Since every thread picks a problem or issue, it's quite puzzling why folks feel the need keep saying, 'but there are other issues in good writing.' But if it makes ya feel better!
I believe that's called a difference of opinion. Surely dissent is allowed for in a forum, ostensibly, dedicated to the open and free exchange of ideas on the topic of creative erotic writing.
FYI, I agree with you where most other genres of literary fiction are concerned. I'm just of the opinion that erotic/literary porn should be almost visually stimulating in its evocativeness.