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My first story on Literotica

URL: http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=210572

Blurb: Couple arrives in town to prepare for special weekend.

Tags: bdsm oral - bdsm romance - knife fight - rough sex - strong but submissive woman - protecting a lover - master and slave - shopping in adult store

Notes: Story is light on sex, as it is the opening chapter of a longer story. Chapter features light age play.

Feedback appreciated. :) Thanks!
 
Knight_Errant said:
URL: http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=210572

Blurb: Couple arrives in town to prepare for special weekend.

Tags: bdsm oral - bdsm romance - knife fight - rough sex - strong but submissive woman - protecting a lover - master and slave - shopping in adult store

Notes: Story is light on sex, as it is the opening chapter of a longer story. Chapter features light age play.

Feedback appreciated. :) Thanks!
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personally not big on stories written to " you".....well done, otherwise
 
We recently completed a very short chain based on the children's rhyme "Tuesday's Child." I'm sure everyone would appreciate reads and comments, since chain stories seem to be overlooked quite often.

Dance of Days, Ch. 01: Monday's Child, by Sexxy Vixen

Dance of Days, Ch. 02: Tuesday's Child, by Goldeniangel

Dance of Days, Ch. 03: Wednesday's Child, by cloudy

Dance of Days, Ch. 04: Thursday's Child, by McKenna

Dance of Days, Ch. 05: Friday's Child, by Remec

Dance of Days, Ch. 06: Saturday's Child, by Dranoel

Dance of Days, Ch. 07: Sunday's Child, by Colleen Thomas
 
:)

sirhugs said:
a guy? a girl? sex? what...no bunny slippers?
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lol :D
Well, maybe "Slipping" it into a "Bunny"?
OK, it's about an encounter in the IT field between two not-so nerd types.
Based on an actual fantasy. :catgrin:
 
HornyHenry said:
lol :D
Well, maybe "Slipping" it into a "Bunny"?
OK, it's about an encounter in the IT field between two not-so nerd types.
Based on an actual fantasy. :catgrin:
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as opposed to a fake fantasy?
 
Hey! I finally wrote some new porn. (There's a link in my sig line below)
It is the story of La, the Virgin Queen of the Beast Men of Opar, her capture and torture at the hands of her traitorous handmaiden Kesh, and her subsequent rescue by The Jungle Lord. Whips and chains and forced shaving and lions and apes and seduction and raw, jungle romance.

Give it a read. Comments are most welcome.
:rose:

http://www.erbzine.com/mag9/ffta2.jpg
 
I have a new story up. It's a NON erotic written as a tribute to my Mom. If you have time I would appreciate if anyone could give it a read and let me know what you think.

Thanks!
Lilin

Chin Up
 
A gentle request

Hello folk...

It's great to see a place where a writer can make a plea for feedback. Looking at this list, though, it would seem daunting to read every tale and give it the consideration it deserves. To top it, here I am, an unknown on these boards and from the eyes of any of you, simply another faceless request.

I would love to have feedback. Good, bad, ugly... whatever comes to mind. Having said that, I know many of you (if not most) will be a little hesitant to wade through something that might not be your cup of tea. Only so many hours in a day, right?

Here, then, is a brief overview of the small series that I'm building:
  • It's centered around a couple that's on the verge of taking their relationship to the next level – in several ways, not the least of which is sexual.
  • It has a huge amount of character building and scene set-up. They are not stroke stories. I appreciate the short/sweet ones, but that's not the style I write. The "action" scenes are sensual, psychological and (I'm hoping) hot.
  • Their sexual exploration isn't all that exotic but I'm hoping it's fairly erotic. The subjects range, so far, from exhibition to multiple partners. It will eventually touch on her bisexuality in the next installment... and part of what I'd like to do is to get feedback on the posted stories to see if my current project is heading in the right direction.
    ...Yes, I have my own story to tell, but I think I can keep the integrity of the story while still giving a nod to the needs of the audience.
  • The characters aren't physically perfect – I don't believe such a thing exists – but they're definitely attractive. This has ups and downs...
  • Too often have I read sex that simply wasn't sexy. I'm hoping I don't fall into the same traps. I'm hoping that some of you can tell me if I'm on the right track.
Thanks for taking the time to read this post and I hope you're inspired to at least peek at the little list of stories I've built:

Wilson's Stories

~Wilson
 
Want to join the fray?

Hi All!

Whoop de doo! "Live Chicken Sandwich" was posted today and has already garnered 4 public comments for which I thank everybody...

...especially the person (good old Anonymous) who started it all with his eloquent complaint!

All are welcome to join the fray, and perhaps, hopefully, enjoy the story too!

"Live Chicken Sandwich" (Lesbian)
 
Nude Beach Bride 2 is obviously a sequel. In part 1 Seth and his bride Gaby arrive at a nudist resort for their honeymoon. This is all set up by their Maid of Honour. Gaby is a bit prudish. She tells Seth she will go nude on National Nude Day , Thursday, only if they don't consumate the marriage until then, and of course, he is not to have sex at all! This leads to all sorts of sex play, as Gaby loosens up. Part 2 continues with the events of the Tuesday, hopefully building the intensity, but maintaining a hint of plausibility, with a bit of a twist ending. Part 3 is slowly growing in draft.
 
Another first story...

I have a back log of pieces that I have written, I was somewhat dubious about posting here. Aafter the response I recieved for the several poems I shared already I also picked one of my less favorite stories to throw out there.

One of those Days in the Office.
http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=213668

Comments, feedback welcome and appreciated. I'm looking to improve my writing style, form, ability to hold readers attention, not be precocious.

Thanks to those who have voted on the story and the poems and provided feedback.
 
I have two stories that went live today.

Kelly's Story is my first attempt at a non-consent story, as well as my first attempt at writing a story from a woman's point of view.

The Letter is my first attempt at writing a lesbian story.

Any and all feedback (particularly constructive criticism) is welcome, although if sent, please send via email, as I am not on the forum that often.

Thank you, and I hope you enjoy the stories, should you read them.
 
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