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GratefulFred said:
A light hearted satire pitting man's quest for mermaid pussy vs nature's awesome fury. If the end scene doesn't bring back fine memories...

a) you are too young for Lit'
b) you are too old and should've died years ago
c) You must be living in Iran and are wondering why your cock burns when you masturbate with petro
d) You are too busy trying to pass history

Escape the boredom of generic smut and try out...

The Perfect Porn
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=358085
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I voted for it!!!....
 
Maximillian_Excaliber said:
I have submitted and am waiting approval of the story MMB - The Great Warehouse Robbery. This story is the next installment in the Matchmaker Bandit series. I am currently working in Matchmaker Bandit a four part mini-series called MMB - The Great Doctor's Office Robberies. So far it is 82 pages long and I still have about a third of it to finish. Look for it coming soon.

As always, you comments are welcome.
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Just curious. When you say "82 pages" do you mean Literotica pages or pages in Word or OpenOffice? The way I have things setup there are about 7 word processor pages to 1 Lit. page.
 
Big Girls Dont Cry

New story up.

I am the king of the short strokers, so don't expect shakespear. lol

Working with a great new editor and taking more proofreading time. You can link to my stories from the homepage tab on my profile.

This Story was inspired by a thread on the lit boards and is in the incest catagory. feedback welcome. Thanks!

Sethp
 
I submitted my second chapter of Lunatic Luau. Feel free to check it out when it's posted....
 
Just a thought: Probably more effective to say you have a new story up when it appears to all Lit. users as opposed to when you submit it. That 7 to 10 day lag makes all the difference. No disrespect intended to the Lit. people. I appreciate the effort they make to ensure that submissions are good, not spam, not total crap, etc.
 
 
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My first erotic short story 'Business Transaction' is up. Please take it for what it is, a fantasy. Any constructive criticism would be read and appreciated. I know it's not perfect, but I hope to improve with each new story and I am pretty pleased with it as a first attempt.
Link in my sig line.
Thankyou :rose: x
 
MMB - The Great Warehouse Robbery

I have just had approved MMB - The Great Warehouse Robbery

Please check it out and tell me what you think.

Thanks
 
This is a bit off topic. Back in October I put up a new story and it got quite a positive response. Problem was I'd uploaded the wrong version which didn't have my final round of editing. Now I've finally fixed that. (Yeah, I know, took a while. Lost the corrected version and had to motivate to re-create it.)

So....

If you are interested in a group sex story with a bit of incest please take a look at Total Stimulation. It's 7 literotica pages long and written to be fiery hot without being absurd. I'm very interested in the response to this corrected version.
 
Newest story posted.

"Oozing Love on Mel's Head"

You should at least vote my story a 5 due to the title alone. No reading neccesarry! lol
 
My new, and only, story so far

Hey everyone, I finally got my first and only story approved and its in the New story section, page 7. The title is Hungry. It's non-sexual in nature but has an erotic D/s tone to it. It's also a horror/vampire story. Its the first story I've submitted anywhere, so I would really, really appreciate any feedback you all could give me on it. Any and all advice is welcome.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=361218

thanks so much!!
 
Hello,

Here's my "new" story - except that it was written before the first one appeared, so it doesn't take into account any of the feedback I was kindly given.

This is not the kind of story that people usually expect to find here: it's very short, and it probably won't be found arousing by most who read it. It is certainly about an erotic subject, and I hope some will find it interesting.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=362433
 
Here's a story I really enjoyed writing and I think is pretty good: Kate's Adventure. It's an exhibitionist's tale, rather long and I think different from the norm. I hope you enjoy it and are willing to comment.

I've been experimenting with the first person point of view. Initial feedback is quite positive.
 
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Kate's Adventure: Wow. Fantastic. I found the first third or so when she meets various people a bit episodic - but it is a journey and that's how it would be, I suppose. Yes, I enjoyed it. Must have taken ages to write! What would have made me enjoy it even more? Fewer incidents and more detail on each. But to be honest I really liked it as it was. I thought the first person worked really well too. I loved the character of Kate.
 
Scribbles said:
Kate's Adventure: Wow. Fantastic. I found the first third or so when she meets various people a bit episodic - but it is a journey and that's how it would be, I suppose. Yes, I enjoyed it. Must have taken ages to write! What would have made me enjoy it even more? Fewer incidents and more detail on each. But to be honest I really liked it as it was. I thought the first person worked really well too. I loved the character of Kate.
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Hey, Scribbles, thanks loads for the immediate feedback! :kiss: Can't tell you how nice that feels.

It did take ages to write. I wanted her adventure to be just that, one big day with one episode after another. Glad you liked Kate, I liked her too. ;) I take your point about fewer incidents and more detail. Just the sort of thing I'd like too -- and the kind of thing I find hard to see in my own writing. Food for thought and input for the next story.
 
My latest work, Falling In Love Bit By Bit posted today.

There's not a lot of sex in it, so if that's your thing, you probably want to find another story.

It's a sci-fi story with the main theme being human-robot relationships.

I hope you'll give it a read. Enjoy!
 
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