Writing Question re: Dungeon

[SEVERUSMAX]

The other man, in this case, is a Dom. Both men are bi. I like your ideas. Would you be willing to edit the scene once it's finished? I REALLY don't want to be slammed for missing a beat in the scene.

Edit for content? Hmm...sure. I've got a lot going on, but I can fit it in somewhere.

 

[angelicminx]

Edit for content? Hmm...sure. I've got a lot going on, but I can fit it in somewhere.

Thanks, hon! I'll get it to you as soon as I can.

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

Thanks, hon! I'll get it to you as soon as I can.

You're welcum.

 

[elfin_odalisque]

The dungeon scenario seems a bit cliched for a Domme. Why not bright lights, white walls, cages and almost a clinical approach. The 'Mistress Pain' sites look too much like fantasy - have a Google at 'Lady Sonia'.

I'm no expert here, but isn't the absolute key of Femdom the idea of humiliation?

The male is quintessentially stronger but is forced to submit by the stronger ego.

I'll stop giving away my fetishes.

 

[angelicminx]

The dungeon scenario seems a bit cliched for a Domme. Why not bright lights, white walls, cages and almost a clinical approach. The 'Mistress Pain' sites look too much like fantasy - have a Google at 'Lady Sonia'.

I'm no expert here, but isn't the absolute key of Femdom the idea of humiliation?

The male is quintessentially stronger but is forced to submit by the stronger ego.

I'll stop giving away my fetishes.

Good point, but I need the dark dungeon and the shackles for this particular plot. I don't know where this is going until it gets there. (Don'tcha love that part of writing?) Considering that this will post to Erotic Horror...


And, please, by all means, give away your fetishes. Nice to see you again, Elfie!