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[Lloyd2004]

How To Survive A Break Up


I guess I am looking for some validation.... something... anything to tell me if it was really good.... or... well you know

It is good Elizabetht..............
Why people should be so petty to give it "1's": I do not understand
you got "5" from me
Lloyd

 

[Guest]

thank you all for reading.... reviewing... voting...
sometimes... it just helps

Always, E

 

[Boratus]

My newest story Making Scents is available. It a story about an awkward scientist who creates a pheromone that makes him irresistable to women. Although this may sound like a straight forward wet dream it has a lot of twists and turns to it and (I hope) a good deal of comedy.

Please have a read and let me know what you think.

Thanks
B.

 

[tension1972]

New Story "An Uncommon Massage"

This is my first story. Would love to have some comments back on this one. This is in the group sex category.

Here is the link to the story (it is long):

http://keyword.netscape.com/ns/boom...pTest=1&remove_url=http://www.literotica.com/

 

[Boratus]

This is my first story. Would love to have some comments back on this one. This is in the group sex category.

Here is the link to the story (it is long):

http://keyword.netscape.com/ns/boom...pTest=1&remove_url=http://www.literotica.com/

your link doesn't work. Wow. I don't know where you could have got it from. It's huge! Here's the proper one: An Uncommon Massage

Now I'll go read it.

 

[tension1972]

The right link for my story

This should be the right link for my story "An Uncommon Massage":

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=220688

Any feedback would be great!

 

[Barnaby]

A Dream So Wet And Dear

A Dream So Wet And Dear
Experiments are always risky and this one is definitely an experiment. Advance readers described it as "seductive" and "romantic" so I put this short little piece in the ROMANCE category. As always, feedback would be
appreciated. Look for a more traditional piece from me as early as next week. I'm also collaborating with my friend Meg (TIP#3) on a bondage story (her idea) that could be really hot!

While I'm here, special thanks to Bill Dada. I'm still trying to find the time to read more of your work. Between my job and the college course I'm taking, I'm also dealing with the fact that both my wife and my best friend just lost their jobs, another family member has cancer and my finances are totally screwed! Sigh.
Continued appreciation to Impressive and Belegon and a special "Hi!" to my new favorite, Lisa Summers!
Thanks!
Barnaby

 

[Angelique Bouchette]

Alicia: Final Chapter Posted!

Hi There!

Chapter 19 (the Conclusion) of my novel, Alicia, has just been posted, for all those readers who like their sex with a good story-line and plenty of action. A hooker gets mixed up with gangsters, murder and drugs, but the new boyfriend is determined to rescue her, at all costs, oh, and with a little help from your friendly neighborhood stripper!

Enjoy,
Angelique

 

[M-Y-Erotica]

A Gift of Tea

Hi all,

I'd love feedback on my story A Gift of Tea.

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=219311

A 30-something woman takes a call at work where the female voice on the other end makes her think of love, fun, and hours and hours with a partner under the sheets. With this memory fresh in her mind, she decides she is going to take a risk and try phone sex for the first time in her life. I always love feedback. Thanks!

 

[and so.]

please take a looky.

well.
i've posted my second story now [this one is in the bdsm category], and would like a bit of feedback for it [if anyone's willing to take a quick peek], i'm a bit worried it may be too drawn out and therefore too long. or, if there are any other problems people can find, i'd love to know. thank you in advance.

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=221071

 

[Varian P]

if you're in the mood for something dark...

...my latest, Awake, has posted.

From one reader:

WOW! I...just stumbled upon this story in the top lists. This was the hottest story I've read in a long time! What'd I'd give for someone to take me like that! Man oh man!

But unless you're in the mood for abduction and forced sex, stay away.

 

[Boratus]

i'm a bit worried it may be too drawn out and therefore too long. or, if there are any other problems people can find, i'd love to know. thank you in advance.

You shouldn't point out what you think are problems because then we're going to be looking for those problems when we read. Consequently, what was fine before may now seem wrong. Let us go in blind and see if we blast you or not.

 

[and so.]

You shouldn't point out what you think are problems because then we're going to be looking for those problems when we read. Consequently, what was fine before may now seem wrong. Let us go in blind and see if we blast you or not.

oh dear. well, let's pretend i've retracted my previous post, and am just asking for people to read it [and nothing else]. i'll sit here and wring my hands in anticipation whilst i wait for the potential blast, shall i? ;p

 

[M-Y-Erotica]

Brand new one

OK, brand new story just out. Two women meet jogging and sparks fly.

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=221631

Love any comments you have as always.

 

[Barnaby]

Me again!

I realize I was just here a week ago with a new piece but I did promise I had a more traditional story coming soon, didn't I? Despite the provactive title,PLEASE TAKE MY PUSSY! is a fun story about two friends whose first sexual encounter together occurs when he refuses to take the kitten she's trying to foist on him.
As often happens, this was inspired by my muse and her real-life attempts to get me to take a kitten sans' sexual favors (unfortunately).
Comments? Votes? Feedback?
Thanks, again to all.
Barnaby

 

[Boratus]

Chapter 7 of my Making Scents saga is now available. Have a gander please.

Making Scents Ch. 07

 

[yesplease8]

Here is my latest story.

It contains, a little bit of control, a lot of male bisexuality, and is typical for my stories.

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=217961

Let me know what you think.

 

[csn61]

csn61's 30 erotic stories..READ and Talk!

Hi friends,

I want you all to visit my page under author name csn61 or go right here:


http://english.literotica.com:81/stories/memberpage.php?uid=19789&page=submissions

I want you to read my long erotic serial story specifically at:

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=155859

waiting with bated breath for all fair and healthy remarks and opinions


Best wishes

NK CS

 

[Unsung Muse]

Be gentle

"A Fissure..."

 

[Lloyd2004]

Be gentle

"A Fissure..."

No need to worry little Muse I liked it a lot!



Lloyd (I voted too!)

 

[sirhugs]

not much gentle about my crossdressing Halloween Dressup tale, but please be gentle about scores.

 

[JBmanly50]

Is there a thread for CHYOO?

I've been developing a story on CHYOO and would like some feedback. I thought that there was a forum for CHYOO on Literotica but I can't find it.

The story is Paint the town if anyone is interested in reading it and giving me feedback

 

[JBmanly50]

well.
i've posted my second story now [this one is in the bdsm category], and would like a bit of feedback for it [if anyone's willing to take a quick peek], i'm a bit worried it may be too drawn out and therefore too long. or, if there are any other problems people can find, i'd love to know. thank you in advance.

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=221071

I peeked and I peaked. nice job.

 

[Varian P]

New Chapter of "Changed Girl"

For anyone following the "Changed Girl" series, a new chapter has just posted, complete with a little something some of you have been awaiting for a long time. Cryptic, eh?

In the words of one kind reader:

Ah... finally...
I have been waiting for that for quite some time.
That was the best fuck words have ever given.

 

[furrybert]

Hunted

Feedback is always appreciated!
Hunted
My first submission to literotica, in the non-consensual section (for good reason folks, if you don't like that sort of thing then please don't click!)

Cheers!