2009 Survivor Literotica Poetry Challenge: Planning & Plotting

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There's a great little book that has become my poetic bible for trying forms - The New Book of Forms (A handbook of poetics) by Lewis Turco. Don't be put off by the huge variety of forms, all the familiar ones are in there too. If you are serious about trying to write form poetry it is worth the investment.

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Thank you. I had a gift certificate I needed to use. :) :rose:
 
That is a provocative metaphor to use on a porn site, m'dear. Just sayin'.

But I don't think the idea is to use every form we can possibly think of. As I've said before, I think the Japanese forms (e.g., haiku) aren't well-suited for the game as conformance to those forms is not a matter of objective judgment and I think we should avoid arguments of the form That's not a haiku! Yes, it is. No, it's not. Yes, it is....

I don't really see how a Haiku is subjective. As long as it has 17 syllables, in three groups of 5, 7, and 5 syllables, and has a seasonal theme it's a Haiku. It certainly is less subjective than say Prose Poetry (is it a poem or a story). I also think that it is a very common form and it would be a shame to not include it.
 
I don't really see how a Haiku is subjective. As long as it has 17 syllables, in three groups of 5, 7, and 5 syllables, and has a seasonal theme it's a Haiku. It certainly is less subjective than say Prose Poetry (is it a poem or a story). I also think that it is a very common form and it would be a shame to not include it.

*Snerk* Sandy you just like to write Haiku! You know that you will also have to write in the other forms as well, right?
 
I don't really see how a Haiku is subjective. As long as it has 17 syllables, in three groups of 5, 7, and 5 syllables, and has a seasonal theme it's a Haiku. It certainly is less subjective than say Prose Poetry (is it a poem or a story). I also think that it is a very common form and it would be a shame to not include it.
There is always a lot of argument here as to what constitutes haiku form. I think it's fair to say that most of the Literoticans who have studied east Asian poetry would say the syllable requirement is not applicable to English-language haiku, for example, nor the three line requirement. Also the kinds of themes and images and the presence of a kireji are qualities that get discussed (and argued about).

Litster jthserra has written a series of articles about the haiku. The first one is here, and might give you a feeling for the kind of arguments that might ensue. Others are here, here, here, and here. I'm not sure that's the correct order, but you'll probably get the idea that there are strong opinions about what is and is not a haiku. I personally avoid the form at all costs. ;)

On the other hand, if everyone playing the game agrees on a definition like yours that is easy to qualify, I'm all for it.
 
This is good. Any other additions to the list for consideration?


What about the roundeau redoubled?


As for the question of haiku, you might consider a category including haiku, senryu and zappai which should avoid any question regarding whether it is a haiku or not. Of course we'd want avoid a prescribed English syllable count with perhaps only a limit of a maximum of seventeen English syllables.


SRS
 
What about the roundeau redoubled?


As for the question of haiku, you might consider a category including haiku, senryu and zappai which should avoid any question regarding whether it is a haiku or not. Of course we'd want avoid a prescribed English syllable count with perhaps only a limit of a maximum of seventeen English syllables.


SRS
I kind of feel like I'm doing your work for you, but here:
All I care about is that we have an agreed upon and clear definition of a form(s) that will satisfy a PS requirement. If you can mixmaster something from these three forms and end up with something that is objective, I'm like all over that.

Why, I think, we're 'spose to be discussing things.

Discussing.

Pardon.
 
What about the roundeau redoubled?
You don't really want to write one of those, do you? Why not just chuck that form and write a sonnet redoublée? I mean, that first one's only twenty-five lines, eh? The other's like 210.

Though, if you really want to, I'll add it to the list. Send me a definition of the form, please.
 
I think that if we concentrate on structure over content in most of the formulae listed here there shouldn't be any arguments about how a poem fits into it.

For instance, a sestina is traditionally about the pastoral view or scenic imagery so if a poet jumps away from the tradition of bucolic pastures and the like, have they been unsuccessful in the form?

A sonnet is another type of poem that depends on the development of theme inside the actual structure of the poem. If we write these then I feel the safest way to include them is to put out that there must be 12 lines of rhyming iambic pentametre with a 2 line couplet that wraps the poem up.

What I guess I'm saying is that the only limits that we can place on the formulae chosen would be to simply state the structural requirements and avoid content issues. I think Tzed had it right when he figured we should exclude the poetry that is more dependant on theme and content to determine it's name than it is on structure.

Prose poetry should be counted as "free verse" and can be produced as part of the ratio of form to free, IMO.
 
You really think the villanelle and terzanelle are that close?
As far as I understand, they are pretty identical.

What makes them special is that they have lines that you must repeat at specific places thoughout the poem, thus limiting the poet in a very specific way. It quickly becomes an architectural puzzle as well as a poetic challenge.

The only different that I can see is that they specify different places where the repeats occur.


champagne1982 said:
Prose poetry should be counted as "free verse" and can be produced as part of the ratio of form to free, IMO.
Yah, it's hardly a form in itself. Rather a question of style, imo.
 
You really think the villanelle and terzanelle are that close?
As Tzed mentioned Turco's definition of a Terzanelle I don't need to reiterate. I do understand that Villanelle and Terza Rima were combined in schema and refrains to come up with a friendlier form than both. This is just my opinion and springs from my enjoyment of writing rhyme and enjambment driven poems. (No, I don't share them all since that would be like wearing dirty underwear to the store. What if I get hit by a car!?)
 
OK, so we need to start putting together a list of forms. Just a list for now, then we'll take care of the explanations and examples. Could you go through that book and pick us a wide enough selection of the classics? :D

Here's an initial list, more or less of the top of my head with some assist from Turco. I don't think all are desirable for the contest, but I assume we'll all discuss that later. Y'all feel free to add onto this list--it is in no way definitive.
Specific Forms

Acrostic
Cento
Cinquain
Clerihew
Double Dactyl
Ghazal
Glosa
Haiku
Limerick
Onegin Stanza (Pushkin Sonnet)
Pantoum
Renga
Rondeau
Rondel
Rondine
Roundelay
Rubliw
Senryu
Sestina
Sonnet (could be separated into English, Italian, Spenserian, etc.)
Tanka
Terzanelle
Triolet
Tritina
Villanelle

Stanza Forms

Ballad
Blank Verse
Couplet
Ottava Rima
Prose Poem
Quatrain
Rubáiyát
Syllabic Verse
Terza Rima​
I separated the stanza forms because they often control the form of poems of indeterminate length. For example, while a couplet can be a stand-alone poem, like Pope's
I am His Highness' dog at Kew;
Pray tell me, sir, whose dog are you?​
it is usually the basis for a much longer poem (e.g., Pope's The Rape of the Lock).

Also, many of these forms are closely related—Rondeau/Rondel/Rondine/Roundelay, for example, or Villanelle/Terzanelle (and possibly Triolet).

ETA: Suggestions by Champie.

What about the roundeau redoubled?


As for the question of haiku, you might consider a category including haiku, senryu and zappai which should avoid any question regarding whether it is a haiku or not. Of course we'd want avoid a prescribed English syllable count with perhaps only a limit of a maximum of seventeen English syllables.


SRS
Bumping this to gather the building list onto the current page.
 
A sonnet is another type of poem that depends on the development of theme inside the actual structure of the poem. If we write these then I feel the safest way to include them is to put out that there must be 12 lines of rhyming iambic pentametre with a 2 line couplet that wraps the poem up.
Agreed, except that Italian (Petrarchan) sonnets don't end on couplets. Perhaps we have two or three kinds of sonnets, given their importance in English-language poetry. But in any case, I don't want to restrict us to English sonnet form.
Prose poetry should be counted as "free verse" and can be produced as part of the ratio of form to free, IMO.
I would agree with that. I added prose poem to the list of form simply for discussion purposes.

I've updated the list with SRS's suggestions as well.
 
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You don't really want to write one of those, do you? Why not just chuck that form and write a sonnet redoublée? I mean, that first one's only twenty-five lines, eh? The other's like 210.

Though, if you really want to, I'll add it to the list. Send me a definition of the form, please.

I'd rather write a rondeau redouble than a sestina any day....

A favorite: Rondeau Redoublé (and Scarcely Worth the Trouble, at That)


Here is a description of the form:Rondeau Redouble


Of course we could also consider the paradelle, perhaps for a special bonus...

SRS
 
I'd rather write a rondeau redouble than a sestina any day....

A favorite: Rondeau Redoublé (and Scarcely Worth the Trouble, at That)


Here is a description of the form:Rondeau Redouble
Thanks. I'll make an entry on it when I get the chance. I already added it to the list in this thread.
Of course we could also consider the paradelle, perhaps for a special bonus...

SRS
I had thought about suggesting the paradelle, but I actually tried to write one once (one that at least kind of made sense, not an intentionally bad poem like Billy Collins' original) and couldn't make it work.

But hey. I'll try anything if other people want to. I'm also thinking about the caudate sonnet and the curtal sonnet. I was reading about them earlier today.

It's fun just looking at all these forms, actually.
 
I'm going to need some help organizing this. I'm flying out to Canada on Tuesday, and I'm going to be there until the end of the year, and I'm not sure if I will be able to access the internet very often during this period. I will return in time to post all the rules and threads and whatnot, and I will come up with 50 triggers to go along 25 required forms (plus 25 free verse). In the mean time, I would appreciate any help in defining each of the items on the following list, in a concise manner, with an example or two for each:

01. Cinquain (Crapsey's)
02. Clerihew
03. Curtal Sonnet
04. Double Dactyl
05. Ghazal
06. Glosa
07. Haiku, Senryu or Zappai
08. Limerick
09. Onegin Stanza
10. Pantoum
11. Rondeau
12. Roundelay
13. Sestina
14. Sonnet (English or Spenserian)
15. Sonnet (Italian)
16. Tanka
17. Tritina
18. Triolet
19. Villanelle
20. Ballad (5 stanzas or more)
21. Blank Verse (20 lines or more)
22. Couplet (20 lines or more)
23. Ottava Rima (3 stanzas or more)
24. Rubaiyat Quatrain (5 stanzas or more)
25. Terza Rima (4 stanzas or more + finale)
 
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For example:

01. Cinquain (Crapsey's)

For Poetry Survivor Challenge, let's consider that the Cinquain is a 5-line stanza with a syllable count of 2-4-6-8-2. In each line, half of syllables are stressed, and half aren't. For example:
Listen…
With faint dry sound,
Like steps of passing ghosts,
The leaves, frost-crisp'd, break from the trees
And fall.​
 
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Silly question time ..... If I write something that is in a different form from those listed does it count somewhere or other?
 
Silly question time ..... If I write something that is in a different form from those listed does it count somewhere or other?
It can count under free verse, I would imagine - provided it corresponds to one of the 50 triggers than will be posted on January 1st. ;)
 
I'm going to need some help organizing this. I'm flying out to Canada on Tuesday, and I'm going to be there until the end of the year, and I'm not sure if I will be able to access the internet very often during this period. I will return in time to post all the rules and threads and whatnot, and I will come up with 50 triggers to go along 25 required forms (plus 25 free verse). In the mean time, I would appreciate any help in defining each of the items on the following list, in a concise manner, with an example or two for each:

01. Cinq-Cinquain (Crapsey's)
02. Clerihew
03. Double Dactyl
04. Ghazal
05. Glosa
06. Haiku, Senryu or Zappai
07. Limerick
08. Onegin Stanza
09. Pantoum
10. Rondeau
11. Rondeau Redoublé
12. Rondel
13. Roundelay
14. Sestina
15. Sonnet (Italian, English or Spenserian)
16. Tanka
17. Tritina
18. Triolet
19. Villanelle
20. Ballad (5 stanzas or more)
21. Blank Verse (20 lines or more)
22. Couplet (20 lines or more)
23. Ottava Rima (3 stanzas or more)
24. Rubaiyat Quatrain (5 stanzas or more)
25. Terza Rima (5 stanzas or more + finale)
That was my intent with this thread, although I don't know how concise I always am and I've already included forms that aren't in this list. Feel free to copy any definition out of that thread, modify the description as you see fit, and repost it here.

Some general comments on this list:
  • Variants on the Rondeau seem slightly over-represented (four out of twenty-five forms). I would suggest dropping one from Rondeau, Rondeau Redoublé, Rondel, Roundelay and splitting the sonnet into two categories: Italian/Petrarchan sonnet and English/Shakespearean/Spenserian sonnet. But not my decision.
  • I'm a little disappointed in the cinq-cinquain, as I think it takes a form that is very focused and intense (the basic Crapsey cinquain) and turns it into a mere stanza form. Easy enough to write, but the character of the form is, I think, lost. Like using the "5-7-5" definition of haiku and writing a poem of five "haiku stanzas."
  • Both the Clerihew and the Double Dactyl depend upon people's proper names, so there must be triggers that would be adaptable to their form. (I'm sure there will be, but I'm just pointing this out.)
  • If you change the Terza Rima requirement to four stanzas and a finale, we could write a terza rima sonnet. ;)
One question about the triggers: For each round of 25 form poems and 25 free verse poems, must one use all 50 triggers? That is, does each round require that all triggers be used once and not repeated?

In subsequent rounds, will there be additional triggers or the same set of 50?
 
That was my intent with this thread
Oh, I hadn't seen it. Thanks! :D

Variants on the Rondeau seem slightly over-represented (four out of twenty-five forms). I would suggest dropping one from Rondeau, Rondeau Redoublé, Rondel, Roundelay and splitting the sonnet into two categories: Italian/Petrarchan sonnet and English/Shakespearean/Spenserian sonnet. But not my decision.
No, that's a good call. I admittedly didn't spend enough time compiling the list, with everything going on with my life at the same time. I'll revise the list.
I'm a little disappointed in the cinq-cinquain, as I think it takes a form that is very focused and intense (the basic Crapsey cinquain) and turns it into a mere stanza form. Easy enough to write, but the character of the form is, I think, lost. Like using the "5-7-5" definition of haiku and writing a poem of five "haiku stanzas."
I thought the Cinq-Cinquain would add a little edge to the challenge of writing a Cinquain, but I can see your point. I think I lost sight for a second of the fact that we want to be writing poetry rather than building a puzzle.
Both the Clerihew and the Double Dactyl depend upon people's proper names, so there must be triggers that would be adaptable to their form. (I'm sure there will be, but I'm just pointing this out.)
Yep, I know. That's also why I didn't include the Acrostic and the Cento on the list of forms, even if they might pop-up as a trigger. ;)
If you change the Terza Rima requirement to four stanzas and a finale, we could write a terza rima sonnet. ;)
I could, but you'd have to pick on whether to score it under "terza rima" or "sonnet", not both. ;)

One question about the triggers: For each round of 25 form poems and 25 free verse poems, must one use all 50 triggers? That is, does each round require that all triggers be used once and not repeated?
Yes, no repeats. I'm thinking, however, about adding some sort of immunity lottery, which would allow the winner to tick a trigger or form without using it.

In subsequent rounds, will there be additional triggers or the same set of 50?
No additional triggers, but you can't use the same triggers for the same forms. There will be different triggers and different forms on the monthly bonus rounds.
 
Here is the revised list of forms for Survivor. This may be the last time I can post anything to the forum before the 30th of December, so I will really need for you guys to keep this going. Don't be afraid of changing things and making decisions while I'm gone. ;)

01. Cinquain (Crapsey's)
02. Clerihew
03. Curtal Sonnet
04. Double Dactyl
05. Ghazal
06. Glosa
07. Haiku, Senryu or Zappai
08. Limerick
09. Onegin Stanza
10. Pantoum
11. Rondeau
12. Roundelay
13. Sestina
14. Sonnet (English or Spenserian)
15. Sonnet (Italian)
16. Tanka
17. Tritina
18. Triolet
19. Villanelle
20. Ballad (5 stanzas or more)
21. Blank Verse (20 lines or more)
22. Couplet (20 lines or more)
23. Ottava Rima (3 stanzas or more)
24. Rubaiyat Quatrain (5 stanzas or more)
25. Terza Rima (4 stanzas or more + finale)
 
As I still have no proper idea as to what I am supposed to be doing I hope some kind soul will tell me when I boob
 
I've received PMs from some different people who've expressed concern about the forms, either because how they're explained is confusing and uses terminology they are unfamiliar with or that they're thinking about dropping out of the game because the forms seem too hard.

This concerns me because I'm not sure we have all that many people who are going to try the contest anyway. Are the explanations confusing? If so, am I not providing enough detail or clear enough examples? Do I need to explain the terminology better (e.g., spell out what "iambic pentameter" is)?

I suggested earlier that we might want to have a "practice" thread where people can try a form and have others comment on whether the example fit the form or not, and if not, why not. Would that help?

The contest is supposed to be fun. I don't think anyone wants to make it some kind of obstacle course or, as Lauren said, a "puzzle."

Comments? Suggestions?
 
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