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Re: THE BITCH

Winemaster said:
I just read the bitch and have to say it was a good one...left a comment...loved the way the bitch is enthusiastic and the teacher inside can't wait to have her...looking forward to reading more...and the board here is giving me good recom's
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Why thank you ;)
 
The_Darkness said:
Bogey102....read your story and you did a good job! I look forward to reading more of your stuff in the future!

I must say that this thread has attracted some awesome authors lately. Thanks to everyone for sharing with us and especially thanks to Destinie for starting the thread!
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No, thank you all for keeping it going. Dark I read your story Slave Ch. 01 and I loved it. I recommend this brief tale to anyone who wants a quick hot read.
 
Hi folks,
I just wanted to mention my new story Nobody's Fool and warn those who are familiar with my more romantic stories that this one contains some pretty brutal violence.
But I'm quite proud of it and I hope you enjoy.
Thanks,
Mutt
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Finally ended my long, dry spell, and have a new story that went up this evening!

There's a link to "The Warrior's Song" in my sig. Thanks, all!
 
vamplawyer said:
Cloudy, very nicely done on Warriors Song. Effective use of the myths and winding them into the story.
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Thank you!

But it wasn't all myth, although you may not believe that - there's a long history of healing like that in the tribe.
 
I'll Read Yours...

Hi everyone. This thread seems to show some promise in terms of getting my stories read. I'd like to participate in reading/commenting, and receiving some feedback on some of my stories. I've been a member only for about four months, but have seven stories on-line here. The latest one, of which I'm quite fond, is 'Susi Learns to Submit.' It is in the Interracial Couples category, for those of you who'd care to comment on it. It is a story about a South African 'lady of privilege' who becomes involved with a Black American federal government employee in Washington, D.C. It spans a six-month relationship between the two, and details some rather interesting events.

Feel free to comment on any of my other stories as you wish. I'll provide my thoughts about some of the stories identified within this thread, shortly. Thanks for the opportunity: 'Susi Learns to Submit' can be found at:

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=185090

Xploremyworld
 
The Warrior's Song

Cloudy,

I began to read your story, 'The Warrior's Song,' and quickly became aware that it was a type of story that I just couldn't attach myself to. It is immediately obvious, however that your style of writing is at a level which other writers can only aspire to. Though I didn't completely read the story, I appreciated your depth, and the story development (preparation, knowledge of subject, etc) shows that you've done your homework. The rave comments by other readers were certainly well deserved, though my preferences happen to run to more urbane settings. I couldn't fairly rate the story, so I left it as I found it. I do look forward to reading your other works, though.

Xploremyworld
 
Xploremyworld said:
Cloudy,

I began to read your story, 'The Warrior's Song,' and quickly became aware that it was a type of story that I just couldn't attach myself to. It is immediately obvious, however that your style of writing is at a level which other writers can only aspire to. Though I didn't completely read the story, I appreciated your depth, and the story development (preparation, knowledge of subject, etc) shows that you've done your homework. The rave comments by other readers were certainly well deserved, though my preferences happen to run to more urbane settings. I couldn't fairly rate the story, so I left it as I found it. I do look forward to reading your other works, though.

Xploremyworld
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Thank you so much! I appreciate the honesty - different drummers, eh? But thank you for the compliment on my writing. :rose:
 
Nobody's Fool

Highly improbable, but a thoroughly-enjoyed story. More characters died in a couple of hours in this story than in some banana country wars. Miss Nobody and JJ didn't seem to be non-consenting participants in the 'rapes,' but those scenes took the reader to places that most intrigue stories normally don't go. I'm wondering if 'Cologne' will exact revenge when he finds Miss Nobody didn't survive... Will he come after the private dick, or will he come after 'the Mutt (author)?' Well thought out, and well written. I enoyed the focus being on gangster world issues, with erotica relegated to a more supporting element stance.

Xploremyworld
 
The_Darkness said:
I just read "The Bar" and it was excellent! It could benefit from some editing, though...
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Thanks...

ive never actually had an editor.. and ive never considered myself as a writer.. I only write to get the fantasies from my head....
 
ashesatwork said:
Thanks...

ive never actually had an editor.. and ive never considered myself as a writer.. I only write to get the fantasies from my head....
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If you'd like one....I have time to start editing stuff again.
 
The_Darkness said:
If you'd like one....I have time to start editing stuff again.
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well ive got one new one that i jsut submitted.. that i think could be a good one to start with....

and one that ive been trying to get approval on for ages.. its too short... the problem is.. i like it that way....
 
ashesatwork said:
well ive got one new one that i jsut submitted.. that i think could be a good one to start with....

and one that ive been trying to get approval on for ages.. its too short... the problem is.. i like it that way....
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Got it and I'll work on it in the morning when I'm home from work!

BTW, if you're looking for a good read, check out anything by RedHairedandFriendly. She's in my favorites list, and for good reason!
 
First Time Posting - I have a New Story

Greetings to all, this is a great thread and I have book marked several stories to read, and a few to share with my wife who enjoys the site as much as I do.

I just posted (on 8/14/05) a new story http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=212485.

This is my first venture into the darker plots. I truly would appreciate your comments.

You can find my stories at:
http://english.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=79888&page=submissions

My Best to all of you,

QMN
 
Bump....

I went looking for this thread because I have a new story or two then I realized I didn't want feedback, but what the hell I'll bump it anyway and check in a few days to see if anyone else is looking for some.
 
I have two stories I'd like some general feedback on. Both still in the works, so will have to be emailed or PMed.

One is a sequel for an incest/nonconsent story I wrote. It leans more toward rape than to reluctance, just so you know.

The second is a crossdresser story about a fellow who is found out by his coworker and blackmailed. Still kind of unsure on the direction I want to go with it, so hoping some feedback will help me figure it out.

I will read a story or two of yours - depending on whether you read one or both of mine - and offer my two cents.

Anyone who's interested can reply to me on this thread or PM me.
 
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