Is acceptable if relating to dance floors.
These were more related to laps, unfortunately, but I will note it down in my notes for the formal complaint I'm writing.
“Do you take milk and sugar?” Emily asked liliput1, as she grindified coffee beans.
You're already on a list for the tentacle thing, Miller. <rubs bridge of nose>
I have a few other names you can add to that list if tentacle stuff is criteria... I'll soon be joining it, so if you wanna put me down pre-emptively, that's fine.
I'm good.
My full legal name is Anthrodisiac *schreeshurrrrk* Archaeopteryx.
Hmm. That's problematic. If I call you 'Archaeopteryx' in anger it sounds like I'm being racist.
bi_cathy just closed out a 14 year old story arc. You've got pleeeenty of time to expand.I can’t actually believe that Coleoidphila was published over three years ago
Yup! That's the scene and story.
Or weary vs wary. That one is so prevalent that my SO kept double checking which one I actually meant for the first several months that he was editing for me. I know the difference though, and it drives me nuts seeing people improperly use em.
Emily Miller, intimacy coordinator.To come back to this. I see sex scenes in my head as a write them, so I normally don’t have the FMC and MMC kiss when doing reverse cowgirl.
But, when I’m alpha or beta reading, I do the same with other people’s work, and it’s one of the things that I often give feedback on. Like if the woman has knelt down to do X to the man, then she would logically reach up to do Z, rather than down.
It gets even more complicated with group. I have been known to draw diagrams
I've been annoyed when finding myself screwing up the past tenses of words. For instance, using "lied" instead of "lay," "thrusted" instead of "thrust," "grinded" instead of "ground" (I'm not sure if this one is technically incorrect), and so on. But I will admit that like many other things in the English language, some of this in my view is a little unintuitive.
If I had a dollar for every time I went into a blind panic over complimentary versus complementary I could buy a coffee, even in this economy.
Discrete and discreet
That one still trips me up but I have the wiring in my head to cover it without seeking primary sources. It just takes me a moment to remember college math and discrete equations.Discrete and discreet
Funny you should mention this.
Funny you should mention this.
I had that scenario happen in my last story:
I should probably have the same thing happen in my follow-on WIP, but have him say his back's too sore to give it a try.
That explains why the seven-eyed monopoded people of Vega III are always so angry.
Maybe they just need a different thickener. Wait, I suppose that’s not vegan is it.
