Charlotte_Sin
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- Jul 8, 2023
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That's actually some really good advice about the life experience ones thank you.You had me at "depraved nun". The story was WAY too short, it was such a little tease. Some typos and punctuation issues, but when you switch to a PC that should fix itself. I think you've got some writing chops and you should certainly continue. As for sticking with it, or moving on to a new subject, this depraved nun lover has an opinion, but it's ultimately your decision.
On the subject of real-life encounters, I recommend you still write them as a standard story. Stories that feel autobiographical can come off as the writer bragging and might not do very well. But your results may vary.
Welcome to LitE. I think you'll do fine.
As far as the shortness of the story I kind of wanted to get a feel for people's interest in it before committing to putting down more time on the ideas. Bc I do have a lot in mind for those 2....