dirty haiku

[drown]

ambiguity

the crystal moment's
bete noir



neither read it wrong

 

[twelveoone]

he frequently multi-layers. in this instance, his red/green might be stop/go as in a learning process. who knows? no doubt i got it wrong anyway.

no amber?

 

[butters]

no amber?

well, you have to leave something to the reader's imagination. if you don't allow a reader to bring something of their own to the experience, it's harder to forge that emotional connection-by-investment.



what? whaaaaatttt?


anyway, where's nerk? he's awol. time to send out a search party!

 

[butters]

i already did amber anyway

 

[twelveoone]

i already did amber anyway

how did amber like it?

 

[twelveoone]

i already did amber anyway

i was thinking the same thing,



but who'd want me?

 

[butters]

how did amber like it?

tsk tsk tsk - like i'd drink n tell

 

[butters]

i was thinking the same thing,



but who'd want me?

i dunno, shall we put you up for bidding and see who goes for it? don't forget i work on commission though...

 

[twelveoone]

i dunno, shall we put you up for bidding and see who goes for it? don't forget i work on commission though...

nothin from nothin

wasn't that a song?

my apologies
for unkuin
the haiku
I really did just stop in to help out-won't happen again

 

[drown]

amber'd be piss,
yes?

creation .or. destruction

each chooses an
O​

 

[GuiltyPleasure]

amber'd be piss,
yes?

creation .or. destruction

each chooses an
O​

Malted golden bottle

swirled then sniffed

savoured

on the tongue

O​

 

[drown]

Malted golden bottle

swirled then sniffed

savoured

on the tongue

O​

i know this is true
as is the cautionary.....

*hops to attention*

 

[GuiltyPleasure]

i know this is true
as is the cautionary.....

*hops to attention*

One foot on the ground
the other hovers
rigidly quivering
until balance brings it back
to earth.

(where'd the haiku go?)

 

[CharleyH]

Dirty Haiku:

Stiff stones crack and weaken
Tendrils push and stretch
levy breaks and crashes.

Ok not great. do better.

 

[drown]

One foot on the ground
the other hovers
rigidly quivering
until balance brings it back
to earth.

(where'd the haiku go?)

the haiku went
where...

no haiku had gone before

all like.......

doggerel

 

[butters]

she bites
he grunts
release
blood and spunk





blood and spunk

she bites
he grunts
released

 

[twelveoone]

who knew
a new
haiku
Comment cue

At rest she takes in the verdant roar
Eyes closed she lets in
The insects
And explodes

*not original, condensation
At rest
Eyes closed she lets in insects
Explodes in verdant roar
Incredible
!

Look mama I made a scream AEEI!

 

[Obsequium]

Late post, sorry...

Auld Lang Syne rings,
bottles uncorked to the toll
Happy New Years All!

 

[bogusagain]

steaming and salmon pink
you appear out of the shower
naked and sex hungry!

 

[bogusagain]

a martyr prepared for your fate
you stand in your innocence
amongst a scatter of clothes

 

[bogusagain]

you show me your rear
I consider its evolution
love is no solution

 

[lydia_quixote]

lanquid rise falls short
halted heart pulses slow song
there but ever gone

 

[drown]

she could not be saved
their mixed goo seeped from her holes
her smile too, reeked 'used'​

 

[butters]

sap rising
sturdy trunks stand tall
rubbery milkers

 

[drown]

were it so simple
as form
or juxtaposing...

ignite my desires