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[dr_mabeuse]

I've been playing a lot with the idea that the things people do sexually are expressions of how they feel towards each other--passion leads to rough, hot sex; love gives sweet, gentle sex; oral expresses complicated power games (are you giving or receiving? Who's in control?), etc. etc.

I applied this idea to a 3-way encounter, where everyone is looking to get something different out of the sex. The result is "Crossroads", and the story can be found here:

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=215377

Comments are always welcomed.

--Zoot

 

[Barnaby]

My Wife's New Story!

DARK DESIRES: FIRST BLOOD

Since I began writing for Lit a few years back, I have mentored several of my friends to do the same. Kavanaugh, Dani Meadows and NatalieRose are all "discoveries" of mine. Now my lovely bride of 14 years enters the arena under the name Mystical Folds with her vampire story DARK DESIRES:FIRST BLOOD. Already performing amazingly well, she intends it to be the first of a series dealing with a young Victorian woman obsessed with having sex with different occult creatures. Give it a look.
Oh, if you like my own somewhat light-hearted style this one is very different.
I did edit and do a rewrite for her(My co-credit fell off the story on its way to the net) , fluffing up the "romantic" style but steadfastly avoiding turning it into a "Barnaby" story. As for myself, I've actually been quite prolific lately, just need to polish a few things and I'll be back! In the meantime, give in to DARK DESIRES!
Barnaby

 

[dammit51]

Mother Knows Best kicks ass!

HI all,

I'm dammit51 and I just wanted to thank you all for your feedback. Most of you were shocked and appalled but that is what I was going for(or course SOME of you liked it...sick puppies ). The whole premise of the story (and for that matter my biggest kink) is about the willing and non-willing surrender of power.

I've reveresed the traditional gender roles in the story and threw in some abuse and I think i've created a unique character and potential ongoing story line. If you haven't yet, check it out. And keep that feedback coming!

 

[Teela]

I've got a new story up:

The Sofa. It's a short but intense tale of sex, bondage and livingroom furniture. I hope it has the desired effect! Feedback welcome.

It's in the Erotic Couplings section here: http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=215853

Thanks so much!

Teela

 

[Lloyd2004]

Well I have a story....would love some feedback.......

 

[Grave clown]

My first submission

Here's a story about a girl making her way in a world of monsters. The setting is Fantasy, in the realm of swords and sorcery. The sex starts out pretty normal, but may delve into non-conscent, non-human, incest with many possibilities. Please rate and post comment. I would really like to know what others think. Thanks in advance.

Villains- Sci-Fi & Fantasy

http://english.literotica.com:81/stories/showstory.php?id=213919

 

[hitemrealhard]

I need your input

I have written a new story that centers around the taking of a snobby black stripper. I want to know how all of you like or dislike the story.

The Big Payback -NonConsent Reluctance

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=216032

 

[Barnaby]

Long Awaited Sequel!

Purple Passions or "Dye Another Day" One of my most popular pieces on LIT is PURPLE DAZE or "I'd Dye For You", written and published last summer after I had helped my friend NatalieRose (check out her story, BREACH OF SECURITY on Lit!) dye her hair purple. Nat had pressed for a sequel for some time. I suggested she write it and gave her my permission but that never materialized. In July, a now bright pink coiffed Nat came down to visit and we met up with Meg (see my INTERVIEW PROJECT 3), my muse for so many of my stories and had a delightful dinner out filled with dirty conversation. Suddenly I was inspired. What if we revisited the couple from DAZE and they met up with a visiting friend? It's hot, it's funny and I hope you enjoy it!
Thanks!
Barnaby
PS-Reminder-Also check out my WIFE's first story on LIT, DARK DESIRES-FIRST BLOOD!

 

[and so.]

my first attempt at a story.

hello all, just thought i would post the link to my story here. as it's my first, i would appreciate some feedback so i can be sure of my direction, or something along those lines. so, please read it if you feel so inclined.

thank you.

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=217186

 

[The Mutt]

Read my new story Sister Oatlash which blows the lid off the Vatican's secret war on kinky sex!

http://www.rossetta.com/wnun5.jpg

 

[sirhugs]

My Nude Beach Bride Ch 3 has started out slowly. I got one Anon flame feedback, so maybe I got 1 bombed, but my experience is that sequels billed as chapters , while getting fewer reads, get higher votes.

This story, for those who haven't read the prior chapters, is a direct continuation . It is a honeymoon. The maid of honour tricked bride into goingto a nude resort. She is shy, and refuses consummation, as part of a bet with hubby. If he waits until Thursday, National Nude Day, to have sex, she will go nude that day. Each day/chapter builds the tension ( I hope), and the sexual antics. Chapter 1 did very well, Ch 2 did okay....

Any theories or comments?

 

[The Mutt]

I've got 15 quick votes on Sister Oatlash ( which I appreciate ) but no comments. C'mon folks, tell me what you think. Please?

 

[rmaitland]

I'm excited! I got my first three stories approved

They are all quite short ones (<1000 words) so they're a quick read and to the point . I would love to hear your feedback on my page! I will be writing some more very shortly.
http://www.literotica.com:81/stories/memberpage.php?uid=388615

Have a great weekend!

 

[Lloyd2004]

I've got 15 quick votes on Sister Oatlash ( which I appreciate ) but no comments. C'mon folks, tell me what you think. Please?

It is much easier to vote than leave comments, and you need passwords and such so they just vote, I guess that you can get some sort of impression by the number of votes and the score as to what they like and don't like.

 

[Lloyd2004]

They are all quite short ones (<1000 words) so they're a quick read and to the point . I would love to hear your feedback on my page! I will be writing some more very shortly.
http://www.literotica.com:81/stories/memberpage.php?uid=388615

Have a great weekend!

I read your first story "A Long hot Summer Night", I quite liked it, you should have used the following addy to send us to the story list though!

http://english.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=388615&page=submissions

Thanks for the story: do continue, your style is good.
Lloyd

 

[Lloyd2004]

hello all, just thought i would post the link to my story here. as it's my first, i would appreciate some feedback so i can be sure of my direction, or something along those lines. so, please read it if you feel so inclined.

thank you.

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=217186

I loved your story, very cute and sexy..............
do write another

Lloyd
Gee I sent you a rose I hope you are a girl!

 

[rmaitland]

Thanks

Hey lloyd, thanks for the feedback!

 

[Dr_Damour]

Love the words of Love baby

Just discovering this site so this will be the first story that i post. At the moment i am learning the ropes and am not quite sure what everyone wants/likes. So feedback this story would be greatly appreciated.
The story is called

The Royal Infidels

In the bible it says an eye for an eye. This is the basis for my story. I am not sure how to clas this story as it contains seduction, a sorcerer of great powers, a king, and ,of course, a Queen. The story takes place in the kindom of Dinatia and tells of the woes between Man and Woman.
The language is philosophical to say the least. But do read on!

The Royal Infidels will be posted within the next week!

Keep yer eyes peeled

 

[heaven-whh]

A link is usefull!

Just discovering this site so this will be the first story that i post. At the moment i am learning the ropes and am not quite sure what everyone wants/likes. So feedback this story would be greatly appreciated.
The stroy is called

The Royal Infidels

In the bible it says an eye for an eye. This is the basis for my story. I am not sure how to clas this story as it contains seduction, a sorcerer of great powers, a king, and ,of course, a Queen. The story takes place in the kindom of Dinatia and tells of the woes between Man and Woman.
The language is philosophical to say the least. But do read on!

It would increase your number of readers if you would put a link in your announcement. And you know how it is: More readers is more votes!

 

[sirhugs]

It would increase your number of readers if you would put a link in your announcement. And you know how it is: More readers is more votes!

though more votes is only good if they are good votes

 

[Bill Dada]

It would increase your number of readers if you would put a link in your announcement. And you know how it is: More readers is more votes!

It would also help if the posted story was actually up.

 

[Newstart]

First attempt

"Fun in Paris" (loving wives section) is my first submission.

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=219239

I tried to stay away from the wham, bang, thank you ma'am style and would be pleased to have any feed-back or critique as the sequel is well under way.

Newstart

 

[Guest]

A How To Story

How To Survive A Break Up


This story has now been up for over a week now..... Your probably wondering why I am posting it here.... wellllllllllllll

Short version:
I wrote it from personal extremely recent experience....
The other woman and the 'man' involved have gone in and repeatedly given it "1s" and had a few friends do the same.....

The story after its first three days had been a 4.86 with 25 votes.... something that was completely unheard of for me....

I still think this story is good....I still think it has merit.... and to be brutally honest.... it was my heart that I put into this writing and to have it torn up by the ones that did the actual tearing up really upsets me.....

I guess I am looking for some validation.... something... anything to tell me if it was really good.... or... well you know

Thanks for the help and reading in advance.... always E

 

[JRaven]

How To Survive A Break Up



The other woman and the 'man' involved have gone in and repeatedly given it "1s" and had a few friends do the same.....

Read, commented, and voted on.
Jenny

 

[sirhugs]

How To Survive A Break Up


This story has now been up for over a week now..... Your probably wondering why I am posting it here.... wellllllllllllll

Short version:
I wrote it from personal extremely recent experience....
The other woman and the 'man' involved have gone in and repeatedly given it "1s" and had a few friends do the same.....

The story after its first three days had been a 4.86 with 25 votes.... something that was completely unheard of for me....

I still think this story is good....I still think it has merit.... and to be brutally honest.... it was my heart that I put into this writing and to have it torn up by the ones that did the actual tearing up really upsets me.....

I guess I am looking for some validation.... something... anything to tell me if it was really good.... or... well you know

Thanks for the help and reading in advance.... always E

It crackles with honesty which gives it truth. Though it speaks more to women, it struck even me as valid, as well as validating. It deserves exceptional scores. It is an exceptional contribution to Literotica.