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[JRaven]

A Typical Day: Lunch

The first part of this story was posted back in April 2004. It was called "A Typical Day, NOT!" It deals with a typical day in the protaganists work life. Except in this setting, sex is normal. Interviewing a prospective hire includes sex, just to determine compatibility.

In the new story, "A Typical Day: Lunch", her day is concluded. It starts with lunch, with every one eating food, dick, and pussy in the company cafeteria.

I hope you enjoy.

Jenny

 

[Chimney Sweep]

Whew! One more on the pile.

This one took a while - I hate writer's block! If you are in the mood for a 3-page story, please check out my new story, Gina and Brandon . It is a bit long, but I think the payoff is worth it.

I hope you enjoy it!
-CS

 

[sirhugs]

The first part of this story was posted back in April 2004. It was called "A Typical Day, NOT!" It deals with a typical day in the protaganists work life. Except in this setting, sex is normal. Interviewing a prospective hire includes sex, just to determine compatibility.

In the new story, "A Typical Day: Lunch", her day is concluded. It starts with lunch, with every one eating food, dick, and pussy in the company cafeteria.

I hope you enjoy.

Jenny

I liked it of course, being a fan. Just wondering how you find erotic couplings working as a category.

 

[Bill Dada]

I have a new one up, I hope people will check it out.

The Call Girls

 

[thephoenix2k005]

hey

just finished my first story and wanted to let yall know, any feedback is welcumed

 

[seductiveeyes]

Newbie saying a big hello

Hello people.

My first post and first story, thanks to the admin for uploading the story manually It was a struggle to finish it but I made it

You can find the story here. It is NonConsent/Reluctance (emphasis on reluctance) entitled My Mom's Boyfriend and Me.

I hope you enjoy it

 

[Decayed Angel]

When the kids are gone, the adults will play...

New story Empty Nest, let me know what you think.

M.

 

[JamesSD]

Kate Bosworth

I've posted a new story here: Meeting Kate Boswroth

It's a celeb story, about a regular guy meeting and hooking up with a big star. Try it, you might like it.

 

[sirhugs]

I've posted a new story here: Meeting Kate Boswroth

It's a celeb story, about a regular guy meeting and hooking up with a big star. Try it, you might like it.

It's quite well written, but suffers from the generic feel that I find in most celeb stories that don't have a novel twist - like a random name is inserted into a template. Should do well with KB fans though.

 

[sirhugs]

New story Empty Nest, let me know what you think.

M.

nice for what it is, but a longer more complex story could offer satisfaction on more levels.

 

[Violette]

New Year, New Story...

New Goals! The main goal of course is to sharpen my storytelling skills, and learn from my fellow writers. Hopefully, I can do both here this year!

The new story's called "Breasts". It's the third installment of a series in which the body part in the title is involved in a very erotic encounter! (The first two were titled "Buns" and "Balls") Because I'm trying my hand at a fourth installment, any input on the present chapter, and suggestions on how I might make improvements are appreciated.

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=235325

 

[thehotness]

New Stories

Hi guys!

It's been awhile since i've posted any stories but i'm hoping to do more of that this year - work has been incredibly busy, but despite the 'Friends' lifestyle that i've been trying to lead, it is getting rather difficult to keep writing at work and ACTUALLY working simultaneously. But watch out for me soon! Toodles!

 

[Decayed Angel]

a non-erotic story

that hasn't received many reads... my third story posted here:

To Live Forever

thanks,

m.

 

[sirhugs]

that hasn't received many reads... my third story posted here:

To Live Forever

thanks,

m.

I think this being an erotic story site , that non-erotic stories typically receive few reads. I'm curious why it isn't under " How To".

 

[coloryourworld]

New Chapter

Hey. A new chapter of my latest story, Impressions, is up. I'd love it if you'd all check it out!

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=236738

 

[Barnaby]

Crystal Conversations

Crystal Conversations is my first story in about six months. It's a little different. It's based on my friend who used to insist on calling me (not that I've complained) with all the details of her sexual encounters. She once called from the guy's bed after he had left for work. Kinda hard to categorize, though. Comments, please.
Barnaby

 

[sirhugs]

Crystal Conversations is my first story in about six months. It's a little different. It's based on my friend who used to insist on calling me (not that I've complained) with all the details of her sexual encounters. She once called from the guy's bed after he had left for work. Kinda hard to categorize, though. Comments, please.
Barnaby

very real feel...Lit equivalent of cinema verite? Though I would have preferred a different ending, that seemed both rushed and contrived, like an afterthought.

 

[mcopado]

My newest adventure into erotica just went up....Dawn Does Dictation. I really went out on a limb here, broached territories I've never gone before...I'd really appreciate any comments...This one took me 6 weeks to write...

 

[sirhugs]

My newest adventure into erotica just went up....Dawn Does Dictation. I really went out on a limb here, broached territories I've never gone before...I'd really appreciate any comments...This one took me 6 weeks to write...

well worth it. loved the ending. but I woulda submitted it as "Anal".

 

[HLD]

My submission for the 2006 Valentine's Day Contest just posted and I hope you guys will read it and let me know what you think.

History Lessons

Big thanks to Daniellekitten for helping me out on it, too.

 

[mcopado]

well worth it. loved the ending. but I woulda submitted it as "Anal".

I thought about it, but a couple of authors friend thought that since spanking was a big part of it it should go into a broader category that's the problem I have with my stories with multiple "acts," deciding what the prime focuas is in terms of categorization... Thanks for reading it ...

 

[nancygibson]

New story

Put my submission in for the Valentines contest yesterday. I'm pretty new to writing and I'm not getting many public comments in my stories yet. I'd very much appreciate any constructive criticism or posts in the comments on my stories. I have a lot of ideas for more writing but it would help to know whether I'm getting anything right!

latest: http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=238845
no public comments at all on this one yet (lots of views though): http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=233223

cheers m'dears
Nancy

 

[caramelgirl_2]

New Story Series: Like Father, Like Son

I'm trying something different-- an interracial story where the father and the son are involved with their female, african-american neighbor. I'm not sure how long I will make this one (I always like to see where the characters take me
I am very open to feedback and criticism (negative and positive), so feel free to let me know what you think, vote, leave comments, etc

Like Father, Like Son
http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=236490

 

[caramelgirl_2]

The Sensual Life Part 6

And here is the sixth segment of a story that I'm not sure HOW many parts it is going to have:

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=238268

It's in the interracial category (although i waver over whether it should be there or in the Novella section) I think this segment appeals toanyone who likes these types of stories (although I could be wrong):
--erotic couplings
-- professor/student
--. younger female, older male
--light public sex/voyeur
Please send comments (particularly on where you think the story should go. At a time when I feel I should be revising the beginning, I am having to keep writing new chapters. I am not used to writing anything this long, but I'm also trying to "stretch" myself.
Thanks for having this post to advertise
CG

 

[Kev H]

Response to CG2 and introduction

Hi, guys and gals. I'm new to this site, though certainly no stranger to erotic prose. This site layout is very complicated to me and requires a serious learning curve, lol, but it seems impressive in its ability to provide help to an author (both in terms of encouragement and guidance). It looks like it's set up for the old addage "the more you put into it, the more you get out of it" (and that sounds delightfully naughty in the current context, I'm copyrighting that phrase...kidding).

Aanyway, CG2, I read the rough draft/initial attempt of "Like Father, Like Son" and have a few suggestions besides the obvious. I don't really know the "culture" here so I will tread lightly (if you want details, let me know offline).

A suggestion I have (that I believe applies to most writing) is this: begin a story smoothly/simply, easing a reader into meat slowly (gah! I have been reading too much erotica! another allusion to sex). Rather than throwing in long and complex sentences/ideas right out of the gate. I think it might alienate readers who would otherwise enjoy the piece. Now, this may just be a style preference, but if it were me, I'd focus on making your first couple of paragraphs much simpler. Break up the sentences, or use more clever ways to get across the info (I believe in the "less is more" principle to some extent, in that the true genius is in finding ways to say more with less). *takes a deep breath* Obviously, I do not practice what I preach.

Your descriptive abilities are as good as anyone's, but once again, some seem to go overboard and become distracting (not the snowflake one - that one rocked). Reread it thinking "story flow story flow story flow" and you should see what I mean.

When it is a more reasonable hour, I will check out your other one, if you'd like.

Happy writing to us all.

Kev

PS - It was so late last night that I forgot the most important comment of all. I was hoping that poor excuse for a boy did not get any, lol. Any guy who has that much trouble with a remote is a disgrace to the male half of the species. You might try reworking to make him less of a bumbler (so it would be more realistic; no reader is going to accept that he cannot work a remote). I'd suggest it already be turned up loud on the porn channel from the start, and him too shocked to change it before she stepped up and took the remote away.