~Texas Cantina~

ah.... flattery will get you almost everywhere... ;)

(sitting next to Max, taking her hand and kissing the back of it softly)
Certainly, the pleasure is all mine indeed...

Allow me to introduce myself... Tim, from the Dallas area...

So, "almost everywhere" you say? Hmmmm, would beg to wonder where flattery wouldn't take me and what I must do to get there as well?
 
Story Rejection ...

The story below was recently rejected for publication for being too short of all things ...

Thoughts?

Suggestions?

It’s Friday night, I find myself rushing home from work for one thing, your daily story to me. We’ve discussed in detail what they do to me and how much I long for you after reading one of them.

As I dash through the front door, shedding my clothes with each step. I fly by the laptop, and fire it up on my way to the bathroom. I always feel the need to make sure I am looking my best, even if you’re not physically with me. I grab a glass of red wine and make my way to the couch and the laptop.

I read the last words of your story, across the screen. You always have a way of making sure that every last detail is in order. I find myself running my hands up and down my naked body. I always like to read your stories in the nude; it gives so much more flavor to the words that I read. My fingertips lingering at my breast, slowly rolling my nipples between my fingers, gently tugging, pulling ... the sensations become warmer as my pinches are getting harder and harder as if you were here with me. My head falls back against the couch as a moan escapes my lips. This has become a normal act for me whenever I read one of your stories, I think it’s the mental hold you have over me.

I’m at the perfect angle on the couch to rest my legs on the coffee table. Resting the laptop on a pillow besides me, knees bent and legs spread wide open. I closed my eyes and began to slowly move my fingers up and down my wet slit. I am always wet after I play with my nipples, sometimes I believe I can cum just by playing with them. My strokes across my wet slit become faster and for some reason harder. Letting my finger rest on my clit and forcefully rubbing it harder back and forth, the pleasure begins to over take the discomfort and my hips begin to move with the rhythm of my finger. At that moment I can hear your whisper in my ear, telling me how much you love watching me pleasure myself. How proud you are of me to be the wanton slut that you know I am.

I can feel the warmth in me begin to rise as my finger continues to assault my clit in a mad passion, like you have done to me so many times before; it’s etched in my mind. I can feel my clit getting harder, craving more attention, needing more. My legs spread so wide open that they begin to ache, my breathing is becoming heavier, and my legs are beginning to shake. My hips come off the edge of the couch as the warm feeling in me begins to rise, my mind races to thoughts of denial, stopping, keeping this feeling but I know that I can not. I take my finger and slide it roughly into my wet pussy coating it with my warm juices, then back to the assault on my clit, I can feel it aching, throbbing and now that I am close to releasing the need that has built up inside of me.

As I come to the point of no return I open my eyes and see you standing in front of me, smiling and watching me intently. My eyes move down your body as I see you have your hard cock in your hand, slowly stroking it. As my eyes move back up your body they come in contact with yours and a slow grin emerges from your lips. The look of lust in your eyes as your hand begins to move faster up and down your cock. A low growl coming from deep inside you can be heard, and lets me know you are on the verge of releasing your seed. A moan escapes my lips as I know its time for me to release. I immediately shove three fingers deep inside of me, I can feel my pussy contract on them and squeeze them harder as I feel my juices coat them and trickle down my crack to my ass....plunging harder, my hips bucking. I lay breathless and shaky for several minutes afterwards. My eyes slowly open, beginning to focus. I sit up only to find, I’m alone …
 
can you make it longer? :D

unfortunately I also get asked that question when my clothes come off. :(
 
Have you thought about writing a series of vignettes like it and posting them as one "story"

Well I do have another one that is set in the bathroom.

I might be able to add that to it ...

Thanks for that Max.

:D
 
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