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[jtmalone70]

Newest Story

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[Mad Lews]

New story feedback?

Hi, I'm still learning my way about this site. I posted a new story last week.
"The Things We Do for Love"
http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=201810
a BDSM story of a couple's anniversary gift and how things don't always work out the way you plan.
I've gotten a lot of hits, a few votes but very little in the way of comments or feedback. Is that normal?
First story I posted in May got fewer hits ,votes, and 1 public comment.
Anyone willing to take the time to read and comment either publicly or anonymously would be appreciated.
Mad Lews

 

[windstormy]

Bigrig Ch. 16/ New chapter

Bigrig Ch. 16 is the lull before the storm. I do hope that as you read it you percieve the imminent threat. And I do hope it prepares you for it. Or will it leave you hopelessly vulnerable to Mr. James Bowman himself. lol Wickedly, might I add. hehehe..........

 

[dcraig]

Bigrig Ch. 16 is the lull before the storm. I do hope that as you read it you percieve the imminent threat. And I do hope it prepares you for it. Or will it leave you hopelessly vulnerable to Mr. James Bowman himself. lol Wickedly, might I add. hehehe..........

lmao... Billy.... You are full of it tonight, aren't you? lol. And I so loved this chapter for it's humor and comic relief. Plus, the scene with Bruce was so gentle and loving. Very good. I like your idea of stress relief. haha

 

[Basin City]

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=203739

non-erotic story.
Read, comment, praise, insult, enjoy.

 

[DekeJeffery]

The Deal - Chapter 1

Thanks in advance for reading. I welcome feedback for any of my stories sent directly to me through the site (rather than clog up a thread).

 

[Amy Sweet]

Nicole is an artist, and a sexual free spirit, but her mother wants her to settle down and have children. Nicole knows that's not the life she wants, but beyond that, she doesn't seem to know what she does want out of life. Through a series of sexual adventures that go from sensual to deviant, she finds her own answers and a life of Imperfect Beauty

A novel by Amy Sweet

Available in 2 formats- complete novel, or chapter by chapter.

Feedback, votes, criticisms, and fanletters are all welcome and eagerly hoped for.

I have a discussion thread here:
https://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?p=13024035#post13024035

 

[Princess_Of_Darkness]

New literotica author

I'm new to literotica and so far, though I have several waiting for approval, I have one story with audio and two poems with audio posted. If you more seasoned authors don't mind checking them out, any constructive criticism is HIGHLY welcomed. I want to grow as a writer, and I figured there's no better way to do that than to be constructively criticized by people who know what they're doing.

The Power Is My Own http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=203945

Own Me http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=203937

I Miss You http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=203939

Thanks!

 

[dcraig]

Story For Feedback/Bigrig Ch. 17

Folks, you've got to read this chapter. It is one of the best climactic chapters I've read in so very long. Yes, I'm posting for Billy, who is not able to do so at the moment. I read the chapter and am absolutely thrilled.

I finally got to meet Mr. Bowman. A most incredible bad guy, if I've ever met one. His wicked mind will pull you in and leave you breathing a little heavy and wanting to be his by the time he's finished. I loved him. I hated him. What can I say.

As for the rest of the chapter, if you've been keeping up with this novel and miss this, you have missed out. If you haven't been keeping up with it, and miss this, you'll miss out. Just go read it. I promise you'll love it.

Bigrig Ch. 17

P.S. For those of you who failed to notice when you opened the chapter, at the top left hand corner of the page, (near the title), this chapter was submitted, approved and posted under the Gay Male Category. If you find this type of material offensive, please do not go there, read it, then leave grossly unwarrented negative comments, (attacking Billy as a person, his work, and his morals), at the bottom of the last page. Thank you.

 

[Glysereen]

are you into rough anal play?

if you are, then i'm hoping you'll like my story...... check it out:

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=204247

please, please -- no grammar pointers. if i missed a comma, or whatever, that's how it is..... i wrote it fast, and i don't feel like going over it with a fine tooth comb.

did it make you hot? did you cum? did you think about it the next day? that's what i'd like to know....
thanks,
glysereen

 

[~hellbaby~]

First time in SCI_FI

reposted

 

[athena_by_night]

3rd chapter.... there's another somewhere

Hey All~

3rd chapter is out.. let me know what you think please...

 

[dcraig]

Malicious Feedback

It truly saddens me that there are those that cannot abide by the golden rule. It was my belief that this site was a safe haven for artists who work terribly hard to put out good readable material. A place where these artists can come for support and CONSTRUCTIVE critisism.

I would never have dreamed that some of those that frequent this site would be so cold and heartless as to bash a very tenderhearted and loving young man, as three of you have. And you know who you are. You did not even have the fortitude to leave your name, or a contact address. Instead, you deliberately hid behind the Label of Anonymous.

And for that matter, you three, have no idea what you are talking about, in terms of Billy as a person. And I will not even attempt to counter your comments about him with my own about you. In other words, I won't do to you, what you have done to him. I only hope that no one else falls prey to your malicious words in the future.

 

[dcraig]

Hey All~

3rd chapter is out.. let me know what you think please...

What I think is that I truly am enjoying this story. Each chapter is building to an incredible enthralling love affair between the Master and his fiery companion. And now that she is seeing her true need and desire for him, it is becoming a most powerful tale.

I also find it very intriguing that you have added a new character. I am most interested to see what role he will play in this continuing saga.

 

[c3dlc2]

http://www.*********/c3dlc2/jamais-surpris.com/.dtc

 

[~hellbaby~]

I made this cool little picture link to my new story, A New World. The idea for the story came from a picture that was posted a while back in a thread about exploding IUD's; it was a sort of tampon with a needle sticking out of it. The story is about the aftermath of coming in contact with such a thing if it ever really existed.

http://www.geocities.com/clipart/pbi/pictures/Photos_Space/auroraaustralisandshuttletrail.jpg

 

[JamesSD]

New Story that needs some love

I have a new story up that isn't quite getting the quantity of reads and votes I hope for.

Long Distance Longing is a short, fun little story about a woman who buys a webcam to inspire her boyfriend sexually during a two month separation. It's in "Toys and Masturbation" which probably accounts for the slow response. I also probably should have given it a more eyecatching title and description.

It's sweet, it's sexy and involves a woman stripping and masturbating for her man. What more could you ask for?

Oh, and Another Reunion With an Ex Ch.03 is up, in case anyone enjoyed my first two chapters and missed my posting

 

[windstormy]

It truly saddens me that there are those that cannot abide by the golden rule. It was my belief that this site was a safe haven for artists who work terribly hard to put out good readable material. A place where these artists can come for support and CONSTRUCTIVE critisism.

I would never have dreamed that some of those that frequent this site would be so cold and heartless as to bash a very tenderhearted and loving young man, as three of you have. And you know who you are. You did not even have the fortitude to leave your name, or a contact address. Instead, you deliberately hid behind the Label of Anonymous.

And for that matter, you three, have no idea what you are talking about, in terms of Billy as a person. And I will not even attempt to counter your comments about him with my own about you. In other words, I won't do to you, what you have done to him. I only hope that no one else falls prey to your malicious words in the future.

Ummm....... Craig, my dear friend, what did I miss? What happened? What three anonymous comments? You must have deleted them. *sigh* I guess the chapter wasn't that good, huh? So, what now? I worked so hard to develope that character and make him as real as possible. The entire chapter I slaved over. Damnit! Or did I just get hit with some preachers?

 

[~hellbaby~]

I have a new story up that isn't quite getting the quantity of reads and votes I hope for.

Long Distance Longing is a short, fun little story about a woman who buys a webcam to inspire her boyfriend sexually during a two month separation. It's in "Toys and Masturbation" which probably accounts for the slow response. I also probably should have given it a more eyecatching title and description.

It's sweet, it's sexy and involves a woman stripping and masturbating for her man. What more could you ask for?

Oh, and Another Reunion With an Ex Ch.03 is up, in case anyone enjoyed my first two chapters and missed my posting

Cute story! Just RVC'd it.

 

[JamesSD]

oh!

Cute story! Just RVC'd it.

RVC = Read, Voted, and Commented! I just figured it out!!!! (took me oh, 2 months since seeing it the first time)

Thanks!

 

[Bacteriophage68]

....,.,.,

several together stretch wood, dead duty decision now rhythm court, delicious face addition my that particular summer prairie hospital run? center climbing steps dont ready!

 

[athena_by_night]

New Story Adverisments

Okay.... think this is the last of them.... you responded everywhere Billy! LOL All of it is tremendous and at some point I will be rereading it all for the sheer enjoyment of your characterizations, plot lines and the depth of your explorations... Bravo!

And Craig.... you have moved up to experienced! LOL

Marie

 

[MagicFingers]

Newest chapter released

Summer Of Discovery Ch.07
in Incest category
http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=204896
The twins have sex in the lake with their friends, and, later, try something new!
Thanks,
MF

 

[~hellbaby~]

RVC = Read, Voted, and Commented! I just figured it out!!!! (took me oh, 2 months since seeing it the first time)

Thanks!

Thats OK, it's the first time I ever used it, took me a while too. I started reading your post and saw the' RVC' and thought I put them in the wrong order or something so I felt much better when I read it. (Took me a while to figure out 'bump' too)

 

[windstormy]

Bigrig Conclusion/Ch. 18

Bigrig Ch. 18 is my conclusion to this novel. I hope you all enjoy it. Would like to hear some feedback on it, pls. It is in the Gay Male Cat. So, if this type of material is offensive to you, pls bypass it. Thanks.

I've had a lot of fun presenting this to all of you. And you all have been so very good to me. Thanks for all your support in every way. I'm thinking about my next venture. I still have that dare to uphold. So, I should get on with that maybe as my next project. And everyone that sent me their sympathies due to the loss of my father, thanks. I really appreciate it. It means a lot to me. But now, maybe I can go on and do some more healing, now that he's gone.