CeriseNoire
Sweet 'n Tangy
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Submitted mine about 2 minutes ago.
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RCV'd ya, Slyc... 8 pages! WOW!
I updated the first thread with the newest (Slyc's)... next up, Emerald!
Slyc it so totally rocked!! Wonderful story!!!! I shoulda gone after someone else!! You are going to be a hard act to follow
Slyc, that story was incredible!
Selena, "Little Mermaid" is written and ready; just have to give it one last edit before I post it on Wednesday.
Aw, thanks, Rach. You beat me to it.
Seems the trolls love it, too A few one-bombs were obviously lobbed in for good measure. But that's to be expected.
Rach, Danielle, thanks for the comments (and the praise, Rach )
Selena - can I do another one? I fancy doing Beauty and the Beast. I feel the need for some more hawt Troll Love
Slyc,
I just read H&G...you are Brilliant! Dark, sexy and a happy ending.
slyc_willie - Great job on your story. My only complaint was that it was too long and that's only because I only have time to sit in front of the computers a few minutes at a time so had to read it in three sittings.
Erin
So far I'm up to Page 4...me likey.
Damn, Slyc. That was great!
Now I'm totally intimidated I haven't got a plot properly sussed for Bluebeard yet!
Interesting PC on Hansel & Gretel, signed 'anonymous' . . . .
More sex, less plot
03/11/08 By: Anonymous in USA
Well written as others have related, however, I would have liked more sex between the twins with all the erotic details. In contrast to most of the other comments, I'd have preferred more arousing details and less plot. This is, after all, LitEROTICA.
Lol . . . I guess it takes all kinds . . . .
Dam, you're not strictly wank material, slyc. I know how that must pain you.....
Apparently, I should be writing more 'wank' and less 'thank.'
Oh I am so screwed - I haven't figured a spot for any wank in mine yet!
Oh but I like the way you "thank".
Of course now, I'm even more intimidated, tyvm.
My main problem is I haven't figured out how the ending will work - I can see the start and kinda the middle, but the end is problematic right now.