dirty haiku

[butters]

oops, that should be here, not under your write.

a very odd effect of the text-format here, drown... the bold makes the reader stare at it as you read, and then, when you're looking further down out the corner of the eye one sees the white negative image of the bold words... so a sort of ghosted double-poem!

 

[drown]

a very odd effect of the text-format here, drown... the bold makes the reader stare at it as you read, and then, when you're looking further down out the corner of the eye one sees the white negative image of the bold words... so a sort of ghosted double-poem!

there is a point to this, chip....

i'm truly not being glib.

 

[Obsequium]

Only one...

so bored it is odd,
wish I knew someone to call,
for takeout.

Ciao, Obsequium

 

[Obsequium]

and one more today...

the shadowed bars cast,
all across my sleeping backside,
locking me in sated dreams.


Ciao, Obsequium

 

[butters]

nerk, where are you? it's not like you to be awol. hope things are ok your end.

 

[drown]

rsvku

if indeed you were the one you are clearly not this weekend was bad

 

[Honey123]

Cheerios are yum!
with cinnamon on top, too..
crunchy, munchy little O's

 

[Obsequium]

Early tea...

brush of lips,
across a canvas of inner thigh,
watercolor kiss.

 

[butters]

watercolour kiss


superb phrase!

 

[Obsequium]

watercolour kiss


superb phrase!

Striving for some small measure of improvement.

Thank you, Obsequium

 

[Obsequium]

Post one...

nude happiness throbs,
fever grinds and heat murmurs,
nights penetrating song.

 

[Obsequium]

Post two...

Pleasure, pleasures heat
Finger drip while tongues pant,
Delicious moans, moan.

 

[drown]

haven't the patience

for


a tawdry whore like you.

bloom in your season...

 

[drown]

haven't the patience

for


a tawdry whore like you.

bloom in your season...

i quite like this one.

the snows will come thru mid march


spring's still the bitch, see?

 

[vrosej10]

glimpsing through a lace shirt
a slither of nipple
new moon​

 

[Obsequium]

Only one...

perfect agony,
becomes fully satisfied,
rhythmically.

Ciao, Obsequium

 

[Obsequium]

Nerk...

To long absent. Miss your daily post to thread and your watchful eye... Come back soon.

Missed, Obsequium

 

[Obsequium]

Not Dirty but...

I like this thread so...

a quit night,
alone with my thoughts and
Lit's door with no handle.

 

[Obsequium]

One for this thread...

fingers stroke lust
prettily, a nipple screams for more
languid passion bites

 

[twelveoone]

fingers stroke lust
prettily, a nipple screams for more
languid passion bites

a quit night,
alone with my thoughts and
Lit's door with no handle.

let's forget the rules for a sec.

a quit night, alone with my thoughts
Lit's door with no handle.

The first states everything, the second gives pause. A really good Haiku either has two contrasting images or ambiguity especially on the turn.

so bored it is odd,
wish I knew someone to call,
for takeout.

this one is good takeout forces a double take, this is what to shoot for, the surprise or an overwhelming image

it is odd, my hunger
wish I knew someone to call,
for takeout.


What is Haiku?
byjthserra©

you might want to check out

Written by one of best here, and I don't even believe it's possible to write haiku in English, but he comes close.

 

[drown]

let's forget the rules for a sec.

a quit night, alone with my thoughts
Lit's door with no handle.

The first states everything, the second gives pause. A really good Haiku either has two contrasting images or ambiguity especially on the turn.

so bored it is odd,
wish I knew someone to call,
for takeout.

this one is good takeout forces a double take, this is what to shoot for, the surprise or an overwhelming image

it is odd, my hunger
wish I knew someone to call,
for takeout.


What is Haiku?
byjthserra©

you might want to check out

Written by one of best here, and I don't even believe it's possible to write haiku in English, but he comes close.

you've education

beyond your comprehension

we'll be green with you

 

[twelveoone]

you've education

beyond your comprehension

we'll be green with you

verrry good, ambiguity
could mean green with envy
or green like i want to puke

seriously, the colour play overstates it. best to let'em sneak up on you. got'cha effect. the best haiku hit you 5 minutes after you read them

 

[butters]

verrry good, ambiguity
could mean green with envy
or green like i want to puke

seriously, the colour play overstates it. best to let'em sneak up on you. got'cha effect. the best haiku hit you 5 minutes after you read them

hmmn, i read that as 'read/red with you'

 

[twelveoone]

hmmn, i read that as 'read/red with you'

we'll be read with you

authorial intent?

nahhh

let's task him - go through the spectrum
isn't poetry 1 der fool?

Yellow's a bitch, always is. Rest should be easy.

 

[butters]

we'll be read with you

authorial intent?

nahhh

let's task him - go through the spectrum
isn't poetry 1 der fool?

Yellow's a bitch, always is. Rest should be easy.

he frequently multi-layers. in this instance, his red/green might be stop/go as in a learning process. who knows? no doubt i got it wrong anyway.