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new chapters of A Nights Tale and Billion Dollar Slaves

I just released new chapters of my series A Nights Tale and Billion Dollar Slaves. Sorry to have been gone so long but life jumps out and bites at the strangest moments. I was on my way to work, normal sunny day in vegas, when some twit driveing an 18 wheeler decided to slam into my ass end not once but twice then push my poor crushed car into on comming traffic. I got his license plate and he is now behind bars but it's been a nasty couple of three months.

Anyway enough boo hoos. Read and Enjoy.

Dom Woolf

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=412293

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=412195
 
Would love some feedback

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=413155

These are the first two chapters of a short Novella I've completed called Damaged. It's a bit of a departure from my previous efforts in that the story has a few more themes and I explore some darker character traits I hadn't touched on before. It's also the first time I've written anything like a psychological mystery. I'm a novice at writing twists and turns but it was definitely fun.

Synopsis: A new teacher in a rural community sparks an obsession in one of her student's father. But why is Alan really interested in Teri and why is the mature and calculating Sophia so involved with the proceedings? With flashbacks to Alan's youth, a dark and troubling mystery unfolds...

The story is written out aside from a bit of tweaking. Chapters will be about 1-1 1/2 Literotica pages.

Moreso than votes, I'd love some feedback on this one since the style of the story was a new experience for me which I'd like to continue to develop.

Thanks in advance for your time.

Truenorth1969
 
Kelly's Liberation Ch 05

Hello all,

Chapter 5 of my latest series, "Kelly's Liberation", is up and can be read here.

Those unfamiliar with the series: the sequel to my earlier series "Libby's Liberation", Kelly discovers her husband Tom has been secretly spending a lot of time at Literotica... and so too has her best friend Libby, much to Kelly's surprise and intrigue.

Many thanks to all who have read, commented and voted on the series so far; pls keep those votes and feedback coming!

Chapter 6 is underway and I hope to post it soon...

Cheers, aussie_101.
 
Damaged Ch.03-04

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=413908

Title is Damaged
It's in Novels and Novellas

Thanks to everyone for the comments and emails for the first two chapters of the story. I hope readers will continue following the story and provide more input and comments. They certainly have been interesting thus far and I'm curious to see if those who had concerns about how chapter 2 ended will be satisfied with how the further chapters play themselves out.


*Apologies for the slight delay in posting the latest chapters...performed a last minute edit over the weekend and then resubmitted. Chapter 5 is in the "pending approval" status already and should be posted soon.

Thanks

TN1969
 
My Latest

As I'm sure I've said before, since I've discovered publishing my Erotic fantasies on-line, I have found much pleasure and a new found fulfillment in doing so. I am finding, my enjoyment in this subject and writing style is increasing dramatically! Please, for you reading entertainment I give you
My Latest!
I have had requests for part two, which is now available, so I must be getting better. Here are the links for my latest Erotica!

Two Sisters and the Monte Vista (Part 1)
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=413861

and;

Two Sisters and the Monte Vista (Part 2)
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=413863

And for a shameless plug, a link to my first release!

A Night With The Sales Rep
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=403713

Enjoy my Friends!!
Eretto
 
Hi, LONG!!!! time reader first time poster, author. After alot of praise from my friends and wife i decided to post the first couple of parts of a long tale I am working on.

A Different Love Story Pt 1.

So Please enjoy and let me know what you think :)
 
Same great taste, no calories!

Vice Cream - Dessert in Seven Parts

This is a collection of seven short stories, featuring nature's most perfect food. It's meant as a fun exploration of flavour and theme, and though you will find it under BDSM not all of the stories fit into that category.

I'm a sucker for punishment but won't turn down a good ego stroking either. I'd love to know what you loved/hated and, of course, what your favourite flavour is.

Cheers,
Keroin
 
Hi folks,

I'm very new here, and just posted my first story, The Visit, in Erotic Couplings.

As with everyone, I'd certainly appreciate feedback.

Oh, and as a point of etiquette, is this thread the main recommended way to ask for feedback? Is posting a separate thread asking for feedback terribly gauche?

Thanks!

Kaithel
 
From dessert to desert...

This story was originally published in Storyteller Magazine. Inspired by my travels through the back country of Baja California, Mexico and some of the weird and wonderful characters I encountered there, I hope you enjoy this latest scribble...

The Devil, the desert and Mr. Smith

Smiles,
Keroin
 
would love feedback

OK, it's a poem, not a story, but I would love some feedback for my new erotic poem, "My Need". It was just approved. I also haven't heard much about the first in a series that I planned, "Are You Ready for More?", which actually is a story. Anyone?
 
my new story Ross the Boss Rides Again is as the title indicates, one in a series. It is long and detailed. It follows several false starts where I bogged down in narrative, could not access the smut vibe. I'm hoping I balanced it here.
 
New author, would love feedback.

I have just recently written my first and second stories ever. I wrote them almost back to back (only about a week or two apart) and I would love any advice, comments, or feedback anyone can give. I have been an avid reader for years, but just recently decided to write my own. I have a habit of writing my stories in one sitting. I seem to be unable to get out of my chair until my story is over. I have been lucky with these first two, considering they both just flowed out naturally without spending days or weeks editing and rewriting. The stories are;

an unlikely couple - "first time" category http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=417512

watching my husband - "loving wives" category http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=407324

Please read them and feel free to comment. I never delete comments, regardless of what they say. I want honest opinions and I will not delete you just because you don't like my story. Thanks.
 
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Double Your Pleasure!

Two new stories posting on the same day! Good times, I tell you! :D

First up, a little one-shot tale called "Russian Standoff"; where a question in a game of Truth or Dare gets an answer . . . with a surprising twist!

"Russian Standoff" by SSobotkaJr


The second, is a new chapter for my "Samuel & Yasmine" story; "Discovering Our Present". What more sexy fun has Sam's mother got in store for him? Read on and find out!

"Discovering Our Present" by SSobotkaJr


Please do leave feedback and vote! I've got more hot stuffs on the way, as I plan to make 2009 my most productive year on Literotica to date! Thank you!


Stay Crispy!


-- Stephen
 
Lilly's Game posted today.

It's a fairly short Lesbian piece. I haven't posted a story in a while, and this is the first time I ever tried myself at Lesbian, so I'd really appreciate a bit of feedback on this one.

Thanks in advance. :)
 
New Story Post [Olivia: The Tutor]

John and Mary Story decide that their eighteen year old Son, Sam, though admirably mature, is lacking in one crucial area of his education. He doesn't relate well to the opposite sex, at least in one-on-one situations.The decision is made, mostly by Mary, to help Sam develop that ability with the aid of an older female tutor. The plan succeeds all too well.

Once again, I want to say a big thank you to my faithful fans, may their tribe increase, and to all others who have taken the time to read my stories. A really big thank you goes to those readers who have taken the time to comment on said stories whether privately or publicly.

Have fun reading.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=419408

Dapper Dan
 
This is my first story post. And yes it is absolutly true.

LAX

This is a true story. This is also one of the best if not the best sexual experience of my life. First off let me introduce myself. I live in Montana I am 38 years young. I have short cut hair, a neatly trimmed goatee, I’m 5’9”-185#, baby blue eyes, tats on both arms (muscular), and I work out 3 days a week.
I was twenty five and was subpoenaed for a car accident that I was in. My attorney said that I would have to show up for my court appearance and that the other party involved would probably settle. I would receive about $5000.00 for the settlement. The attorney sent me a plane ticket and was going to put me up at a hotel near LAX. This accident occurred several years prior to me moving back to my home state of Montana.
I was single at the time so I was looking forward to the trip. I put on my best old cowboy boots, new Wranglers, button down short sleeve dress shirt, and of course my Stetson cowboy hat. I enjoyed the plane ride had a few rum and cokes and took nap. When I arrived at LAX I went to a book store to buy a Playboy before catching the hotel van that would take me to the Double Tree Inn. While browsing the magazines I noticed an absolutely beautiful woman with her back to me. She was a brunette, hair pinned up, black short tight fitting skirt, red silk blouse, black nylons, black stilettos, beautifully manicured red nails, red lipstick, heavy eyeliner, and fake long eyelashes. I couldn’t help myself so I innocently sauntered closer to her and stood a couple of feet from her off to one side. Then she turned slightly toward me and reached for a magazine. I notice she had some nice cleavage and was wearing a black lace bra under her red blouse. (I am getting hard again as I replay the events in my head.) She noticed me standing there and excused herself. I said, “No problem miss, it is my pleasure” as I smiled sheepishly. I did not want to come off as a perv so I gave her some space and walked to the other end of the store and continued to peruse the magazines. I picked up a Playboy and looked at it, hoping no one noticed what I was looking at. Then the woman moved in front of me again, excused herself, “excuse me sir”. Again I said no problem, and blushed a little because I was sure she seen me looking at the Playboy mag. Then to my surprise she asked me to reach and get her a book that was too high for her to reach. I obliged and she thanked me. Then as she was looking at the book she backed into me. I immediately started to get hard. I had on boxers so I had to push my 8 inches down one pant leg as to not look to obvious. She then turned around and introduced herself. “Hi,” she said and extended her hand to me, “my name is Lisa.” “Hi, Lisa I’, Brad, nice to meet you. She then explained to me that she was from Seattle and was visiting LA on business and she had an 8 hour layover before she returned to Seattle. She thought she would get a book to kill the time. I told her my story about the car accident and why I was there. I also told her the insurance company was putting me up in a hotel nearby. We chatted some she asked me how beautiful Montana was and how she always wanted to travel there some day. I then said, for whatever reason, probably because I was nervous that I better get going. She said, “What are you going to do, go back to your hotel and jerkoff to that magazine under your arm?” This really caught me off guard and I blushed heavily. My words stumbled and she said relax, how about we get a drink at the airport bar. “That sounds great Lisa,” I replied. We bought our reading material and off we went. She put her arm through mine as we walked. Once at the bar we ordered our drinks and took a seat in the corner near some big plants. She then took her hair out of the bun and shook it out. I couldn’t help staring at her tits which were shaking back and forth as she shook her hair. She said I hope you like them, I paid enough for them. I said they are absolutely gorgeous. She giggled and said, “I think I like you Brad”, as she put her hand on my knee. We then drank our drinks and made small talk. After about 4 drinks she said to me, “man it is hot in here, don’t you think?” She then unbuttoned one button on her blouse to expose more of her bra and breasts. Then she ran her fingers up her thigh to show me her thigh high stockings. Again I couldn’t control my now hard member and had to push it down. “Can I feel you,” she asked. “Yes of course, as long as I can feel those tits, I’ve never felt fake boobs before.” So, she felt my hard cock, and I felt her firm tits. Then, looked to make sure no one noticed. I then asked her if she would like to go back to my hotel with me since she had some time to kill. “I thought you would never ask,” she replied. We made our way through the airport and I found it hard to maneuver with my member so hard. I had to put my hand in my pocket and hold so I was not so noticeable. Lisa just giggled at my situation. As soon as we got on the hotel shuttle van we began making out passionately, like high school kids. I notice the van driver looking in the mirror and tried to get Lisa to calm down some as I motioned to the driver. She said relax, it is making me hotter knowing someone is watching, as she bent over and pulled her black thong from her ankles. I fingered her and she pulled out my hard cock and begun sucking on it with vigor. I came almost immediately. Lisa just groaned and sucked down every drop.
We finally reached the hotel, checked in, and made our way to my room. She wore my Stetson all the way to the room, giggling. Once inside I slammed the door, grabbed Lisa, pinned her on the wall, took her blouse off, got on my knees and started eating her went pussy. It tasted so fine, I couldn’t get enough. I wanted her to come in my mouth but she kept saying, “No, no”, “I want you inside my now, please?” I then lifted her up on the wall and she wrapped her legs around me. She kept screaming, “Fuck me Brad, Fuck me please”. I couldn’t take it anymore I thrust my hard 8 inches in her and fucked her until my legs got weak. I then carried her to the bathroom and set her down. She turned from me and faced the wall looking in the mirror over the sink she said, “When we were in the airport, and I brushed my ass into you, I thought about you taking me from behind.” I grabbed her around the waist, looking at her in the mirror; I put my cock in her pussy and fucked her furiously. She screamed, “I’m coming, I’m coming,” and I shot my load into her as she melted onto the counter.
We then collapsed onto the bed, and napped for a couple of hours. I awoke with her sucking on my cock, I got her into a 69 and we came in each others mouths. She tasted so good.
We then showered, and I could not help myself from staring at her beautiful body. We got dressed; I escorted her back to the airport, and got her to her gate just in time for her plane. I gave her my number and kissed her goodbye.
I never heard from Lisa again. I do not know why, I was pretty she liked me. But, to this day I still fantasize about her and the events that transpired that Saturday afternoon at LAX.
 
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