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Brightdawn
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Another new one
New story posted
http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=231754
The first in a series (hopefully) Very short and quick. Let me know what you think, likes/dislikes, any and all comments welcome!
New story posted
http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=231754
The first in a series (hopefully) Very short and quick. Let me know what you think, likes/dislikes, any and all comments welcome!
Woodchuckbdsm
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Just got my first submission posted.
I got my first sub posted today, and it's pretty exciting.
My first public comment wasn't that great, but it's cool. I expect to get better anyway. Six votes and I'm only at 4.12 it's great to see that it is being read and at least appreciated a little.
Just so you dont have to search if you get curious.
http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=231730
I got my first sub posted today, and it's pretty exciting.
My first public comment wasn't that great, but it's cool. I expect to get better anyway. Six votes and I'm only at 4.12 it's great to see that it is being read and at least appreciated a little.
Just so you dont have to search if you get curious.
http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=231730
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Sticking my neck out carefully
to tell everyone my second story was put up today. It's short, I used third person per Sir Hugs suggestion, and tried to smooth out the dialogue a bit from my first story.
Of course after I submitted it about 5 days ago, I read a great "How to" sent to me by Roxanne Appleby and can see a bunch of ways it could be better! (Oh well!)
His Empty Screen
Thank you, CopyCarver, for editing the story!
to tell everyone my second story was put up today. It's short, I used third person per Sir Hugs suggestion, and tried to smooth out the dialogue a bit from my first story.
Of course after I submitted it about 5 days ago, I read a great "How to" sent to me by Roxanne Appleby and can see a bunch of ways it could be better! (Oh well!)
His Empty Screen
Thank you, CopyCarver, for editing the story!
Unsung Muse
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I liked it, MnRider! Nice work.MnRider said:
Thanks again for letting me 'steal'
your editor this morning
Let??
Let??? [laughing] I would never let anyone do anything, I may encourage or discourage, beg, plead, bribe, tease... But never "let". The women in my life taught me the value of not using the word "let" unless it was to let the cat out!!
Thank you for the kind words, someday I hope to write something like you have. [weak smile] I find tears fry my keyboards. Sex is fun, but emotion steals the heart.
Unsung Muse said:I liked it, MnRider! Nice work.
Thanks again for letting me 'steal'
your editor this morning
Let??? [laughing] I would never let anyone do anything, I may encourage or discourage, beg, plead, bribe, tease... But never "let". The women in my life taught me the value of not using the word "let" unless it was to let the cat out!!
Thank you for the kind words, someday I hope to write something like you have. [weak smile] I find tears fry my keyboards. Sex is fun, but emotion steals the heart.
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Sounds like a wise woman!MnRider said:
That's very kind. I look forward to your thoughts on my new one, when it's approved...MnRider said:
Take care!
DraggingMyLeash
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My first, and slightly old new story.
I recently posted my first story on this site, which is a rewrite of a story I had lost when my computer was reformatted. I have been thinking of writing a story for the only purpose of posting it on Literotica since I was about seventeen, but never got to it so I put an ending on my favorite story and submitted it.
A Vampires Wet Dream, under Non-human.
This story is about a Vampire who has a rather erotic dream, it involves some blood, some masturbation, and one part, which I'll warn you about before you attempt to read it, where the female Vampire which at this point is the main character, straddles a corpse from the previous night, and it gets a bit descriptive about how a certain part of him is "frozen in death." *Cough cough.* Thought I'd warn you about that part. Anyway, here's the link: http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=232138
If you review this and have anything to say about what I might have done wrong, no matter how harsh, please tell me, I'm always trying to make my writing better, and it is a bit rusty.
I recently posted my first story on this site, which is a rewrite of a story I had lost when my computer was reformatted. I have been thinking of writing a story for the only purpose of posting it on Literotica since I was about seventeen, but never got to it so I put an ending on my favorite story and submitted it.
A Vampires Wet Dream, under Non-human.
This story is about a Vampire who has a rather erotic dream, it involves some blood, some masturbation, and one part, which I'll warn you about before you attempt to read it, where the female Vampire which at this point is the main character, straddles a corpse from the previous night, and it gets a bit descriptive about how a certain part of him is "frozen in death." *Cough cough.* Thought I'd warn you about that part. Anyway, here's the link: http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=232138
If you review this and have anything to say about what I might have done wrong, no matter how harsh, please tell me, I'm always trying to make my writing better, and it is a bit rusty.
My first story needs some useful feedback please
This is my first story guys and girls and i would love to have some constructive critisism from you. I've just started my second story today so all advice would be appreciated thanks.
http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=232038
This is my first story guys and girls and i would love to have some constructive critisism from you. I've just started my second story today so all advice would be appreciated thanks.
http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=232038
sirhugs
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Who's Vanilla Now ch1 begins an epic tale of depravity, boundary testing and abandonment.
Varian P
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New Non-Consent
The lastest installment of "Changed Girl" is up.
In a remote cabin, a man and a woman are held hostage and forced to enact her secret fantasies.
The lastest installment of "Changed Girl" is up.
In a remote cabin, a man and a woman are held hostage and forced to enact her secret fantasies.
exiledmaster
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My first story, feedback would be great
Hello all!
I've just posted my first story here. I would love all feedback, especially constructive criticism. I know the story is far from being perfect but it just felt like I had to get it out of my head and posted here.
Also if there are many misspelled words/bad grammar please let me know, I'm not a native English speaker.
May Today Become The Day (romance): http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=232545
Hello all!
I've just posted my first story here. I would love all feedback, especially constructive criticism. I know the story is far from being perfect but it just felt like I had to get it out of my head and posted here.
Also if there are many misspelled words/bad grammar please let me know, I'm not a native English speaker.
May Today Become The Day (romance): http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=232545
Varian P
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soliciting feedback
Hi, Swanheart,
You might get better response to your request for constructive criticism if you start a separate thread in the Story Feedback forum--there are several folks who regularly offer critiques, including suggestions on grammar, etc.
Good luck.
-Varian
Swanheart said:
Hi, Swanheart,
You might get better response to your request for constructive criticism if you start a separate thread in the Story Feedback forum--there are several folks who regularly offer critiques, including suggestions on grammar, etc.
Good luck.
-Varian
sirhugs
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Who's Vanilla Now? ch 3 is now posted. It has even less plot, more smut but initial voting is low. Any ideas why?
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sirhugs
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Now that the final chapter of Who's Vanilla Now? is posted, would love some feedback on the entire work, bearing in mind that the goal seems to have been including something to piss off or offend every possible reader.
Part three of my series, Spring Break was just published today.
If you haven't already, I suggest you read Part 1 and Part 2 first.
Part four is pending and I'm hoping to have the series wrapped up in the near future.
I hope you'll stop by and let me know what you guys think.
Thanks in advance.
If you haven't already, I suggest you read Part 1 and Part 2 first.
Part four is pending and I'm hoping to have the series wrapped up in the near future.
I hope you'll stop by and let me know what you guys think.
Thanks in advance.
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JoiseyMadison
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New to the Scene...
Merry Christmas All
I decided that since I am fairly new to Literotica, to post a thread here. I have one submission in thus far, and another one pending. Both are loosely linked, with a third in the works. The stories are all written in first person narrative, and about one town and one family. Each story is another pair of characters though characters from other stories make cameos in one another's stories. The first is listed in Gay Male under Sweet Home Louisiana. So far, I have receieved very positive and helpful feedback regarding my typos, for which I'm grateful. We can't get better without constructive crticism when it's needed. The submission which is pending, will be called Sweet Home: Cajun Lightning, so those who enjoyed the first one, please check out the next one if you would like to.
Thanks again to all those who have been supportive, and so helpul with building my confidence to continue to purse my writing. May everyone keep up all of the wonderful work
Merry Christmas All
I decided that since I am fairly new to Literotica, to post a thread here. I have one submission in thus far, and another one pending. Both are loosely linked, with a third in the works. The stories are all written in first person narrative, and about one town and one family. Each story is another pair of characters though characters from other stories make cameos in one another's stories. The first is listed in Gay Male under Sweet Home Louisiana. So far, I have receieved very positive and helpful feedback regarding my typos, for which I'm grateful. We can't get better without constructive crticism when it's needed. The submission which is pending, will be called Sweet Home: Cajun Lightning, so those who enjoyed the first one, please check out the next one if you would like to.
Thanks again to all those who have been supportive, and so helpul with building my confidence to continue to purse my writing. May everyone keep up all of the wonderful work
JoiseyMadison
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New to the Scene...
Merry Christmas All
I decided that since I am fairly new to Literotica, I would post a thread here. I have one submission in thus far, and another one pending. Both are loosely linked, with a third in the works. The stories are all written in first person narrative, and are about one town, and one family's hijinx in love. Each story is about one pair of characters, though characters from other stories make cameos in one another's stories. The first is listed in Gay Male under, Sweet Home Louisiana. So far, I have received very positive and helpful feedback regarding my typos, for which I'm grateful. We can't get better without constructive crticism when it's needed. The submission which is pending, will be called, Sweet Home: Cajun Lightning. It will be listed in the Novella section, so those who enjoyed the first one, please check out the next one if you would like to.
Thanks again to all those who have been supportive, and so helpful with building my confidence to continue to purse my writing. May everyone keep up all of the wonderful work
Merry Christmas All
I decided that since I am fairly new to Literotica, I would post a thread here. I have one submission in thus far, and another one pending. Both are loosely linked, with a third in the works. The stories are all written in first person narrative, and are about one town, and one family's hijinx in love. Each story is about one pair of characters, though characters from other stories make cameos in one another's stories. The first is listed in Gay Male under, Sweet Home Louisiana. So far, I have received very positive and helpful feedback regarding my typos, for which I'm grateful. We can't get better without constructive crticism when it's needed. The submission which is pending, will be called, Sweet Home: Cajun Lightning. It will be listed in the Novella section, so those who enjoyed the first one, please check out the next one if you would like to.
Thanks again to all those who have been supportive, and so helpful with building my confidence to continue to purse my writing. May everyone keep up all of the wonderful work
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Spring Break, part 5 posted today.
Please check it out and let me know what you all think.
Thanks in advance,
-Dave
Please check it out and let me know what you all think.
Thanks in advance,
-Dave
Sissy Adele Howells
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My first Fetish stories
Hi I am so pleased to have my first two fetish stories posted at the same time.It took me five attempts to get one through,but it was worth it in the end..Have had a good response so far in votes and one comment.Would love feedback and can promise that more chapters will be written. You have made a sissy very happy.
LOVE SISSY ADELE
"Kinky Adele Mummy Fucker"
english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=232607
"Sissy Amy Loves Mummy Belinda"
english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=230417
Under New stories on page 3 so far.(fetish stories)
Hi I am so pleased to have my first two fetish stories posted at the same time.It took me five attempts to get one through,but it was worth it in the end..Have had a good response so far in votes and one comment.Would love feedback and can promise that more chapters will be written. You have made a sissy very happy.
LOVE SISSY ADELE
"Kinky Adele Mummy Fucker"
english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=232607
"Sissy Amy Loves Mummy Belinda"
english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=230417
Under New stories on page 3 so far.(fetish stories)
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