VoraciousValue
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Not nearly as bad as the stuff James Joyce came up with, especially Finnegan's Wake.I started a book last night and put it aside after page 9. On page 7, it had her age and that of her sister. It went on to talk of her age 4 years later, but didn't change the sister's age. The next, on page 9, said she was the mistress of a home that had been in her mother's family for hundreds of years...but, the previous pages has her father taking her and sister away from home when her mother died and leaving them. I'm confused.
How could this be a National Best Seller? How could an editor miss this? I felt like I was reading some amateur Lit author who chose to not to use an editor. Right now, I'm not sure if I should continue. I don't want to be further disappointed.