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[janiexx]

After watching a new story I posted get over 2600 people read, but only 5 vote, I am taking the extraordinary step of actually advertising. Okay I admit that I am a feedback slut - I'm a whore for responses.

So please, if you are so inclined to read Afternoon Footsie, I ask for your honest vote and perhaps a little feedback.

Afternoon Footsie is not an overtly sexual story; instead I wanted to focus on a more sensuous interaction between man and woman. Two friends frolic at the pool and engage in a little sexual tension focused around the woman's feet. Perhaps the foot fetishist will find it interesting, but if you are hoping for lots of foot-fucking you will be disappointed.

I tried to make this one of those, "Hey, this kind of thing can actually happen" story, which I hope adds to its appeal.

Thank-you for your consideration.

Vincent

Well, I absolutely loved this story and even though I read it in three instalments (constant interruptions) I enjoyed every word.

I loved the tension and it made me realise, as I was reading it, that maybe I have a fetish about feet. I would have been in heaven lying there in the sun having someone play with my feet...

But, I on the other hand, would have showed my gratitude... However, they are your characters and I think the last scene was brilliant. You kept that wonderful tension going all the way to the end.

Do you plan on writing any more sequels to this?

Thanks for advertising your story,
janiexx

 

[sirhugs]

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I think the last scene was brilliant. You kept that wonderful tension going all the way to the end.

Do you plan on writing any more sequels to this?

Thanks for advertising your story,
janiexx

I on the other hand read it allready knowing about my fetish, loved that part, esp the detail and the dialogue. Though I held back saying it earlier, in conrast to janie I foundthe ending a real downer. Not the letdown so much as the harshness of the let down. Just shows that even sympathetic readers can react differently. But I too wouldlove a sequel. Or to fulfil Janie's fantasies

As to reads and votes, Fetish does get fewer reads. a lot of my stories have only one vote per 500 reads. Some have one vote per hundred reads.

 

[john-the-author]

BTW, Sirhugs, I liked Sharing the Same Husband. I read it this afternoon when I saw the link to it in your sig. Very nice!

 

[Worker11811]

Here's my first submission to Literotica.

It's called L'Hotel Fourrure.

It is a fur fantasy. I don't call it a fur fetish story because I think the word "fetish" is overused. Fetishes, too often, are used to hurt people. That's not what my story is about. This is the main reason I do not post it to the "Fetish" category. It's more fantasy than fetish, even though the fetish drives the fantasy. It is actually listed under the "NonHuman" category. (For reasons you will see when you read it.)

The story is the first chapter in a series. The second part is on the "drawing board" as we speak. The third part is shaping up as the second gets written. I'd like to get some criticism, now before I get too much farther along.

This series is a warm-up for another one I've been cooking up for a while, now. I wrote THIS one to practice up for the one that's on the back burner, now.

T.I.A.! (Thanks in advance!)

Worker 11811

 

[M-Y-Erotica]

As to reads and votes, Fetish does get fewer reads. a lot of my stories have only one vote per 500 reads. Some have one vote per hundred reads.

Reads/hits is per page of a story, is that right? So, if a story is 2 pages, I divide the number of reads by 2 to see how man people have actually read it?

M-Y

 

[sirhugs]

BTW, Sirhugs, I liked Sharing the Same Husband. I read it this afternoon when I saw the link to it in your sig. Very nice!

thanks. I hope you like the Stepdaughter one as well. Along those lines, try the Vacation Scenery story also.

 

[myantonia2]

Chapter 2 just posted, I'd truly appreciate feedback

My story is "Awakening Eve."
http://english.literotica.com:81/stories/showstory.php?id=255474
It's a combination of BDSM and nonconsent.
I received very good feedback, although not lots of it, on Chapter 1. As I'm now working on Chapter 3, it would be very helpful to know what others thought of Chapters 1 and 2. It was very exciting for me to write them, more so to see them in print. I'd love to keep going, but want to do it right.

 

[myantonia2]

Question

How does one know how often a story has been read?

 

[john-the-author]

thanks. I hope you like the Stepdaughter one as well. Along those lines, try the Vacation Scenery story also.

I'll have to get to the Stepdaughter story later, but "Enjoying the Scenery" was stunning!!!!

 

[sirhugs]

I'll have to get to the Stepdaughter story later, but "Enjoying the Scenery" was stunning!!!!

thanks. I'd be curious to know if you like the sequel too- the Valentine one. I felt a bit like it was forced, not as fun to write...

 

[john-the-author]

thanks. I'd be curious to know if you like the sequel too- the Valentine one. I felt a bit like it was forced, not as fun to write...

I thought it was worth a 5, too. I liked the first one a bit more, but both were very... inspiring.

 

[sirhugs]

I thought it was worth a 5, too. I liked the first one a bit more, but both were very... inspiring.

thanks. let me know if you need more tips on which stories to read next.

 

[Vincent E]

How does one know how often a story has been read?

Antonia,

Go to the Stories page and click on the Login link in order to open your account. From there you will find links to take you to your submissions where you can view how many reads, votes, and public comments you have received. You can also moderate any public comments that have been made about your submission.

Also, try adding a link to your public profile in the options section of your User CP here at the Bulletin Board. The easiest way is to cut and paste the links from the address bar on your browser. You can also provide a link directly to your story this way so people on he BB can find and read you.

Good Luck.

 

[myantonia2]

Thanks

Vincent, thanks very much. I am new to this bulletin board thing and to posting, as you can probably tell. I'll see if I can follow your advice.

 

[angelicminx]

Shameless plug for the How To contest now in progress. Please go read, vote and comment!

 

[myantonia2]

I am hopeless

Well, Vincent, I couldn't figure out how to do what you said, so i am just giving the URL to my public profile page here. It is
http://english.literotica.com:81/stories/memberpage.php?uid=683133.

again, I could much appreciate any feedback.

 

[Wilson Spalding]

First attempt at first person

Hey folks...

I'm just dipping my [toes] into the first person narrative method – I'm used to third person omniscient – and could use a little feedback on the style (any comments on content are welcome too).

Thanks,
Wilson

 

[mlady_france]

new story up today!

okay, this one is a little different than what I usually write, so feedback would be greatly apreciated.

all you have to do is say yes

 

[angelicminx]

Need votes and comments, please. Intimate Waters

 

[sirhugs]

Need votes and comments, please. Intimate Waters

nicely written, liked how you made a How To lively, sexy, not dry and dull.

 

[igameto888]

Hello ,everyone!Do you know IGAMWRO? Please visit http://www.igameto.com/. You will get a big surprise .Don't hesitate!Come on!!

 

[Darkniciad]

:: Smacks the spammer above him with a frozen flounder ::

Ahem...

I'm really anxious to see reactions to this one, because I had a lot of fun writing it. This is my first venture outside of the Sci-Fi/Fantasy Cat, and Erotic Horror tale called "Home by the Sea"

The inspiration should be obvious to anyone who has heard the song.

Big thanks to DanielleKitten for previewing it for me, and offering some pointers on places it needed additional scrutiny. I hope I got them all

http://english.literotica.com:81/stories/showstory.php?id=256416

EDIT: What the heck, since I've still got the last post on the block, here's the next new one...

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=256727

The Arts Ardane:KW is the second in the standalone Arts series detailing the early life of Danica and Devan Ardane. I really like the character Darmok in this one, who provides a spot o' comic relief to the tale.

 

[john-the-author]

The latest chapter of Kim and Me is up: Chapter 12, which is somewhat different in content from all the other chapters. We're playing Truth or Dare and I recount a gay teen experience. There's other iinteresting things that happened as well, but that's rather the highlight of it all.

Chapter 13 (in which Kim describes her first lesbian experience) is awaiting approval.

And now, because it's 8:00am where I am, I need to go get dressed and head for a full day of exploring St. Maarten .

John

 

[Ariel797]

New set of stories - "Intro"

I was challenged by someone to write a set of incest-based stories, so I just posted chapters 3 and 4. I've been surprised that the main guy in the story has sort of "taken over" and is fairly aggressive. I keep thinking "where did THAT come from?!"

 

[~Breathe~]

Virgin Author

umm....*steps into the room nervously*

Hi everyone....I have recently submitted a story in three chapters which is my first ever and (I think) I'd like some feedback from those experienced writers here............if you don't mind *shuffles feet and hangs head*

http://english.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=641213&page=submissions


would appreciate it