My Erotic Tale
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LeBroz said:Here you go Art - that sneak peek I mentioned on the Zen thread; couldn't put "War's Vision - 2" there, not after that calming piece of yours I read there...
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War's Vision - 2
~Extraction~
Special troop in silence waiting
Only night, their sure friend;
Their "Mikey" in a bad way
Stretched out, he lays too still;
Relief, birds finally show ~
Light one.
Flight home in silence
Rotors hushed in mournful passing;
No muted high-fives back this time
Their "Mikey" gone on;
No more his light innocence
To lighten perpetual war.
The word is passed
Joe Franks' bird is down,
Swallowed in blue deep;
Others from his flight plucked out
Joe Franks never to be seen;
Their friends, these Special troops now know
There'll not be one detail to perform but two.
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These are the fictional backgrounds for these two; will be further displayed in WV-3.
His nickname's Mikey; you'd have to remember those LIFE cereal commercials. Mikey's talents were behind a telescopic sight; had been taking pre-med courses between missions.
Joe Franks, helicopter pilot. Had nearly completed doctoral thesis. Married, two girls.
One thought I want to put in is the idea that their positions can be filled, but they can never be replaced.
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I enjoy series poetry and expecially when they are interesting as this is. I look forward to seeing this unravel <grin> you have my attention <smile>