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[My Erotic Tail]

Re: Double Double Wednesday Reviews



UnseenChagrin brings us The End of Love. Another reader commented that this poem showed the ying and yang cycle of love.

Faults in Training by My Erotic Tail had me smiling and laughing. I just kept thinking, "the best laid plans....usually go straight to hell."


kid NOW and THEN by My Erotic Tail brought a smile to my face remembering all of the little things that went on when I was a kid.

just dies laughing
Oh Joseki Ko brings us something that he had been telling his friends about for months Twelve Days of Nastybone, from what I understand it is an all out brawl for the last 'man' standing. I was in stitches reading it.

Thanks E~
your a sweetie...

As always I try to bring smiles and love to write
so knowing they're read and touched someone
is so much more that a vote or rating...glad you liked.

and yeah there was a lot I liked but JO's got me too...

thanks Syndra, Echoes and Merrymaker for the comments


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[jthserra]

Angeline...

maybe it's the poetry, but you are looking more and more like a blues singer everyday.


jim : )

 

[jthserra]

Not a spinner...

But I kind of randomly picked one of today's new poems to begin with and came across a jewel that really sparkled. In a tightly crafted metaphor Elyza_Ambrose brought us Forbidden Fruit . There's a wonderful erotica in this tasty poem...

I liked it so much I read the other poem Elyza has posted here at lit and I liked that one even more. Take a peek at: Touch Me , I think you will enjoy it.


jim : )

 

[Joseki Ko]

Re: Double Double Wednesday Reviews

just dies laughing
Oh Joseki Ko brings us something that he had been telling his friends about for months Twelve Days of Nastybone, from what I understand it is an all out brawl for the last 'man' standing. I was in stitches reading it.

Thanks Lizzy,

I appreciate the mention

And yes it's an elimination tourney where to lose you have to yield or be knocked out.

I broke my nose loosened two teeth, and took some shoulder damage.

LOL I was out after two rounds.

 

[Man Ray]

Thank you...

Thank you for the nice comment concerning my poem `This is for you...`. My poem made the person it was written for happy and so that made me happy but its always nice to have a mention here.

 

[WickedEve]

Reviewer update:

Sunday: neonurotic
Monday: Jthserra
Tuesday: The team of Minsue and echoes_s
Wednesday: Syndra Lynn
Thursday: JCSTREET
Friday: Liar
Saturday: Perks

If you need your day covered:
Available weekends: Cordelia
Available weekdays: Eve
Available anytime: Email *Catbabe*
Available Daytime: Elizabetht

Please remember, anyone can review on any day. We (most of the poetry board) want that! The reviewers listed above are the ones who will make sure their day is covered. I hope others will help out on days when the number of new poems are overwhelming. I know Elizabetht covered some days recently. Thanks, E. And you'll see a few more names listed above who can help out.

 

[RazzRajen]

reviews Syndra Lynn

Thanks for taking the time to do the reviews.
and for the mention. Always appreciated.

Razz

edited to correct spelling

 

[Angeline]

Re: Angeline...

maybe it's the poetry, but you are looking more and more like a blues singer everyday.


jim : )

Hope springs eternal, baby.

 

[Syndra Lynn]

Re: reviewa SandraLynn

Thanks for taking the time to do the reviews.
and for the mention. Always appreciated.

Razz

You're welcome. The mention was well deserved.

And the name is Syndra with a capital SIN

Syn

 

[Liar]

Re: Reviewer update:

Available weekends: Cordelia
Available weekdays: Eve
Available anytime: Email *Catbabe*

Now, why does this look a tad bit naughty to me?

 

[Lauren Hynde]

Re: Re: Reviewer update:

Now, why does this look a tad bit naughty to me?

I've only been in men's restrooms five or six times in my life, but maybe that list rang a bell?

 

[Guest]

Re: Reviewer update:

I am usually around during the daytime... if someone gets stuck and needs a review done after the day has already started.

Sunday: neonurotic
Monday: Jthserra
Tuesday: The team of Minsue and echoes_s
Wednesday: Syndra Lynn
Thursday: JCSTREET
Friday: Liar
Saturday: Perks

If you need your day covered:
Available weekends: Cordelia
Available weekdays: Eve
Available anytime: Email *Catbabe*

Please remember, anyone can review on any day. We (most of the poetry board) want that! The reviewers listed above are the ones who will make sure their day is covered. I hope others will help out on days when the number of new poems are overwhelming. I know Elizabetht covered some days recently. Thanks, E. And you'll see a few more names listed above who can help out.

 

[Syndra Lynn]

Not my day to review but . . .

I had to mention 3 that made me go WOW!

WickedEve's Into the Mountains

neonurotic has a full cup of coffee

and liar brought us a radiation leak

This is GOOD to the last drop poetry.


Syn

 

[WickedEve]

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Now, why does this look a tad bit naughty to me?

Oh God! I made us sound like party girls... ones you pay! lol And catbabe is available anytime!

 

[RazzRajen]

Re: Re: reviewa SandraLynn

You're welcome. The mention was well deserved.

And the name is Syndra with a capital SIN

Syn

And so it is My apologies fro not looking more carefully....

Razz

 

[*Catbabe*]

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Oh God! I made us sound like party girls... ones you pay! lol And catbabe is available anytime!

I was wondering why my pm box was suddenly full of indecent proposals.


I said I was availbale anytime, if I was free. If I'm busy, you have to wait

 

[Angeline]

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I was wondering why my pm box was suddenly full of indecent proposals.


I said I was availbale anytime, if I was free. If I'm busy, you have to wait

were any from giraffes?

 

[*Catbabe*]

Just one, but it was very long winded.



Nice moon Ange

 

[Tathagata]

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Oh God! I made us sound like party girls... ones you pay!

Elvis Costello..

They say you're nothing but a party girl
Just like a million more all over the world...

Ahhhh I miss the 80's

 

[Liar]

Re: Re: Re: Reviewer update:

Oh God! I made us sound like party girls... ones you pay! lol And catbabe is available anytime!

Hey, a guy can dream, can't he?



Oh, a big to Syndra for having the grace to mention my little romantic ditty in the same post as neon and Eve's poems, which I felt sooo jealous reading.


#L

 

[Angeline]

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Elvis Costello..

They say you're nothing but a party girl
Just like a million more all over the world...

Ahhhh I miss the 80's

I know it's not the one you meant but...

Alison!
I know this world is killing you.

sigh...

my aim is true.

(I've been buggin ee to sing that one for me for months now. You just reminded me I haven't mentioned it for a while. I'm sure he'll appreciate it.)

 

[Tathagata]

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I know it's not the one you meant but...

Alison!
I know this world is killing you.

sigh...

my aim is true.

(I've been buggin ee to sing that one for me for months now. You just reminded me I haven't mentioned it for a while. I'm sure he'll appreciate it.)

yeah i'm good like that...bringing up things people wish i'd forget
; )

 

[Angeline]

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yeah i'm good like that...bringing up things people wish i'd forget
; )

Lol. Well, he can always break a string to get out of it.

 

[Tathagata]

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Lol. Well, he can always break a string to get out of it.

Oldest trick in the book
hehe

 

[Liar]

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Oldest trick in the book
hehe

Well, a broken string woudn't actually prevent him from singing, unless the string was a vocal cord, now would it?

#L, plugger of loopholes