dirty haiku

[arielsgoddess]

Straight ones defy wind
Others serpentine stillness
Leaning trees listen

 

[butters]

not a dirty

writer's thought
comes, goes
snowflake melts

 

[butters]

five months pregnant
spotting blood
lion in the grass

 

[butters]

dark cave entrance
lit by shaft
solstice son










oh dear - i must try harder at 'dirty'. sorry nerk

 

[DrFootsieTickles]

Bright, crisp sky
Pleading between giggles
Monotonous prairie drive

 

[nerk]

dark cave entrance
lit by shaft
solstice son










oh dear - i must try harder at 'dirty'. sorry nerk

five months pregnant
spotting blood
lion in the grass

writer's thought
comes, goes
snowflake melts

never try to be dirty .. if you're not feeling it, don't force it.
but don't tell them I said so.


and dirty or not, these are both evocative and have fun word-play, which is always tough to do in a constrained form.
besides, you said shaft

 

[nerk]

Straight ones defy wind
Others serpentine stillness
Leaning trees listen

this has me thinking of rengu (renka? renku? gesundheit) again.

 

[nerk]

Bright, crisp sky
Pleading between giggles
Monotonous prairie drive

have to do something to pass the time on the way to grandma's house.
this makes me miss road trips

 

[nerk]

Day 145

snow in the headlights
fingers between her thighs, all
the way to Portland

 

[nerk]

Day 146

flash of light in wisps
of white cloud, down here, hoping
you arrive safely

 

[DrFootsieTickles]

Gentle prairie breeze
A tethered twister writhes
As lazy fingers caress

 

[nerk]

Day 147

snow clings to each twig
stretched across my road, glowing
gold in morning sun

 

[arielsgoddess]

are you sure it's snow?
our paintings are monochrome
and it was so cold....

 

[Obsequium]

Ciao

lustful moon
provokes natural proclivities
to action.

 

[Obsequium]

again....

inescapable
vortex
swallows virtue

 

[PandoraGlitters]

Indoor Pool Under Skylight

Toes find the water
warm as promised. Stars remind
us it is Winter.

 

[Rayven101]

dark cave entrance
lit by shaft
solstice son


Oh I loved this one! I get two different feelings reading this Knowing what it is like to walk into a dark cave lit by the light......and to be the cave. Fantastic!

 

[butters]

oh, thanks glad you liked it, Rayven.

 

[drown]

:winter carnival:






gathering ego like nuts


re-lific posters

 

[Obsequium]

Ciao

chastised by his hand
it is hard to think of anything
but red apples

 

[Obsequium]

iPad writer....

fingers tap glass
creativity flows and dirt
fills the spaces

 

[butters]

spring thaw
rarefied air
a new boyfriend

 

[vrosej10]

the thoughts I share
the thoughts he shares
moonless night

 

[Honey123]

hearts pound like thunder
sweat like rain on our skin
floating like a cloud

 

[drown]

brevity...​

yes,
dear?
​

she throws this
lonely dance...
​

what?​

your point is?​

coming​