oggbashan
Dying Truth seeker
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sweetsubsarahh said:I just read and voted. It's lengthy, well-written, sweet and romantic even when uncomfortably realistic.
Maybe putting a link to that specific story on your sig will help the computer challenged locate it?
But my dear Og, you do realize your characters don't have sex in the first paragraph (or even the first sentence!)
What on earth were you thinking?
Perhaps the voting readers were expecting one of the "I'm cummmmmmmmmiiiinggggg!" genre?
Thank you for this. I have put a link in my sig.
"Uncomfortably realistic" is a good description of parts of it. Why not, even in 'Romance'?
The rating is rising and I appreciate the feedback and comments. Some people seem to like it.
I have just submitted my next entry "E-mail Valentine". Just for Dampy it is short - about 1,000 words. Sex? I added a little but there isn't much except in the mind.
Og (off to read the other entries. Two from me is enough.)