"On the Job" Story Event 2020

Signed, Sealed, Delivered

Finished. Could use another rewrite, but it's in. Time for happy hour.
 
Shriek. Five solid chapters, the first four of which actually work. Reading Chapter 5 without the Mandatory Martini, it simply sucks. I could just put in the first four, but most of the fifth is fine; it's just the tie-in with what has gone on already.

Grinding teeth, blaming olives...
 
Hello HeyAll, I submitted a story five days ago Fetish category, it is just a nonsense written but even though 90% of the story is on the job place, one scene happens in the bedroom of an employe. Home. Maybe this is grounds for exclusion? If it is so drastic, I can shorten or cut the scene at home.
 
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