SwampThing
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I may not be able to respond to everything going on in here tonight (yay!) but I wanted to respond to Morgoth.
I like the idea, he does seem a little powerful. He's got a lot of different unrelated powers. Strength and stamina go together, so do genius and telepathy, but those two groups have nothing to do with each other, and matter agitation doesn't relate to either.
This is okay, if he's going to be a rampaging beast, incapable of working with a team or sticking with a plan. A monster, not a person.
If you want him to be capable of reason and working with a team, tone down the powers.
Go with a central image or theme. For instance, Monolith has great strength and toughness from his stony body. I wouldn't let him have aura sense, because it was unrelated to the stone body concept.
What do you mean by Genius? Matter Agitation? Levitation?
I like the idea, he does seem a little powerful. He's got a lot of different unrelated powers. Strength and stamina go together, so do genius and telepathy, but those two groups have nothing to do with each other, and matter agitation doesn't relate to either.
This is okay, if he's going to be a rampaging beast, incapable of working with a team or sticking with a plan. A monster, not a person.
If you want him to be capable of reason and working with a team, tone down the powers.
Go with a central image or theme. For instance, Monolith has great strength and toughness from his stony body. I wouldn't let him have aura sense, because it was unrelated to the stone body concept.
What do you mean by Genius? Matter Agitation? Levitation?