Tell us about your lowest rated story

My stories are all above 4.5 except for three of them:

The hucow story at 4.3 which I get because it’s a weird kink.

The story about the girl cheating on her fiancé, which is also a 4.3

My one Loving Wives story at 3.6.

Dudes really hate stories about cheating.

Oh well.
I read that LW story. Wasn't even real cheating since she had a green light. ;)
Probably could have gotten an extra point on the score if you'd had the guy prove his manliness by being cruel. :rolleyes:
 
I wrote a story about a werewolf couple swapping with a normal couple. I've only written 1 chapter, which mostly only covers the human male and female werewolf having sex... and touches on the male werewolf and human female...

It's the first story I've written of that nature.

My other stories are all sitting at 4.0 to 4.4... But this one is about 3.7 at the moment, after over a month since I posted it.

Just had someone leave feedback simply saying "Hated it".

Yay me.
 
Coulda swore I replied to this thread way back but after scrolling through 8 pages I can't find it, so:

Like many here, mine in a LW story. Also a 750 word. Double strike.

3.76.

You Hear The Bullet is a short, blunt little tale of a plumber who gets shot by a jealous husband after being seduced by his Hot Wife while fixing her pipes.

It was an experimental story on my part where I gave away the ending not just at the beginning, but in the title itself.

The hate was from two separate camps: those who hated the shooting and those who hated that the wife didn't take a bullet, too.

I'm surprised the score isn't worse, frankly.
 
My "Missionary Position for Beginners" has a score of 0.00

The two main problems I think are
(1) Most people interested in this subject probably don't spend much time on Literotica, if any
(2) I haven't written it yet
 
For my lowest-rated story that actually has a rating-

My multi chapter work “Counseling” was a weave of several celebrity gossip interviews into a single piece where a celebrity counselor tries to develop a sideline for her declining career that helps other celebrities deal with the problems of careers going stronger. That she’s part of an organization that has faced fallout over its counseling practices and is opposed by someone else in the same group who is doing things very wrong is a problem. It gets worse when said opponent starts victimizing the heroine’s family and friends.

"Counseling Ch. 3" was the weakest part of the series. I tried to keep the sex hot and make it work within the plot, but addressing various substories the greater work touched on was of more concern to me. I'm also not convinced I got the emotions correct for all the characters, and it's possible I connected it too closely to my other stories, which might upset my not-as-dedicated readers. Oh well, ratings can always change. If you want to change my rating- hopefully in a positive way- https://www.literotica.com/s/counseling-ch-03

Be aware that you may want to read the other chapters also to get the entire plot of the work. And the larger series related to it- “Passion” and “Rendezvous”. If you want to rate them and my other stories higher also, that would of course be welcome. Constructive Feedback is always appreciated. :)
 
I read that LW story. Wasn't even real cheating since she had a green light. ;)
Probably could have gotten an extra point on the score if you'd had the guy prove his manliness by being cruel. :rolleyes:
I think what really set them off was that she fucked an old boyfriend while she was pregnant, and suffered no consequences other than feeling briefly bad about it.

I deleted the nasty anonymous comments, but they really wanted “the bitch to suffer”.
 
I think what really set them off was that she fucked an old boyfriend while she was pregnant, and suffered no consequences other than feeling briefly bad about it.

I deleted the nasty anonymous comments, but they really wanted “the bitch to suffer”.
In short, none of your characters were hateful, so they had no one in the story to identify with.
 
My "Missionary Position for Beginners" has a score of 0.00

The two main problems I think are
(1) Most people interested in this subject probably don't spend much time on Literotica, if any
(2) I haven't written it yet
Don't be too down on yourself - there's always time to write it.

;)
 
I was trying to get back into writing and threw out an opening chapter of an idea I'd been playing with, partly featuring what I am familiar with and enjoy fantasizing about (femdom) and partly less familiar with (incest). I put it in Nonconsent/Reluctance (the hubby/dad being the reluctant one), but now in hindsight see it might've fared better in Fetish (or maybe not, lol). I still like the overall idea (hubby/dad ends up being submissive to both wife and daughter) and think it could be an interesting novella-length tale, but I'll not offer much defense against critical critique of the execution of the particular version published here. Hm, maybe I'll return it to the list of tales to work on.
 
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