Double Blind Challenge, round 2 - starts May 15

My guesses:

AlwaysHungry -8
greenmountaineer -1
GuiltyPleasure -5
HoneyAdored -2
Lyricalli -4
Magnetron -3
Remec -7
todski -6
 
For "The Turning of Mary Walker", I was initially thinking HA, because of the combination of wordplay and religious imagery. But in the revision, the language is rougher and more spiced with expletives -- not Honey-stylie. Honey is too ladylike and demure for that (although some of her poems radiate pheromones like a mint field radiates... minty-ness.)

Therefore I'm guessing Mags for "The Turning of Mary Walker".
 
I have a feeling that HA is trying to be stylistically elusive. But I'm going out on a limb and guessing #5 for her... something about "Time overtook my 1904 open style" and "buffed, primped and coddled".
 
All in! Slight change in posting attributions

All the revisions are now in and posted.

I am thinking that I might post the attributions tomorrow rather than wait for Friday and drag this out too long.

Then all the poets can comment (or not) on why/why not they they took suggestions, post another revision, or just generally frolic happily for the end of another challenge, and prepare for the erotic challenge Annie just announced.
 
I have already implemented some suggestions in response to my revision.

Chronic editor that I am, I'm likely to be tweaking and twerking it for the next few years.
 
A youtube video of you twerking might be just the inspiration we women need for the erotic/porn challenge. But don't make us wait two years, please.
 
A youtube video of you twerking might be just the inspiration we women need for the erotic/porn challenge. But don't make us wait two years, please.

I have my doubts that a skinny white guy having an epileptic fit will inspire anyone.
 
I have added the attributions, as people weren't doing much guessing since yesterday morning.

The free-for-all is now open.
 
Thanks very much, Mer, for hosting this challenge.

Challenges always make me work harder, and when it comes to writing, that's a joy.
 
Thanks much, gm and AH.

The response seemed a bit muted and I wonder if it was too close to the last one. Still, I learned a lot from all your efforts and responses.

We can now all happily quit being serious and go be erotic and porny. Assuming anyone stopped doing either of those things.
 
Thanks fur running the challenge Mer; you did good. :)


I'm up for hosting the next Double Blind, and I think I'll start that in mid-July, depending on what other challenges are going on. Hopefully, that will be enough time in between.
 
I'd like to add my thanks to you too, mer, to my partners in crime who also submitted and to the critics who did a great job helping us see through others' eyes.
 
Thanks, GP and Calli. I look forward to getting sliced and diced myself next time.

And many thanks to the critters who critted - may they be fruitful and multiply. Sort of.
 
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