Annoncing my poem! You jey!

Sara Crewe said:
Now I do understand that you are a very intelligent person but how could you possibly know that?

Through the wisdom that comes with age.
 
As of ... now... I am 1.107264345 X 10^21 picoseconds old (give-or-take).

Please don't hold that against me.
 
Wittgenstein and Feyerabend
twisted logic, both of them.
What's True, what's False? I do not think
I can distinguish. Quine would. Discrete.
 
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Eluard said:
Careless Memory by Duran x 2 is a great song.

But for early Eighties greatness it is not possible to go past Echo and the Bunnymen. And if I hear one word said against them then I'll put the whole forum on Ignore!

I have no idea what it means to be "put on ignore." Sounds bad. If it means I can't read your poetry, please don't do it. It's quite fine. I should hope to be so good one day.

And, speaking of Echo and the Bunnymen, The Killing Moon is ... I don't have words to describe it. I'll try: it's haunting, beautiful, definitively 80's and, yet, timeless. You won't get me to say a bad word against this band. Sorry.
 
Picodiribibi said:
And, speaking of Echo and the Bunnymen, The Killing Moon is ... I don't have words to describe it. I'll try: it's haunting, beautiful, definitively 80's and, yet, timeless. You won't get me to say a bad word against this band. Sorry.

And Ocean Rain from the same album is even better. I looked on YouTube but there seems only to be a live version of it — can't quite compare with the studio version.
 
There ya go, here I am and everyone's gone. Ah well. Viziers never sleep.

Big fan of Echo and the Bunnymen, indeed. And Eluard, I'd still lay a fiver that I have lingerie older than you, so just quit that age stuff right now. We're all curmudgeons here, regardless of age, so we can speak freely...

peasants properly terrorized, I can relax in my snuggly coffin for the rest of the night.

Sweet dreams, everyone. And my wish for particularly saucy ones for a few of you...

bijou
 
Alright. The Vizier is understimulated this weekend and requires amusement and inspiration. Another thread has me thinking about erotic language and how our esthetics apply to "sexy" poetry, and I'm also thinking about all my favorite anglo-saxonisms, and how much I like them, particularly the monosyllabic ones. So the challenge is this:

Write a poem, or even a short piece of prose, that would absolutely, unquestionably be labeled "erotica", as opposed to "pornography" in the sense that it is conventionally debated in places like this, but use at least one completely "pornographic" term. I needn't list examples, but I will anyway, since I like them: fuck, pussy, cock, fuck, dick, tits, fuck, balls, cunt, fuck, did I say fuck? Don't forget fuck.

Let's mess with my head. It's fun. And it may explode, so there's that exciting element of potential danger...

bijou
 
unpredictablebijou said:
Alright. The Vizier is understimulated this weekend and requires amusement and inspiration. Another thread has me thinking about erotic language and how our esthetics apply to "sexy" poetry, and I'm also thinking about all my favorite anglo-saxonisms, and how much I like them, particularly the monosyllabic ones. So the challenge is this:

Write a poem, or even a short piece of prose, that would absolutely, unquestionably be labeled "erotica", as opposed to "pornography" in the sense that it is conventionally debated in places like this, but use at least one completely "pornographic" term. I needn't list examples, but I will anyway, since I like them: fuck, pussy, cock, fuck, dick, tits, fuck, balls, cunt, fuck, did I say fuck? Don't forget fuck.

Let's mess with my head. It's fun. And it may explode, so there's that exciting element of potential danger...

bijou

Well, if exploding heads are the prize, then I must go for it!

Motet

May your hands be earth, may your face be water.

How did they come to you but through nothing
The dish of birds spilling from your breasts
The tree of lightning splitting your cunt into
Two equal roses.

Let these hands be wolves on the snow of you
Let them tear at you like gales.
I lay my stone head in your night-black grass.
Like eternity.



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I like to mess with people's heads

Fuck

I don’t want your fingers
to slide across my cover
or slip between my pages.
I want you to slap me down
on the table against my spine.
Mark your place in me
with red skin and gloss
and when I fall open, steal
all my words but one.
 
* laughing and clapping *

oh well done so far! Working on my own contribution but the damn customers kept wanting to buy things today...

You people are fabulous.

bijou
 
Sara Crewe said:
Fuck

I don’t want your fingers
to slide across my cover
or slip between my pages.
I want you to slap me down
on the table against my spine.
Mark your place in me
with red skin and gloss
and when I fall open, steal
all my words but one.
That was so hot, my screen burst into flame and I had to spray the entire contents of my fire extinguisher to put it out.

If words were gasoline, m'dear, you'd be facing an arson rap.

Yee-ikes. :eek:
 
I saw her fuck with his mind
using fingertips
gliding across his forearm.
A tactile temptress in action.

She followed that up with a pout,
Fresh gloss finish,
Red,
that stunned him into inaction.

Breast pressed up against his arm,
she had him
catering to her every whim.
And she knew it.

Smiling her secret smile,
knowing she implied promises
she had no intention of keeping,
and not minding in the least.
 
Sara Crewe said:
Fuck

I don’t want your fingers
to slide across my cover
or slip between my pages.
I want you to slap me down
on the table against my spine.
Mark your place in me
with red skin and gloss
and when I fall open, steal
all my words but one.


you are a very naughty girl
 
Tathagata said:
you are a very naughty girl

And you are having very naughty thoughts this Sunday morning. :p

(although why should today be different...)
 
Angeline said:
And you are having very naughty thoughts this Sunday morning. :p

(although why should today be different...)

I'm thinking about fake eggs and turkey bacon and homefries
all nice and puritanical like
then Sara says " fuck" and my whole Sunday goes in the gutter.

Nice game yesterday huh?
Can you say Schill who?
 
Tathagata said:
I'm thinking about fake eggs and turkey bacon and homefries
all nice and puritanical like
then Sara says " fuck" and my whole Sunday goes in the gutter.

Nice game yesterday huh?
Can you say Schill who?

They say he'll be back in two weeks. I say not.

T just staggered out of bed and found out he does not have to take number one kid fishing after all. Put God back in Sunday for him. :D
 
Angeline said:
They say he'll be back in two weeks. I say not.

T just staggered out of bed and found out he does not have to take number one kid fishing after all. Put God back in Sunday for him. :D

Were you out hunting nightcrawlers all night?
:p


when do you leave by the way?
tomorrow?
 
Hi Tath! Hi Ange! How are ya? Where you going Ange? Somewhere cool? 'Course I won't be here to read your answer, so why did I ask?

Hope you both are well, and everyone else here. I've still had no word from Rybby. Thats a puzzle. Have a good day and a great Fall. Bye!
 
BooMerengue said:
Hi Tath! Hi Ange! How are ya? Where you going Ange? Somewhere cool? 'Course I won't be here to read your answer, so why did I ask?

Hope you both are well, and everyone else here. I've still had no word from Rybby. Thats a puzzle. Have a good day and a great Fall. Bye!

Hey there sweety! Great to see you. You have a pm. :)
 
BooMerengue said:
Hi Tath! Hi Ange! How are ya? Where you going Ange? Somewhere cool? 'Course I won't be here to read your answer, so why did I ask?

Hope you both are well, and everyone else here. I've still had no word from Rybby. Thats a puzzle. Have a good day and a great Fall. Bye!


Hi Boo
Nice to see you
:rose:
 
Tathagata said:
Hi Boo
Nice to see you
:rose:

When I was a kid, I wanted to be Tiger Lily in Peter Pan. She was much more interesting than Wendy. And she got to fight right alongside Peter Pan. :D
 
Angeline said:
When I was a kid, I wanted to be Tiger Lily in Peter Pan. She was much more interesting than Wendy. And she got to fight right alongside Peter Pan. :D


She just has that look like
" C'mon let me eat for christs sake"

and it was the first time my daughter was able to put her hair up ala Pebbles
Shes been waiting 10 months for that
:rolleyes:
 
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