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[The_Darker_Side]

A first posting for me

To Claim the City

If you like lycanthropes, I hope that you will like this

It's my first submission for this site and I'm excited

And, to the person who posted the comment already asking "Is there more to this story??", yes, there is. What I posted now is up to chapter 3, but I have chapter 4 done, and part of 5 ;D My chapters aren't very long, so I'll probably put up 3 or 4 at a time in each submission.

 

[mikeaday]

Just got my first story published and looking for feedback

it may not be to everyones tastes but please give constructive comments

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=420072

 

[Guest]

If your in the mood for something non erotic try my story I hope you like it and I'm working on part 2. Can someone please tell me how I edit or delete a story I have posted? I can't seem to find any link to do so. Thanks {|} Kisses MJ http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=418427 please messege or email me with any comments xx_mjluvsit_oo@yahoo.com

 

[caprine]

Olivia Story Sequal

Olivia (see OLIVIA: THE TUTOR), spent a year as a foreign exchange student in the USA. She was also tutor of several things to Sam during that time. In this new chapter, Sam sees Olivia’s plane off for her return to England right after graduation. Now that Olivia had opened the world of sex to Sam, what was he going to do in her absence? As he found out, more than he could ever imagine.

Once again, a big thank you to those who have taken the time to comment on any of my stories.

caprine

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=419408 Olivia: The Tutor

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=423556 Sam: Life After Olivia

 

[hisculip]

first post

Hi, my first story just got approved. I'd like some feedback.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=424121

This is the first story of any length I've written for quite some time, and the first piece of erotic fiction I've ever written. I'd really like some constructive feedback, even if/especially if you don't care for it. I'm trying to become a better writer so if you could comment on what you thought of the overall style, pacing, word usage, characterization, that sort of thing, I'd really appreciate it.

Thanks!

 

[kromen]

Is 7 a lucky number?

I just got my seventh tale approved. It's the shortest one I've written to date, but I think a lot of readers on this site want it quick and to the point. Looking for constructive feedback (ego swelling wouldn't hurt either)
The story is located in my signature, titled Three A.M. Thanks.

 

[xPoisonx]

I currently have a short sci-fi series running, currently there's 2 parts and the 3rd is written and will be submitted this week. It's kind of sci-fi in the sense that it's set after a nuclear war but it doesn't take much prominence in the story. It's about a young woman basically discovering sex and one man is showing her how it's done. It's called "Learning Something New". The first chapter is under First Time, the others are under Sci-Fi/Fantasy.

I also have a story in the Erotic Couplings category called "One Night Only?" Theres been interest in a follow-up chapter so I might do that. It's really just a sex story to be honest, some instant gratification. A man and woman meet and go home together, passionate sex ensues.

I write under the same name as I post so please take a look.

xx

 

[extremystique]

First story posted

Hi. I have finally posted my first story and would love feedback (negative and positive).
The title is A First. You can find it here:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=426103

Andrea is instructed to go to a biker's bar to meet a man. She soon finds herself alone in a questionable establishment and at the mercy of the patrons.

I hope you like it.

Thanks,
extremystique

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1107817

 

[xPoisonx]

Chapter 3 of my Learning Something New is up so please have a look, this one is a bit of sex minimal on the plot lol

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=425961

 

[njailarhee]

This is my frist story accepted ! Please read and give comments.
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=424964

Its about a Blasian girl going to a spa on her 18th birthday and getting "full service" from a handsome massure.

 

[xPoisonx]

Posted my story for the Nude Day Contest. It's in Erotic Couplings or in the contest link as well as in the New submissions part.

It's called Naomi's Story

Please read and vote since it's a contest submission lol!

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=427131

 

[Sexual_Es]

The Voice - Exhibitionist/Voyeur

Hi all,

I just had my first story posted and would love for you to take a look and maybe leave some comments

It's in Exhibitionist/Voyeur but could've quite easily gone into Toys/Masturbation as there is an element of that in it.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=427570

I'd love to know what you think!

Comments and critique appreciated

 

[tcwild100]

Hey all, I'm new to Literotica, and have begun with a series called 'Enterprise - the Other Side'. It is loosely based on Star Trek Enterprise, more specifically the two-part episode (#94 & 95) called 'In a Mirror Darkly'. If you happen to be a Trekkie that likes fantasizing about those two hot babes (T'Pol and Hoshi), then you may enjoy the series.

Chapters 1 and 2 are up already, and 3-5 are in review. Chapter 6 is being written as we - ahem - speak.
Chapter 1: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=426982

I would love to read your feedback, both on the content and on my style.

Thanks all!

-tcwild100

 

[caprine]

New Story--Olivia: The Plot Thickens

This story is the thrid of three parts about Olivia and her friends. It would be best if the were read in sequential order. In this third part, Sam leaves England and Olivia after a year at Oxford University. He takes Sandra with him. He met her on the plane to England. Their trip on an ocean passenger liner is quite a ride. Hitch a ride withs them and enjoy the fun.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=419408 Part I--Olivia: The Tutor

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=423556 Part II-Sam: Life After Olivia

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=427756 Part III: Olivia: The Plot Thickens

caprine

 

[kromen]

Hi all,
No sooner than I put number seven to bed, number eight jumped into my mind and wouldn't let me rest until I put some work in. It's a first time story centering around the 1986 World Series. Sports fans may love it (or hate it if you're from Boston) and I actually got the formatting problems ironed out from the first go round. (long story)

Anyway, feel free to take a peek at it, I'd love to have your input. It's located in my signature; last one in line. The title is "It's only a game."

 

[MagicFingers]

Doctor Hardwick, Intern

I have a new story posted, I think.
It has 0 views, 15 votes (YEA!), but I can't see it in the new stories list yet.
It still amazes me how people find these stories when they are new when "I" can't even find my own. LOL
(Hmm, That was on Firefox. When I went back to IE8, it was there.)

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=428488
Doctor Hardwick, Intern

 

[Bobby_3111]

First story

Hi everyone, first story i've written, just got approved today. It's an incest story, but one i hope you enjoy, check it out if ya like.



http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=428613

 

[GeorgieH]

A further step into the unknown...

Hi all,

I've finally bitten the bullet and taken a further step into the unknown, and attempted to write something well beyond the limits of my comfort zone (don't worry, the rhyme was purely accidental and no poetry was harmed in the making of this story).

As ever, I'd be delighted to hear your thoughts about my scribblings:

Jake's Progress is at:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=428664

Georgie
x

 

[TalyisBagley]

The Talons of a Dark Heart Chapter 7

Hello

Chapter 7 of The Talons of a Dark Heart posted over the LONG weekend!!!

http://www.literotica.com/stories/sh...=427917&page=1

Talyis a Onor princess is captured by a Prince (Novak) of an enemy people. Driven by revenge and pride the Prince causes more pain for himself, his beloved people and his true love. The Talons of a Dark Heart is an unlikely tale of twisted true love.


In Chapter 7 we learn more about Aricin life and their rebuilding. Also Novak is very conflicted.

Love to hear your comments and feedback- There is a feedback thread for this series under story feedback
Thank you so much,
Talyis

 

[sirhugs]

Stepdaughter, Best Friend and Wife continues to experiment with two lines of narrative. Is the series done when one plot but not the other seems done? Where do I go from here?

 

[SevenOfSpade]

The Seduction Of Jasmine Erotic Coupling

Hey there. I have a new story up and I hope people can view it give me feedbacks at

http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=661848


Thanks
SevenOfSpade

 

[Bobby_3111]

Hi everyone, first story i've written, just got approved today. It's an incest story, but one i hope you enjoy, check it out if ya like.



http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=428613

Chapter 2 is up, just got approved last night, hope ya'll enjoy it.

 

[andy_charles]

The Great Outdoors

First part of my new Sechs City novel finally up. Let me know what you think about it - still writing it, so can change things around according to peeps tastes.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=429168

Andy Charles

 

[Keroin]

Summer House Rules

My second BDSM story, Summer House Rules has just been posted. In a departure from my first collection of short stories, this tale is a bit edgier, dealing with a "seasonal slave", exploration of boundaries and shifting paradigms.

All feedback is appreciated!

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=429940&page=1

Smiles,
Keroin

 

[nudepainter39]

Greetings - I've just posted my first attempt - its a story about a lawyer who goes for a kayak ride and encounters a young lady in a bikini that talks him out of his swimsuit. I would love feedback to help me improve my erotic writing. Here's the link - http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=430171