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[MikeyLoves269]

New anal story and my first attempt at a first person, present tense story. Would love constructive comments.

The New Strap-On

 

[lmind]

Three on One

I recently gathered the courage to submit my first story: Three on One.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=362539

The subtitle is "One guy, tied down by three girls." That's the general idea. But it explores a few ideas that I, as a guy, find very erotic... fighting the urge to cum, while a girl begs you for it; hearing sex, without seeing it; and openly fantasizing about someone, while having sex with someone else. It's really about women getting vocal. I hope you like it!

I just figured out to turn on Public Comments. Feedback is welcome.

 

[sethp]

I recently gathered the courage to submit my first story: Three on One.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=362539

The subtitle is "One guy, tied down by three girls." That's the general idea. But it explores a few ideas that I, as a guy, find very erotic... fighting the urge to cum, while a girl begs you for it; hearing sex, without seeing it; and openly fantasizing about someone, while having sex with someone else. It's really about women getting vocal. I hope you like it!

I just figured out to turn on Public Comments. Feedback is welcome.

Great story ..I voted 5 of course! Keep it up.

 

[PaperStreetSoapCo]

Vikings (You know you want it)

Just wrote my first story in a looooong time, a fantasy about my Viking history professor and his multitool.

Now if thats not a hook I dont know what is.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=364262

Comments and CONSTRUCTIVE criticism are awesome!

 

[caprine]

finally out of Illinois on her odyssey west, getting her kicks on Route 66. The chapters have background and carry over information and really should be read in order. Especially, Chicago should be read first.

JEN IS BACK ON THE ROAD AGAIN AS SHE BLOWS INTO TULSA WITH A HITCHHIKER FOR MORE THRILLS AND ADVENTURES ON HER ROUTE 66 SOJOURN. LOOK IN ON HER. SHE ENJOYS VOYEURS! posted 05-08-08

http://www.literotica.com:81/stories/showstory.php?id=343852 Chicago

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=346563 Bloomington

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=351721 Springfield

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=355669 St. Louis

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=364135 Tulsa

 

[sethp]

New Story

The not so Sweet Date is now up.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=364671

A story of a first RL meeting between online friends. Seth might be a little bit more aggressive and dominant than she though, but...maybe she likes that!

 

[janiexx]

The not so Sweet Date is now up.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=364671

A story of a first RL meeting between online friends. Seth might be a little bit more aggressive and dominant than she though, but...maybe she likes that!

I can recommend it!!

I have a new story up as well - after a year of not submitting any stories, my new one is called "In Bruges". Nothing to do with the film of the same name, but certainly inspired by the beautiful city!

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=365097

Anyway...please read and let me know your thoughts!

janiexx

 

[sethp]

I can recommend it!!

I have a new story up as well - after a year of not submitting any stories, my new one is called "In Bruges". Nothing to do with the film of the same name, but certainly inspired by the beautiful city!

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=365097

Anyway...please read and let me know your thoughts!

janiexx

I just read it and it's fantastic of course! Read it read it read it!~ Great job Janiexx!

 

[sethp]

my newest story

Hey all! My newest story has posted. it's a short weird little tale. No sex...just a little bit of masturbation. it's called Jane and the mysterious biker and based on a true story.. kind of! lol

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=365191

 

[PervertedMuse]

This story is actually my first attempt at any type of fiction writing. I would definately appreciate any feedback/criticism.


http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=365566

 

[some_boy]

Norwegian (story id=365737) is the name of this story, picked to help set the locale in your mind.

It is a really short vignette, adopting a different style than I've used previously. I tried to make it dreamy, like you are barely conscious or something, looking for short, crisp details. There's a surprise ending, but that's not the important part really. The point of the story is to feel her passion and exposure.

This is possibly my favorite submission, I hope you'll like it!

 

[manyeyedhydra]

New story up:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=366067

Corrupt politicians, brothels, mobsters, latex and a very odd bed.

Usual weirdness in other words.

 

[Lillygirlx0x0]

my stories

Hope they make you hot and a little edgy...

 

[caprine]

New Story Post...

went up 05-23. Dana and Deanna, fraternal twins, at last express their mutual love at their eighteenth birthday party. The story grows from there with some twists and turns. It's another fantasy for readers to enjoy.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=366296

 

[The_Fractal_King]

Chaos Theory

The first chapter of a non-erotic scifi/ supers story. Some parts are graphic/ disturbing.

I would love to hear what ya'll think.

For those with sigs off:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=366225

 

[nympho_carebear]

Ok, it is kind of beyond the new stage, but I didn't get too much feedback.. so I want some more input, please. Of course there are preferences to 2nd person and 3rd... I have another story I am writing now in 3rd person, so aside from obvious oversights.. what help can ya'll give me to improve my 2nd story?

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=361455

 

[caprine]

Old Story Updated

went up 05-23. Dana and Deanna, fraternal twins, at last express their mutual love at their eighteenth birthday party. The story grows from there with some twists and turns. It's another fantasy for readers to enjoy.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=366296

In response to reader feedback, this story has been edited and updated. The section of GINGER'S POV was suggested by a reader and I thought it was a very good idea. That section is all new. Sections that follow GINGER'S are mildly and subtly edited in response to reader feedback and some needed clarification.

 

[litluvr]

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=367409

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=366533


First time writer, both of my submissions have been recently added. I'm actually looking for feedback on my style, whether it flowed correctly or not. The first is fiction, the other is non-fiction.

Looking for input on how I can better my submissions, I would love to branch out and write murder mysteries on my own, but I have way too many fears about my work (gaps, poorly constructed plot, hard to follow). So, any and all feedback is VERY appreciated!

 

[Teela]

I'll throw my first story post in three years on the fire. This is in the humor category:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=367599

The Tantra Machine for Men

It could be the ultimate pleasure... if they work out just a few little kinks.

 

[thekarpathianman]

First Story

The above is my first story, in four Chapters:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=343338
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=350489
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=357482
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=364765
It's a story of a small, middle-aged woman who is taken and dominated by four young, big and tall strangers. Also her son joins the fun.
It's addressed to all those readers who love stories full of sex and who don't hate incest category.
I got just few comments, but I would like to increase the feedback, in order to have, in a certain way, the approval from readers to continue the story, by adding other Chapters.

Thank you

 

[aussie_101]

The Liberation of Elizabeth Stanton

Hi all,

I have recently posted a new series after a long lit absence - it is entitled "Libby's Liberation", and describes a woman's experiences as she participates in the Amateur Photography forum in Literotica. It also explores issues of love, friendship, fidelity - all that jazz.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=367634

Enjoy!

 

[Basin City]

Heat.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=368841


Here's the latest. I'd love to hear what people think.

 

[thekarpathianman]

Story

Here is the link:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=364765

To be continued or not, according to you?
Other characters to be added, or not?
What do you think?

 

[TitianaPeaks]

My newest. First time I went for Exhibition/Voyeur....

Hope you enjoy.....vote for it, please!

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=368521

 

[sethp]

My newest. First time I went for Exhibition/Voyeur....

Hope you enjoy.....vote for it, please!

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=368521

It's a great story ...different. Read it now, if you haven't.