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Majgen

Chapter 007 of 'Majgen' my booksize science fiction is up.

The book is non-erotic, in book one at least there are no sex scenes.

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I offer you a visit to Majgen's time. In book one you can see how it was to live under the mentarion ways; you can see the troubles of being one in eighty million, and to be unique even amongst those.

Let Majgen steal your heart, and take you away to another place and time.
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A newbie writer can dream right?

With an excessive level of detail, descriptions and plot that gives no rest to a tired brain, but instead forces you to stay alert if you want to understand what is happening. With a headache inducing second-language grammar. With a word usage that has been estimated to be overdoing it by 25 to 50%.

Majgen-story is still very far from perfect.

But it's free! and a new chapter is up every week! Some people like it, maybe you will too, whaddaya say? give her a chance ;)

There are links to all chapters here:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=945116&page=submissions
 
Chapter Two is ...

caprine said:
is a new post that went up today. In 1872, Clara, a.k.a. Summer Rose, eighteen, orphaned, and willfully independent of spirit, runs for her freedom. She flees west on the transcontinental railroad to a life beyond anything she had ever envisioned, let alone considered.


http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=369453
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Chapter Two of Clara's story is now up. Clara, a.k.a., Summer Rose, continues “In the Life” as a resident of an upscale bordello in Cheyenne, Wyoming, in the 1870s and 18880s. She progresses up the line from “one of the girls,” to Madam and then to owner.


http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=370840
 
Murder In Magnolia

Just approved is a story called "Murder In Magnolia". This story, my first posting of a non-adult nature, is about about death and corruption in a small Georgia town.

It is actually the last part of a Matchmaker Bandits novel that I have an editor looking at now. As that book is a collection of five stories, each one being a separate attempt by the bandits to steal a rare vibrator collection, it was easy to remove the bandits chapters and create this story.

Please keep in mind that this story, unlike the novel, has not gone to the editor. While I removed all errors I could find, I am sure a few have slipped past me but I believe it is quite readable.

Your opinions, and feedback, would be greatly appreciated.

Thanks
 
D&D Breakfast Club - Chapter 1

A sex scene will begin only in chapter 4 so if you are looking for just that, might as well skip this group of stories, which as always are irrelevant, warped and quite offbeat.

These stories pit a group of first level Dungeons & Dragons characters against some impossible 20th level opponent. It's heavy on the dialogue side and best read while stoned. Groups of four work best.

I've written 5 chapters thus far so they'll be coming one right after the other. Expecting some 10 chapters total.


D& D Breakfast Club - Ch. 01
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=372611
 
A Mind of Winter

I have a new erotic horror story up called "A Mind of Winter" It centers around a young female psychic who is being stalked by a hungry male spirit, and includes mild non-con and elements of bondage. I'd love to hear some feedback because I haven't written any erotica in quite awhile and I'm interested to know how I did.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=371972
 
Sticky but sweet

Hi folks, I just posted a new story and that's the title, "Sticky but sweet" so I thought this thread was a great place to mention it. You can find it by looking up the story by author and it is posted under my name here, califsand. It is a fun fantasy of mine with a tiny touch of exhibitionism. I hope you read it and enjoy it!
 
New writer with new stories

Hello Everyone,

I recently submitted stories here for the first time. These are the first works of fiction/erotica I have ever written save for my interactive SRP work, and of course when I was in grade school.

The first, Ode to Love, was published on 6/19/08. It received positive feedback and nice scoring.

The second, Walls, was posted just a couple of days ago and has not been well received. No feedback, just poor scores. I admit, the story is a little strange but I am curious to hear from others why it is not striking a positive chord with folks. I happen to like it a lot, but obviously, I am not very objective.

I welcome constructive criticism! I have really been enjoying writing and and am finding it a worthwhile endeavor. Feedback will help me to grow into a stronger writer.

Thank you in advance to those taking the time to provide feedback.

V.

Walls
www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=372634

Ode to Love
www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=369970
 
DarlingVivacia said:
Hello Everyone,

I recently submitted stories here for the first time. These are the first works of fiction/erotica I have ever written save for my interactive SRP work, and of course when I was in grade school.

The first, Ode to Love, was published on 6/19/08. It received positive feedback and nice scoring.

The second, Walls, was posted just a couple of days ago and has not been well received. No feedback, just poor scores. I admit, the story is a little strange but I am curious to hear from others why it is not striking a positive chord with folks. I happen to like it a lot, but obviously, I am not very objective.

I welcome constructive criticism! I have really been enjoying writing and and am finding it a worthwhile endeavor. Feedback will help me to grow into a stronger writer.

Thank you in advance to those taking the time to provide feedback.

V.

Walls
www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=372634

Ode to Love
www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=369970
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Just a quick comment on why Walls did poorly. Present tense causes most people to back click immediately, it's the single fastest killer of a story.
 
49rldy said:
Here' my first erotic story for public viewing. I'm very curious as to how well this is received, and welcome ANY comments and/or suggestions.

I hope you enjoy!

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=372504

This story is about my number one way to relax my man. It is under the erotic couplings category.

49rldy
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Very nice. Just read it and commented. Not the usual point of view. I found it refreshing.
 
I have just joined and i was wondering how do i find my story i just submitted. Its called sweet sensations but i looked in the new and didnt find it. also i was wondering if you could get it around or something.
 
Jenni101 said:
I have just joined and i was wondering how do i find my story i just submitted. Its called sweet sensations but i looked in the new and didnt find it. also i was wondering if you could get it around or something.
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Jenni,

Go to your submissions page where you submitted the story and then click submissions and then view. This will tell you if it's still pending or approved.

Stories usually take 2-7 days to post. my last few have posted really quick but if they are behind it can take the full 7 days. If your story is rejected it will also show here. Plenty of people will be willing to help you if there is an issue and there's also a submission faq that you can look at. I'm always open to PM if you have any questions.

You submission page will also tell you the score of your story and how many hits it has and if there are any comments on it.
 
GratefulFred said:
A sex scene will begin only in chapter 4 so if you are looking for just that, might as well skip this group of stories, which as always are irrelevant, warped and quite offbeat.

These stories pit a group of first level Dungeons & Dragons characters against some impossible 20th level opponent. It's heavy on the dialogue side and best read while stoned. Groups of four work best.

I've written 5 chapters thus far so they'll be coming one right after the other. Expecting some 10 chapters total.


D&D Breakfast Club - Ch. 01
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=372611
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And for all those wondering what happens next to our spaced out party, chapter 2 has surfaced. Especially written for all you roll players past and present who dreamt that your D&D characters best adventures happened around the pub.

D&D Breakfast Club - Ch. 02
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=373054
 
My first Two

The first "Day Work" is about a drifter on a motorcycle who takes work doing odd jobs for a lonely farm wife. It's set in 1925.

The second "Lucky" tells the story of a young woman who is having one of the worst days of her life, until she find herself stranded in a shop with a guy who's had a crush on her since his freshman year

http://www.literotica.com/stories/sh....php?id=371779

http://www.literotica.com/stories/sh....php?id=371781

Please let me know what you think by leaving votes and comments.
 
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