.
https://www.literotica.com/s/pirates-cove-1
The story is about the first time I go to a clothing-optional beach and that leads to my love of exhibition.
Pabiporffor
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https://www.literotica.com/s/watch-with-mother-1
Lowri sits at a table with mother and granny to watch live sex acts during a hen party. Will any of them do more than just watch?
Lowri sits at a table with mother and granny to watch live sex acts during a hen party. Will any of them do more than just watch?
ElectricBlue
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We Deliver All Things - Shaving Jenny
A continuation of a series where the brash, audacious Jenny gets with Alice and Alex for some fetish hair play.
A continuation of a series where the brash, audacious Jenny gets with Alice and Alex for some fetish hair play.
Pabiporffor
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https://literotica.com/s/awkward-anal
A heart warming story. Emma 18 learns she has a medical condition that can only be cured with weekly anal sex. Problem is she has anxiety. Can her parent's build her sexual confidence and get her the life saving anal ploughing she needs?
A heart warming story. Emma 18 learns she has a medical condition that can only be cured with weekly anal sex. Problem is she has anxiety. Can her parent's build her sexual confidence and get her the life saving anal ploughing she needs?
Hot summer of '22
This is my first story!
It is about a 25 year old man who want to go on a vacation after to corona lockdowns.
He brings his friend, his younger and older sister, and a female friend.
The story opens up slowly, with light flashing and oral sex, without any direct brother-sister action (yet). The oral gets interrupted twice.
The main characters get more and more open about their bodies and sex life during their vacation.
I am working on part 2, where the real action gets going.
This is my first story!
It is about a 25 year old man who want to go on a vacation after to corona lockdowns.
He brings his friend, his younger and older sister, and a female friend.
The story opens up slowly, with light flashing and oral sex, without any direct brother-sister action (yet). The oral gets interrupted twice.
The main characters get more and more open about their bodies and sex life during their vacation.
I am working on part 2, where the real action gets going.
LIDiver
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good luck!
SoCalAshley
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I wanted to try writing my first poem for Literotica. I picked a subject I still struggle with today. Catholic guilt is that subject. Please let me know what you think.
https://www.literotica.com/p/today-24
https://www.literotica.com/p/today-24
LIDiver
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Wow, Ash, well done. Got some emotion out of me.
My only criticism was that you told us the subject, might have been more surprising/moving without knowing that.
alohadave
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KomradeErotika
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An Adventurer's Education
Hi everyone. I've been an active writer posting on other sites for some time, but I've made the jump over to Literotica.
The first story I'm posting here is a fantasy adventure tale about a new adventurer learning the profession, and all the trouble she gets in along the way. It's about 10% lit and 90% erotica, close in spirit to Alexis Flower's wonderful I Roved Out comic. I know that's not everyone's cup of tea, but it's what I like.
I first wrote this story as a challenge to keep each chapter under 5000 words and to knock out each first draft in one sitting, so they're shorts. Three chapters out of ten published so far, with a sequel series in the works!
Hi everyone. I've been an active writer posting on other sites for some time, but I've made the jump over to Literotica.
The first story I'm posting here is a fantasy adventure tale about a new adventurer learning the profession, and all the trouble she gets in along the way. It's about 10% lit and 90% erotica, close in spirit to Alexis Flower's wonderful I Roved Out comic. I know that's not everyone's cup of tea, but it's what I like.
I first wrote this story as a challenge to keep each chapter under 5000 words and to knock out each first draft in one sitting, so they're shorts. Three chapters out of ten published so far, with a sequel series in the works!
Meeting Laura Again
A sequel to Meeting Laura. I developed the characters in the original a little more than I usually do, and wanted to know what they'd do next.
A sequel to Meeting Laura. I developed the characters in the original a little more than I usually do, and wanted to know what they'd do next.
TricksterEnigma
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My first story on Literotica is a mixture of reality and believable fantasy. A husband seeks to expand a fetish for his wife going braless in sheer tops to exhibiting her to other men in public. A weekend away to escape mundane stresses provides the spark of opportunity.
https://literotica.com/s/showing-off-sharon-ch-01
https://literotica.com/s/showing-off-sharon-ch-01
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