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[cookiejar]

Re: Chuckle~

Your a lucky man if Ya gotta Mother-in-law
that looks like that Rump...<big grin>

Hey cookie~
Hey Og~
Black~
Hey Rump~
Ola Seniora Perdita~
Buenos Noches

Lol...Hi Art, how goes it?

Hi Perdita...think of me when you watch that movie.

 

[sack]

My Halloween Contest Entry...

Well, I have submitted The Mask as my Halloween contest entry, in the New Section right now or Incest/Taboo. I was in a rather humorous mood when I wrote it, so this is probably my funniest Literotica story to date. However, I welcome comments, pro and con. Although, not stated in the story, this creation is dedicated to Doormouse. No one can get to that creative level, but it was fun trying! Sack

 

[oggbashan]

Will Og ever stop?

I have just submitted my 4th entry - Absorbed - as Erotic Horror.

I MUST stop. Repeat 1000 times.

However I am ?pleased that Morose Monk is heading for the bottom spot with few votes and still rated at 3.xx.

Og

 

[sirhugs]

Re: Will Og ever stop?

I have just submitted my 4th entry - Absorbed - as Erotic Horror.

I MUST stop. Repeat 1000 times.

However I am ?pleased that Morose Monk is heading for the bottom spot with few votes and still rated at 3.xx.

Og

please don't stop.

I'm really impressed how many writers have multiple entries this contest. I tried that a contest or two back, but am way too busy just now to get more done.

Sorry to say I really liked Morose Monk and gave it a 5.

 

[Rumple Foreskin]

Re: Will Og ever stop?

I have just submitted my 4th entry - Absorbed - as Erotic Horror.

I MUST stop. Repeat 1000 times.

However I am ?pleased that Morose Monk is heading for the bottom spot with few votes and still rated at 3.xx.

Og

Don't try to play innocent with us, you Oggbashan, you. All those entries aren't a form of addtiction, they're a FIENDISH PLOT!.

You're using the contest to get a jump on the NaNoWriMo, book-in-a-month contest. Come the first of November, you'll put all these entries together and have half a book finished. That's FIENDISHLY clever.

Rumple Foreskin

 

[Black Tulip]

I wish there was a stop.

I can't keep up with reading all the entries.
Every time I think I've nearly had them all, there's a whole busload of new ones. *sigh*

Guess I'll have to read through the weekend.

 

[oggbashan]

Re: Re: Will Og ever stop?

Don't try to play innocent with us, you Oggbashan, you. All those entries aren't a form of addtiction, they're a FIENDISH PLOT!.

You're using the contest to get a jump on the NaNoWriMo, book-in-a-month contest. Come the first of November, you'll put all these entries together and have half a book finished. That's FIENDISHLY clever.

Rumple Foreskin

That would be cheating!

Like last year, I'm not going to write a word of my NaNoWriMo effort until 00.01 GMT on 1st November.

What I am doing is finger exercises that result in Halloween stories.

Og

Edited for PS: Just submitted another story, not for the contest but one I wrote two years ago and didn't realise, until Colly started reading my old Silverbridge stories, that I hadn't actually posted on Lit. That was a very easy 2,500 words.

 

[Svenskaflicka]

I've started jotting something down. I don't know if it will be done in time for this year's Halloween, or if it's gonna be Halloweeny at all. I wrote 4 pages yesterday before I fell asleep over the pad, and I still haven't reached the part where she actually goes to the party.
I think ogg's contagious.

 

[oggbashan]

I think ogg's contagious.

Just don't catch the verbosity. You'll never finish NaNo because the story will never end.

Og

 

[Svenskaflicka]

That's what I mean! My stories are changing from "they meet-something happens-they fuck-the end" to "background story - they meet - something happens -something happens - something happens - they fuck - something happens - to be continued..."

 

[oggbashan]

Poor Svenskaflicka!

When you write three Lit pages before they have sex then you are getting close to my sort of story.

Or forget to include the sex at all and put it in 'Erotic Couplings'.

Og

 

[Svenskaflicka]

Poor Svenskaflicka!

When you write three Lit pages before they have sex then you are getting close to my sort of story.

Or forget to include the sex at all and put it in 'Erotic Couplings'.

Og

LOL

That's evil, ogg!

 

[cloudy]

My Halloween Contest entry is finally, finally up, after formatting problems, and being rejected for "spelling" because there's bits and pieces of it written in Creole.

WHOOP!!!

Possession

 

[Rumple Foreskin]

Cloudy,

I voted and left a comment. Very, very good writing. You'll probably get bashed in the voting due to the amount and location of the sex. If that happens, consider the source and blow it off.

IMHO, your story is so good, you need to clean up the few minor editing errors and submit it to some literary e-zines.

My only suggestion would be to spend more time describing the characters. That will help readers visualize what's happening.

My only fuss is over something no one, except those familiar with the Garden District, will ever catch. If the two women live around the corner of Jackson and St Charles (Danielle could see streetcars) and they attend Tulane, wouldn't they take a streetcar to and from instead of hassling with a car?

Congratulations again on a first-rate piece of writing.

Rumple Foreskin

 

[sirhugs]

Poor Svenskaflicka!

When you write three Lit pages before they have sex then you are getting close to my sort of story.

Or forget to include the sex at all and put it in 'Erotic Couplings'.

Og

so " Sister Nun" is just an abheration? That story gets hot from the first paragrph and just builds intensity. Good thing it's only 1 Lit page or some of us might explode....our brains I mean!

 

[oggbashan]

so " Sister Nun" is just an abheration? That story gets hot from the first paragrph and just builds intensity. Good thing it's only 1 Lit page or some of us might explode....our brains I mean!

When writing 'Incest' you have to give the discerning customers what they want.

My other stories tend to give value for money at least in terms of number of words per story.

Og

 

[cloudy]

Cloudy,

I voted and left a comment. Very, very good writing. You'll probably get bashed in the voting due to the amount and location of the sex. If that happens, consider the source and blow it off.

IMHO, your story is so good, you need to clean up the few minor editing errors and submit it to some literary e-zines.

My only suggestion would be to spend more time describing the characters. That will help readers visualize what's happening.

My only fuss is over something no one, except those familiar with the Garden District, will ever catch. If the two women live around the corner of Jackson and St Charles (Danielle could see streetcars) and they attend Tulane, wouldn't they take a streetcar to and from instead of hassling with a car?

Congratulations again on a first-rate piece of writing.

Rumple Foreskin

Thanks, Rumply!

I had a lot of fun writing that story, even though it's outside the realm of anything I've attempted before. To me, the atmosphere of New Orleans really lends itself to spooky stories, for some reason.

I see your point about the descriptions of the characters, and I may go back later and do some additions in there, maybe take your suggestion about submitting it to some places and see what happens, although I wouldn't even know where to start with that.

You've made my day!

Og: Thanks so much for your comments, as well, sweetie!

 

[impressive]

Better late than never

Just started writing mine today. Hope to finish & submit by tomorrow evening. *sigh* Had not even planned to enter, now I'm sucked into the excitement.

Title: Ghouls Just Wanna Have Fun
Cat: Non-Human

So far, so good.

 

[Rumple Foreskin]

Cloudy,

There are a fair number of e-zines that like "spooky" stories. That's not my genre but even I know a few very small, very non-paying ones. However, my bet is Lou would be your best source of info.

--

Impressive

If Laurel would let you get away with just posting a title, you might have first place locked up.

Rumple

 

[Svenskaflicka]

Re: Better late than never

Ghouls Just Wanna Have Fun

*jealous*

Why didn't I think of that?

 

[impressive]

Impressive

If Laurel would let you get away with just posting a title, you might have first place locked up

The title might be the best part of the entire story.

1,200 words into it. Coming along nicely. Might even submit it today.

 

[impressive]

Hooray!

Done and submitted. Whoop!

 

[matriarch]

Re: Hooray!

Done and submitted. Whoop!

Hell, woman.
And you never even gave me time to read the intro and get back to you.

 

[impressive]

Re: Re: Hooray!

Hell, woman.
And you never even gave me time to read the intro and get back to you.

Oopsy. Sorry. It was a quickie.

 

[cookiejar]

Re: Better late than never

Just started writing mine today. Hope to finish & submit by tomorrow evening. *sigh* Had not even planned to enter, now I'm sucked into the excitement.

Title: Ghouls Just Wanna Have Fun
Cat: Non-Human

So far, so good.

Great title! This I have to read!

Okay I submitted mine just now...if you read it please be kind. I think I'm going to need it.