"To keep the review thread clean..."

[pelegrino]

Thanks piscator for comentinng on FAREWELL FUCK.
The title is used only for the customers. I tried to describe a lot more than that in a few stanzas, but how far I succeeded is in doubt still in my head. Comments like yours help and give me revising thoughts, but then I think: Is such revising worth it?
Perhaps it says what it says after all and needs no attempt at improving.

 

[Ashesh9]

Thank you Tazz for commenting on " Death Penalty ..." & HoneyA for commenting on " ...fine ....line...spine .."

 

[Ashesh9]

Thank you HoneyA for commenting again on " .....fine ....line....spine " as well as Tazz who has also commented on the above / same Poem !!

 

[Ashesh9]

Many thanks to Waking Down for his ice compliments on " Death Penalty "

 

[Ashesh9]

appreciashun'

thanx to HoneyA for intelligent question on " Lady Shark CBT ..."

 

[Ashesh9]

Many thanx to BrandyBeeBee for complimenting ....fine....line....spine !!

 

[legerdemer]

thanks to greenmountaineer...

...for recommending Bliss, A Purgatory in the "new poem recommendations" thread and for his kind comment on the poem itself.

And thanks to HoneyAdored for stopping by and commenting.

 

[Ashesh9]

thank you Piscator for commenting on my illustrated offerin' New Delhi Shame !!

 

[Ashesh9]

Thank you Wakin'Down & GM for your extremely kind words on ...Feelinglessness & thank youWakin'Down for the Reco on NPR thread!!!
Also thanx. to Wakin'Down for his compliment on ......Shining Needle !!!

 

[Ashesh9]

Thank you Legerdemer for taking time off from managing the Poetic Challenge to comment on ....non-feelingness !
Thank you Erectus for your compliments on A shining needle & bobbitize a Strap-on .

 

[Ashesh9]

Many thanks to Dem & Erectus for comments on Gal with a Gun [ & Dem I duly noted your caution against gun proliferashun' ] Thanks to Dem for her kind words on ...does vs. Happens & to Dinky1 for "Fave"-ing same .

 

[Ashesh9]

Thank you Puertororm for " fave"-ing Gals with Guns !!!

 

[greenmountaineer]

Thanks to Ash, Piscator, and demure for commenting on "The F Word."

 

[Piscator]

moved to new poem recomendations

 

[greenmountaineer]

My thanks to Todd for having recommended "More Than Back, You Took Me In" and demure for adding it as a favorite.

 

[Ashesh9]

Dem thanx for your kind comments on " ....black Rhino / white Texan "

 

[greenmountaineer]

"So nice of you to say" I say to to Ash, tod, and Mer for the recommend in PF&D for "Glossolalia" and to demure and Honey Adored for having added it to their favorite list.

 

[Ashesh9]

Belated but heartfelt thanks to Dem for her kind compliments on Warehouse .....of Mind

 

[Lyricalli]

Thank you for recommending my poem, legerdemer. That was unexpected, and I'm touched and tickled that you like it so much.

I also want to thank both you and greenmountaineer for leaving such nice comments on it. I haven't been as active here as I should be, and it means a lot that you took the time to respond.


ETA: Another thank you to todski for giving Mer's recommendation a second and leaving a comment on the poem.

 

[greenmountaineer]

Thanks to demure for having favorited and commented on "Renewal of Vows."

 

[Piscator]

Thanks to Honey Adored and 2 Anons for kind comments on 'And if not love' and Ash for getting 'Clearing history'

 

[greenmountaineer]

Interesting

Maybe poetry isn't dying after all:

http://www.nytimes.com/2015/11/08/b...reed-succeeds-in-taking-verse-viral.html?_r=0

 

[legerdemer]

Thanks, Ashesh - I'm very glad you enjoyed Odalisque.

 

[Ashesh9]

Thank You Dem & GM for your kind words on my illustrated poem Ganapati Vandana ....I had submitted this round Ganapati Visarjan & this was posted in Lit Board on 28th October when I was too much taken up by Diwali celebrashuns & missed seeing this altogether !!!
Humble apologies to both Dem & GM for inexcusable delays in acknowledging their compliments
---ash9

 

[legerdemer]

Ash, so glad you liked The Topology of Love.