Esperanza_Hidalgo
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HI guys. Most of my lines are spur of the moment kinda thingees. I can't write poetry, I just write. Most of the time it's just for me so this is a BIG step up. Critics are more than welcome.
Nay! Silent night
nor sleep delight
A flounders kiss
of crickets hiss
Melody masking rain and sea
clouding over, misteriously, memory
A hairless whisper out of reach
leaves fall drearily, a distant peach
Deserving the unnerving escapes the train
and hopeful trains track steady again
Doors closing exposing a ticklish fear
Next stop: peaches
Stand clear
hi aussie