Non Poetry Posts from the Suddenly Thread

Re: Sorry Affair

darkmaas said:
in opposite directions
we come
around the corner
and brush against each other
we turn without slowing
mutter sorry
and for a second
eat each other
with our eyes
before the building
comes between us
and the affair is over.

Kinda reminds me of the third stage of sex in a relationship. First stage is Kitchen Sink Sex, where you do it anywhere, anytime. The second stage is Bedroom Sex, where you have gradually settled down to more sedate intimacies in the bedroom. The final stage is Hallway Sex where sex is reduced to exchanging "Fuck You"s in the hallway.

Sorry DM, you hit my funny bone. Your stuff deserves more respect than that.:(

Very Foolish
 
Sorry DM, you hit my funny bone. Your stuff deserves more respect than that.

Hehe, I'll drink to that. You buying? Make mine a double. Thanks.

darkmaas
 
comment to air person

"all of a sudden passion suddenly" means not editing!
you may write with no time restrictions but
complete ASAP, submitted and then regretted.
compose completely within the window.
do not travel to your word masher and spell servants.
no copy pasted, no mushrooms on the pizza.
no rewriting!
 
I am SO glad that I have left the treadmill Office Space life behind me.

It's almost a year for me--stopped being ms. corporate/academic. Best thing I ever did. :)
 
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