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I'm looking for some feedback regarding my first submission. You can email feedback to me at lunaoscuro@gmail.com, post it here or comment on the story itself. While votes are nice, I'm really looking for constructive criticism and/or encouragment. I'm very appreciative of the comments I've gotten so far.

luna_oscuro
All Because of a Napkin http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=404030
Erotic Couplings

Many thanks,
 
New Story Post...

from caprine.

She's twenty-one and a new college grad. It's her first teaching position in her first school and that makes her fair game for some of the males of the faculty and maybe for a female or two as well. Come along for the ride, you’ll be glad you did. Feedback is appreciated.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=407662
 
New Story

He check out my new short if your after something deeper then the average stroke story. Its a true erotic couplings but with slight bdsm overtones and a girl trying to discover herself sexually

I was trying to dig into some emotion and character so any feedback would be greattly appreicated.

Emancipation Inked
 
"Intended" - a Stone Age love story

Hi all,

This is my second crack behind the keyboard. It's an Upper Paleolithic love story taking place in the time period after the the end of the last Ice Age, before the dawn of agriculture.

In this story, an Intended is a person betrothed to another, and our heroine has been selected to mate a powerful shaman against her will. She has other ideas.

It has a nice meaty plot for those who enjoy curling up with a series and plenty of prehistoric lovin' too. :D

Chapters 1 and 2 are currently online; more are on their way. Here is the link to Chapter 1:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=405929

I hope you will enjoy it, and would love to receive comments/feedback.

Thank you,


starscape
 
Stalker

I posted, a short while ago, a non-erotic story called Stalker, essentially about office politics. It has a reasonable number of views but only 3 votes, although each one gave it 5.0 so they must like it. Any chance of someone looking at it and giving me a little feedback? And scoring, of course, another 5.0 would be good, lol. Thanks. Ray
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=404441
 
New Christmas themed BDSM story

OK, months late, but my BDSM Xmas story has been posted. I couldn't figure out how to post it here in .pdf, so I've put it on ASSTR.

Here’s a synopsis-
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A woman is separated from her boyfriend one snowy Christmas Eve. After teasing him by phone she finds out that, "Yes, Kathleen, there is a Krampus," Saint Nicolas' dark devil-like companion who punishes the wicked while the saint is out rewarding the good. She's returned to her man Christmas morning with a freshly birched backside and breasts, and a gift tag tied to her right nipple. She's sore, but wiser, and ready for a passionate reconciliation.

20 pages, about 7500 words, PDF file (opens with Adobe Reader)
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If want to check it out-

http://www.asstr.org/~jmanque/Gift_of_the_Krampus.pdf
 
New Anal Stories

If anyone is in the mood for some short stories involving straight anal sex, check out my Carmen series in the anal section. The latest one just went up yesterday. They are quick and crude spank material. They are not meant to be read in any order but for those who like a timeline just read them in order according to the date they were posted.


http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=408518
 
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I've posted a Erotic Horror/Non-Consent story with strong BDSM components. It is the story of a pretty American graduate student who goes to a Greek island for research. She is charged with a minor cultural infraction and turned into a sex slave and forced breeder during a bizarre festival in the town square.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=408688

If you decide to check it, I really appreciate comments. Even negative ones as I am trying to grow as a writer and I have a very thick skin. However, if you just leave a comment telling me that I am sick and/or going to hell, save your time, I am already aware of that.

Thanks.

-FnS
 
Spanking New Secretary's Kink

My first new story for a while, see link below

another pending...
 
Joanna: The Pickup Artist Pt. 1

Interested in hearing thoughts on this, my first ever post. Here is link:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=410195

The story is basically a older woman/young man story, but with strong mother/son incest overtones, and specifically with a mild FemDom theme. By mild, I mean, she is in control, authoritarian and dominating him, but still nurturing, kind and gentle... not the whips and chains type some are into.

Please email comments to soulstroker@gmail.com

Thanks,
Magnifico
 
European Vacation

My newest story has been recently posted and I would love some feedback. It's the first story I've written that will consist of multiple chapters and I wouldn't mind hearing some ideas from readers.

The story focuses on two girls stranded in Germany. They have lost all of their money and possessions, so in desperation they decide prostitution is their most viable option.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=410829
 
New Story Post...

Four years of a finishing school for girls in Virginia completed, a young woman, an only child, returns to her home on a western ranch. Daddy is very sick, (Mother died before girl left for school) ranch falling in disrepair and finances poor, drought conditions, rustling of ranch cattle, hands leaving--what is a poor girl to do?

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=411341
 
Kelly's Liberation

Hello all,

I've begun posting a new series - a follow-up to "Libby's Liberation", another series of mine.

In "Libby's Lib", Tom introduces his wife's best friend to the amateur photography threads on Literotica, and tries his level best to remain faithful while Libby's strip-teasing series become ever-more imaginative and ever-more evocative.

In "Kelly's Lib", Tom's wife Kelly has stumbled across her best friend's pictures on Literotica; at first she is shocked, then intrigued, then aroused... then inspired.

Please do have a look at the series and tell me what you think - I'm wanting for some positive feedback, I got a torrid lambasting from an especially stupid troll and it's put me off a bit... struggling to end the series. Encouragement would be appreciated :)

Cheers - aussie_101.
 
Looking for Feedback on new story

Author: DickJonson69
Title: Portrait of a Lady

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=411578

Man shares loft with a photographer who brings clients in throughout the day. He finds himself intrigued by one lady in particular who wants some sexy photos taken of her for her husband. She asks him to join her during the photo shoot.

It's been a while since I've posted on here, but this is my latest story. I'm not sure about the rating system and what is considered 'good'. Would love some feedback on this story...thank you all.
 
First New Story This Year

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=411833

Darcy's Designated Driver is my first story since last summer. It's another light-hearted friends-to-lovers piece inspired by a true life incident in which a co-worker asked me to drive her home from a departing employee's farewell party. The real-life incident didn't go quite as far as the one in the story but that's why they call it fiction. ;)Would appreciate feedback, comments and emails.
Thanx!
B
 
New Story Post...tess: What's A Girl To Do?

In this sequel to Tess: New Ranch Foreman, Tess returns with more tales of sexadventure and sexsurprises. The story carries through to her twilight years. Even though this story will stand alone, readers will want to read the first Tess to get the background and carry over characters for the sequel. Come along for her fantastic ride into the sunset.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=411341 Tess: New Ranch Foreman

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=412102 Tess: What's A Girl To Do?
 
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