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[LadyIlsa]

New Story...

Hello. This is my first time posting to this thread. My latest endeavor is posted in 6 parts (the last will go up tomorrow). Please give it a read and let me know what you think. Public comments are appreciated.

Thanks!

The Date, 01
The Date, 02
The Date, 03
The Date, 04
The Date, 05
Part 6 will be up 3/5/08

Jeff and Lisa have been together for more than 25 years. The kid is grown and married and they are soon to be grandparents! But they are young in heart and mind and still have much to explore sexually. Jeff arranges a special anniversary date.

 

[pleasantman]

Hi

First time posting. My first story A surprise in the night http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=353300

has just been put on the site. It is a situational fantasy, which judging by the reviews was not as obvious as I thought it would be.

Your thoughts would be very welcome

Pleasantman

 

[manyeyedhydra]

New story up, Happy Ending

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=354107

I nearly managed to write a normal story, but then things went a little weird as usual.

Oh, the title. I was lying.

Enjoy!

 

[TheSexyGeek]

New Story from the Geek...

My "Sex and the Supercenter" hiatus continues, as this release is an entry into the "Celebs" category. Comments are appreciated and returned!

Anywhere: A Night with Amy Lee
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=353975

The story follows Jay, an Evanescence fan who runs into Amy Lee in the strangest of places. This is my effort to infuse a touch of believability into the genre; what really would happen if you met one of your idols, only to discover they weren't that different from you?

If you're a hardcore Evanescence fan or just think Amy Lee is beautiful, you'll probably enjoy this entry. (Hopefully!)

 

[caprine]

Due To

readers' requests, I've gone back and added a third part to an older, two part series. It was posted this a.m. (03-18-08). Although it currently carries a 4.0, the TROLLS have been at work. The three parts are:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=319406 PART I

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=323838 PART II

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=354803 PART III (current posting)


Sample TROLL comment:

This message contains feedback for: caprine
About the submission: Janet: Transformation Completed
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Comments:

"This is part three that started with: Brianna-Pool Time and then part two: Janet-Brianna's Girlfriend."

If these are parts of the same story, they ALL should have had the same title and chapter numbers. Since you don't give a fuck about the readers, all an asshole like you deserves is a 1. Actually, you deserve less, but that's all they'll allow.

 

[closetblonde]

Please let me know what you think...

This is my first submission to literotica.

Please tell me what you think and be honest. Does it turn you on?
That's my main intent.

The story is a small voyeristic look into my bedroom life with my
husband. Hope you enjoy it...

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=354174



(Leave public comments to let me know what you think.)

Thanks,

CB

 

[litchipking]

Welcome closetblonde

**oops**

 

[caprine]

Jen's...

finally out of Illinois on her odyssey west, getting her kicks on Route 66. The chapters have background and carry over information and really should be read in order. Especially, Chicago should be read first.

http://www.literotica.com:81/stories/showstory.php?id=343852 Chicago

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=346563 Bloomington

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=351721 Springfield

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=355669 St. Louis (posted 03-14-08)

 

[manyeyedhydra]

Another succubus tale for general perusal and arousal for those who like that kind of thing.

Slayer vs. Succubus
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=356805

Not THE slayer by the way, before all the Buffy fans get excited, but I was trying to hit the same comic-book action vibe.

 

[vargas111]

Sabah's Mother

My story is no longer that new -- posted several weeks ago -- but it does fit this theme. In "Sabah's Mother" Sabah takes her new slave to meet Mother with unexpected consequenses. Betther start with "Sabah," the first of the series.

Cheers

 

[Michiro]

I've just posted up my first ever story, an as-of-yet incomplete romancy light-bondage piece I've somewhat unoriginally entitled "Welcome Home." It was the best I could come up with when I suddenly realized it needed a title.

It's written primarily for the feminine interest, since I write mainly as a way of hopefully increasing my desirability to the women who otherwise seem to be quite happy reinforcing my sense of inadequacy. However, please don't let that stop you if you'd like to write feedback.

"Welcome Home, Ch. 01" listed under BDSM
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=357041

 

[GratefulFred]

The Perfect Porn

A light hearted satire pitting man's quest for mermaid pussy vs nature's awesome fury. If the end scene doesn't bring back fine memories...

a) you are too young for Lit'
b) you are too old and should've died years ago
c) You must be living in Iran and are wondering why your cock burns when you masturbate with petro
d) You are too busy trying to pass history

Escape the boredom of generic smut and try out...

The Perfect Porn
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=358085

 

[litchipking]

More from the Erotic Writing Workshop

It's been challenging to keep this multi-faceted storyline together. Thanks to all of you who have sent me PM’s about Chapter 1. I have been truly humbled by your gracious words.

I hope that this chapter entertains you as well. Enjoy, vote, comment.


Miranda Malone's Erotic Writing Workshop - Chapter 2
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=359776


Just in case you would rather start with the first chapter, here's the link:

Miranda Malone's Erotic Writing Workshop - Chapter 1
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=355212

 

[captainscarlett]

Wish Fulfillment

My new story, and I hope you like it.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=357958

I welcome your comments.

Eddie

 

[Anomily]

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=359019


This is my first attempt at erotic fiction. It started out as an e mail to my boyfriend who is currently living 1800 km away. In the end, I decided I thought it was actually pretty good and wanted to share it, and so here it is. The idea is simple - the things that happen in this story have always been fantasies of mine, the original point of course being to create inspiration for the next time I visit my bf. Hopefully it comes across as honest and realistic because it's honestly what I want and realistically it is closely based on myself and my bf.

Comments etc. are encouraged and appreciated. Have fun!

 

[BedtimeStories77]

i don't usually toot my own horn in ways like this, but since this is my first submission on Lit in over a year again i'm excited. It's a very short one, slight control and pain, with a tease.

Please give it a read?! Strapped-On Teddy

 

[caprine]

Patty Jenkens is back

Part four of the Patty Jenkens series was posted today (04-18-08). The first three chapters describe Patty's life in college. In this new and last chapter, Patty takes her first post graduation job as a teacher. Links to the first three chapters are provided at the start of this new chapter, but here are those links again:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=26642 Chapter one

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=269980 Chapter two

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=274613 Chapter three

Patty is such a naughty girl. Wished I'd found one like her when I was at the university!

 

[BedtimeStories77]

Okay, another toot...



A young lady finds more than she bargins for when coming home drunk! (Incest category.) All Grown Up

 

[manyeyedhydra]

Another succubus story for those that like that kind of thing

Interrocution
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=361132

This one leans more towards horror (although that might just be the amount of typos. Apologies to the Colombians out there, I might actually spell your country name correctly next time, sigh.)

 

[caprine]

Patty's Baaaaack...

(1) In chapter one, Patty Jenkins Cums To Bat, the reader is introduced to the young college freshman on a softball scholarship. She finds there were some requirements for keeping that scholarship that weren’t in the prospectus. She also finds new experiences with the rest of her team, one of whom becomes her roomate.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=266422

(2) In chapter two, Patty: More Patty Jenkins, her sexual life rages on to ever new and better experiences. Some of roommate Steffee’s black friends enter the picture.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=269980

(3) In chapter three, Patty: Still More Patty Jenkins, More payment is required on keeping her scholarship. She meets new friends and has still more experiences.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=274613

(4) Now, in chapter four, Patty: Newly Minted Teacher, we see Patty and Steffee graduate. And what an interesting graduation ceremony. After a summer of fun, Patty is off to her first teaching assignment. Same old Patty, up to all her old tricks!

 

[foolishlittleone]

Kelly in the Kitchen is my attempt at a hot, short, erotic (rather than purely pornographic) fantasy. Initial feedback is good. I just submitted an edited version to fix a few typos.

 

[PJ526]

New writer...

I just submitted my first story here and I am dying to know what everyone thinks...How can I make it better? Is there any way that I can improve on my stories?

It is a story about the interaction between a male coworker and myself...is it erotic enough? Please let me know!

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=361206 (A Plumber has a huge pipe)

Please tell me how to improve my writing!

PJ

 

[foolishlittleone]

It is a story about the interaction between a male coworker and myself...is it erotic enough? Please let me know!

...

Please tell me how to improve my writing!

I'd like to see more build up, have the characters fleshed out more. You could say something about what this experience was like for Don. Not every day that a guy has a woman come onto him like this, so there's lots of potentially interesting and excitement building material there. I think providing some dialog between the two main characters would go a long way to making your story hotter.

 

[Scribbles]

Hi,
(This is my second go at posting this, I think I put it in the wrong place before so please excuse me if it's wrong again!)
I've just had my first story appear on here, "In A Private Library" -
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=361293
I would very much appreciate any comments. Thank you.

 

[Maximillian_Excaliber]

New Story Submitted

I have submitted and am waiting approval of the story MMB - The Great Warehouse Robbery. This story is the next installment in the Matchmaker Bandit series. I am currently working in Matchmaker Bandit a four part mini-series called MMB - The Great Doctor's Office Robberies. So far it is 82 pages long and I still have about a third of it to finish. Look for it coming soon.

As always, you comments are welcome.