Anyone care to join in a daisy chain?

[kromen]

Brad,
Your latest has been RCVed, but I think the cat could have easily fell into BDSM.

 

[Bianca_Sommerland]

"It's only a game" is one of mine that got overlooked the first time round. As well as "Thug Passion",which was my first attempt at writing from a female's point of view. Either one or both; doesn't matter. I'm glad that more people are joining the chain.

RVC'd on 'It's only a game'. You actually made baseball interesting! Very cool!

 

[driphoney]

If y'all could, please read this one -- http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=336027

RVC'd.

 

[driphoney]

r. Any you want me to read first?

Oh, and while I'm here, I think I've checked out at least one story for everyone but if I've missed someone please let me know.

Bianca, do you have a link to you story page? Shamefully lazy here this morning.

The title you have in your siggy doesn't link. (Or at least not for me.)

Thanks.

 

[Bianca_Sommerland]

Bianca, do you have a link to you story page? Shamefully lazy here this morning.

The title you have in your siggy doesn't link. (Or at least not for me.)

Thanks.

Really

Weird. Thanks for letting me know, I'll check it out.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1126173&page=submissions

Here's the link. Did you have anything you wanted me to look at?

 

[BradBigBrain]

Brad,
Your latest has been RCVed, but I think the cat could have easily fell into BDSM.

Perhaps. It was just a little rough play on both parts. Thanks for reviewing.

RVC'd.

Thanks!

 

[driphoney]

Really

Weird. Thanks for letting me know, I'll check it out.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1126173&page=submissions

Here's the link. Did you have anything you wanted me to look at?

I can always use a vote on The Fuckin' Chair, to be honest! I'm afraid the rest of what I have up would probably bore you. (Can you tell I'm still suffering through a severe case of Writer's Self-Doubt?)

I read ch. 1 and really enjoyed it. Have you always written? Always been one of those whose mind is creating a story? Ch. 1 was a fast read, so if the others are, I'll get them done off and on today and I do RL. You definitely left me wanting more.

 

[Bianca_Sommerland]

I can always use a vote on The Fuckin' Chair, to be honest! I'm afraid the rest of what I have up would probably bore you. (Can you tell I'm still suffering through a severe case of Writer's Self-Doubt?)

I read ch. 1 and really enjoyed it. Have you always written? Always been one of those whose mind is creating a story? Ch. 1 was a fast read, so if the others are, I'll get them done off and on today and I do RL. You definitely left me wanting more.

Yes I've always written. I'm one of those crazy obsessive types Part of why I love lit is because it's an outlet for some of the ideas that don't fit anywhere else. Also, I don't need to stress as much over every little detail (except grammar, which is getting better ) and I can just write the best story I can and some people are happy.

Don't worry about boring me. I read a lot of different things and I can appreciate the efforts of my fellow writers. If you have self-doubt but you're still writing then you're in a good place because you'll keep wanting to do better. I'm off to read the Fuckin' Chair now...(hopefully it will open this time, I'm having trouble with my tab windows )

And thank you for the last remark. You made my day

Bianca

 

[BradBigBrain]

Yes I've always written. I'm one of those crazy obsessive types Part of why I love lit is because it's an outlet for some of the ideas that don't fit anywhere else. Also, I don't need to stress as much over every little detail (except grammar, which is getting better ) and I can just write the best story I can and some people are happy.

Don't worry about boring me. I read a lot of different things and I can appreciate the efforts of my fellow writers. If you have self-doubt but you're still writing then you're in a good place because you'll keep wanting to do better. I'm off to read the Fuckin' Chair now...(hopefully it will open this time, I'm having trouble with my tab windows )

And thank you for the last remark. You made my day

Bianca

I just RCVd Awakened to the Forbidden.

 

[Bianca_Sommerland]

I just RCVd Awakened to the Forbidden.

RVC'd Wild Abandon. Remind me not to read stuff like that in the middle of the day!

 

[Trudy_Antone]

Hi Kromen,
I RCV'd Thug Passion
x

 

[Trudy_Antone]

*****

 

[Trudy_Antone]

Hi Bianca,
I RCV'd A Pleasant Fright
x

One more then I am switching off Lit and going to study... yeah right!

 

[Bianca_Sommerland]

Hi Bianca,
I RCV'd A Pleasant Fright
x

One more then I am switching off Lit and going to study... yeah right!

Truant I RVC'd White Heart 1-3. Very interesting. Let me know when the next part's up

 

[kromen]

Hey Bianca,
Thanks for the RCV. Is there anything in particular you want looked at?

 

[Bianca_Sommerland]

Hey Bianca,
Thanks for the RCV. Is there anything in particular you want looked at?

Depends how much you want to read

Stolen Magic is my best work IMO, but what I want commented on the most is part 6 (no comments yet )and that won't make much sense without the rest. Awakened to the Forbidden is the newest if you're okay with taboo. It has the most comments but any feedback is useful.

 

[Trudy_Antone]

Hi guys,
Haven't got 'round to reading more yet but I will

Just had to share that if you're looking for readers, I cannot believe the number of views I've had on my first incest story. (Not looking for feedback on that one, it's pure gratuitous filth). Happy about the views but my skin is kind of crawling...

 

[Trudy_Antone]

And thanks Bianca and Driphoney for your feedback, I really appreciate it,
Cheers x

 

[driphoney]

Yes I've always written. I'm one of those crazy obsessive types Part of why I love lit is because it's an outlet for some of the ideas that don't fit anywhere else. Also, I don't need to stress as much over every little detail (except grammar, which is getting better ) and I can just write the best story I can and some people are happy.

Don't worry about boring me. I read a lot of different things and I can appreciate the efforts of my fellow writers. If you have self-doubt but you're still writing then you're in a good place because you'll keep wanting to do better. I'm off to read the Fuckin' Chair now...(hopefully it will open this time, I'm having trouble with my tab windows )

And thank you for the last remark. You made my day

Bianca

Sorry I'm reading slower than I'd planned (being a little ADD lately, it's not the story.) Will read chapter 3 today. Promise. It's a good story and I love all the hints of things to come. I find my inner romantic self hoping and praying for certain things, but knowing you might take it somewhere else. Now, if that isn't a good storyteller I don't know what is! (And yes, I'm jealous because I don't understand plot or know how to form it, as Kromen now knows! )

"It's only a game" is one of mine that got overlooked the first time round. As well as "Thug Passion",which was my first attempt at writing from a female's point of view. Either one or both; doesn't matter. I'm glad that more people are joining the chain.

Only took me a month and a half (cause I started it ages before), but I got your Halloween entry done. You know, at first the interspersed quotes brought me up short, but the further I went along I really liked them. I have to admit, there was an part of me that enjoyed a fictional 'just deserts' of your character. You could have taken that gruesome further, I thought, but then it hit me how it must actually be hard for a man to write something like that. Kind of nauseating.

I'll read "Thug Passion" next. I owe you. Boy do I owe you! lol (You really read all 8? Oh gosh. )

 

[Bianca_Sommerland]

Sorry I'm reading slower than I'd planned (being a little ADD lately, it's not the story.) Will read chapter 3 today. Promise. It's a good story and I love all the hints of things to come. I find my inner romantic self hoping and praying for certain things, but knowing you might take it somewhere else. Now, if that isn't a good storyteller I don't know what is! (And yes, I'm jealous because I don't understand plot or know how to form it, as Kromen now knows! )

I'm glad you noticed the hints. Not sure how many people did but I try to include as many little twist as I would in the books meant for publishing elsewhere. I guess in that way you can say I'm writing for myself. Not many people here seem to be that interested in complicated plots, but for the few that are I try to give them something worth reading.

Romance, it's funny that you mention that. Not one of my strong points but that's one of the reasons I'm writing here. I want to see if I can pull it off. Sex I can do. Sex I like. Lovey dovey and HEA is a whole other ball game. I really hope it turns out the way I plan it.

I know I've mentioned it but I just have to say I really appreciate you taking the time to read the series. Doesn't matter how long it takes, so far your feedback has been very helpful. I hope to have the time to return the favor very soon.



Have a great day everyone. Happy writing

 

[Bianca_Sommerland]

Bump for now. Will RVC some more later. Want to get in a better frame of mind first, just got a really nasty comment. Hope everyone 's doing good.

 

[kromen]

Bumping. I've been rather busy, so I haven't gotten to any more stories as of yet. Have not forgotten you, Bianca.

 

[Bianca_Sommerland]

Bumping. I've been rather busy, so I haven't gotten to any more stories as of yet. Have not forgotten you, Bianca.

it's okay kromen. I've been crazy busy too. Take all the time you need.

Have a great weekend everyone. *Early, I know, but I probably won't be on again for a few days.*

 

[driphoney]

Hey Bianca,
Thanks for the RCV. Is there anything in particular you want looked at?

This is to bump the tread back up, and also to say I RCV's Thug Passion the other day.

Bianca, I really am going to finish your series.

Just taking a study break now. Final tomorrow, then fun reading for a whole week!

 

[Ginger_Girl]

I'm new, but I'm in...! I must go to church to ask for forgiveness but then when I get back I'll have a clean slate to catch up on all the stories you've written... I'll make sure to RCV each. MMM can't wait to get back home!

I only have one story so far... (been told I posted it in the wrong category ... oh well) below is the link. Hope you enjoy!!!

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=453037