Recognition for New Poets

[voyergirl]

a few poems I read today~


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Master Jeffrey by voyergirl

this dedication poem is a nice erotic write,
very endearing knowing it was for some one
sweet~ erotic ~ poem~

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thank you, to all of you really that have read it and found something special. He actually left a comment on it this afternoon. to me it makes it a bit more personal knowing the man who inspired these emotions can come here and share it with me. i may not be a true writer but i do find a personal satisfaction in most of what i write. it means a lot to me that other's find them rewarding.

thank you

 

[My Erotic Tale]

new poems

to inspire encourage and learn about poetry

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Maria's Cantina by seranade

sultry shoulders
and wicked grin
crossing the floor
on an erotic wind

that says it all ...
this is really good alby~ <grin>
when I grow up I want to be a poet like you!

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those simple words by duckiesmut

this is poetry at it's best, a lesson poem
a witty write that spins reality with humor
with some simple lines and in such a short
write revolves the world in an image directed
by a very clever poem!
(lesson poem)
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Enchanted love by chezcubby1

I agree with the comment made ...
"you enchant me with your words..."
excellent poetry
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Haiku 5 by Du Lac

I always feel blessed with a daily dose of the Du~
the erotic poetress delivers a trio of Haiku poems in
Haiku part 5>>>>> another excellent set!

passionate tempest >>>> temptress <grin>
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A Chance Missed by Remec

it doesnt get to much more clever than this <grin>
the tail spin only generates the thought of how
much thought went into this write, very witty
and very much enjoyable~
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thanks for the reads ~~~~~

 

[My Erotic Tale]

To encourage, inspire and learn about poetry
I read today ...
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We met one night by chance by Annora

very nice poetry~
Annora's erotic writes are filled with passion
this poem shines in her style, she also has
another poem post today as well,
Make Me Breathless

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three little words by stacistatas


any thing I might say may give the secret
to this poem away, so go read it, and see~
I loved the wit in this tastey poem~

stacistatas also had a couple other poems
posted today as well ...
Evil in Shadowed woods I will savor for after
dark <grin>
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I Dreamed you came to my bed by foehn

It doesnt get much more poetic and
clever than this, excellent poem~
(lesson poem)
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The Snow Comes by lindiana

This poem is very creative and original
to say the least, a must see to understand,
the visuals say it all <grin>
(no this is not an illustrated poem)
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I enjoyed the lessons ...thank you

 

[seranade]

Maria's Cantina by seranade

sultry shoulders
and wicked grin
crossing the floor
on an erotic wind

that says it all ...
this is really good alby~ <grin>
when I grow up I want to be a poet like you!

thanks Turo~

 

[duckiesmut]

My Erotic Tale, thank you for the mention of my poem.

 

[Guest]

Hello and thank you to those who have commented and rated on my newly posted poetry. It's very much appreciated.

saldne

 

[My Erotic Tale]

Hello and thank you to those who have commented and rated on my newly posted poetry. It's very much appreciated.

saldne

today...
I walk away by saldne

clip~

You picked me up
When I was down,
And said I deserved better,
But after five years
Of being together,
I now realize
We’re going nowhere

The charming wit of this poet explodes
in this poetic pearl, I can only imagine
the emotions and passion that flowed
to create this well thought about, 'giggle'
descision/poem!

also posted today by saldne ...
Another Colubine~
When I Am In Love~
Unforgiving Mistakes~

 

[Guest]

Wow! Thanks so very much for mentioning all my poems, My Erotic Tale. I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed "I Walk Away".

Also, since I'm here giving my thanks, can anyone tell me how to put the link in my profile for my poetry? I did read the FAQ but I must be doing something wrong. I would appreciate greatly if someone could message me with the information.

Thank you, once again,
saldne

 

[My Erotic Tale]

To inspire, encourage and to learn about poetry!

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She/He fucks me stupid by Du Lac

If you like humor, your gonna love this,
very nice two side poem~ I snickered more
than twice and has all the flare of an erotic
Du Lac poem~

clip ~
SHE FUCKS ME STUPID
by Icant Remember

hehehehe hahahaha oh my!

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Forgive anmd Forget by jennifer C

clip~
How do you stop
All those feelings inside?
Those conflicting emotions,
When your head and heart collide.
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The mind doesnt forget but the
heart can forgive and hope like heck
it doesn't get smacked again <grin>

good to see this poets poems again!
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Emerald Eyes by Annora

clip~
Cleansing tears, angry tears, happy tears
I'm a woman accept them
Emerald eyes glistening from tears yet to fall.

Powerful L~ very good poem, the passion
and emotions involved in this poem are
moving. The saddness is obvious but the
sincerity is extraordinary,
heartfelt poetry ~

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River of doubt by chezcubby1

clip With the best of intentions
and zealousness to make me dangerous,
I head into the river as it fury
rages on all sides.
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The River, my home, I felt the tug
on emotions in this poem <loudly>
a very powerful poem with some great lines
of course we're talking about the River of doubt~

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I've been Christened by saldne

clip~
He said, "There’s nothing like a woman
With tools in her hand.

this was way cute~ a nuckle buster <ouch>
yep they aint fun~ I loved this poem for many
reasons but mostly the well played out words
for a cute situation~ thanks for the tale/poem

"I've been Christened"

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thank you for the lessons~

 

[Du Lac]

Thank you Art

To inspire, encourage and to learn about poetry!

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She/He fucks me stupid by Du Lac

If you like humor, your gonna love this,
very nice two side poem~ I snickered more
than twice and has all the flare of an erotic
Du Lac poem~

clip ~
SHE FUCKS ME STUPID
by Icant Remember

hehehehe hahahaha oh my!


Dear Art..
thank you so much for the mention and the smiles. I can not take credit for the first poem... she fucks me stupid... I can't remember..
that was my better half, my love, my partner, my rescuer, my slave my master... my Tigerlilly.. omg lol.. but it was his gift to me the other day when I was so sick and needed a good laugh... and the second poem is my response to him... it is how we are.. what we are.. a different sameness... After reading the two I just had to share the laughter and lust with others.. that is what we are suppose to do in this life.. spread the joy... when you have been so blessed with abundance.. you just have to spread it out lol... I am so happy you enjoyed us... a wee bit of voyeaurism.. (damn where is the f'ning spell check lol..) now that is hot...
thank you..
du~

 

[My Erotic Tale]

Du that duet was magnifico

and watching for a new one <grin>

 

[seranade]

wow I like that tiger bro, awesome, hey I saw you have your poem from the contest posted, I can too right? salsa?

 

[Du Lac]

Art.. who is Quetzalcoatl ?

Hey Art....
Thank you for the wonderful reply on my new poem.... Quetzalcoatl Sings...
this is the first of a series I am starting. I have been researching ancient religions and cultures. The poem is in reference to the Sacred Marriage and Transformation of both Gods, Human, Spirit and the universe. Hmmm deep deep du lac lol...
The references here are Mayan or Aztec. I am going to write a series of these poems all based on the Sacred Marriage/Sacred Sex aspects of the culture I pick. Here is a little reference to just who Quetzalcoatl is....
Who is Quetzalcoatl?

Hope you enjoy the little lesson... you may be able to help me when I get to the Asian references... this is going to be a long long series.. maybe even a book....

I also want to thank everyone who commented so vividly on this new poem.. (du lac blushes and wags her tail with pride) I thank you so much first for reading my work secondly for the outstanding gestures of your comments... I am humbled and grateful...
blessings to all
Du~

 

[My Erotic Tale]

Re: Art.. who is Quetzalcoatl ?

Hey Art....
Thank you for the wonderful reply on my new poem.... Quetzalcoatl Sings...
this is the first of a series I am starting. I have been researching ancient religions and cultures. The poem is in reference to the Sacred Marriage and Transformation of both Gods, Human, Spirit and the universe. Hmmm deep deep du lac lol...
The references here are Mayan or Aztec. I am going to write a series of these poems all based on the Sacred Marriage/Sacred Sex aspects of the culture I pick. Here is a little reference to just who Quetzalcoatl is....
Who is Quetzalcoatl?

Hope you enjoy the little lesson... you may be able to help me when I get to the Asian references... this is going to be a long long series.. maybe even a book....

I also want to thank everyone who commented so vividly on this new poem.. (du lac blushes and wags her tail with pride) I thank you so much first for reading my work secondly for the outstanding gestures of your comments... I am humbled and grateful...
blessings to all
Du~

that is so awesome Du~
who'd a thunk it ...well actually Du did!
I am looking forward to this

the japanesse have geisha <grin>
my erotic TAIL has a tale geisha house <grin>
my signature TIGER top center is the link
(like my tiger? took forever! long time ago

I had my links for a major portal to everywhere
I went back then and it was huge so I colored
it and the next thing ya know I had an idea
and now you see true ...literary Art~

very interesting...

 

[Du Lac]

Re: Re: Art.. who is Quetzalcoatl ?

that is so awesome Du~
who'd a thunk it ...well actually Du did!
I am looking forward to this

the japanesse have geisha <grin>
my erotic TAIL has a tale geisha house <grin>
my signature TIGER top center is the link
(like my tiger? took forever! long time ago

I had my links for a major portal to everywhere
I went back then and it was huge so I colored
it and the next thing ya know I had an idea
and now you see true ...literary Art~

very interesting...

Ty ty Art.. hope you enjoyed the link a little info behind the last line of the poem. and ty for the info behind your tiger.. outstanding~

I sit back and think Geisha.. I will have to read your work on it. The first thing that came to mind is Malta.. and the ancient myth of the Goddess.... secondly... Temple Priestess... and Inanna from Sumerian myth....somehow they are all connected. I do know little about the world of the Geisha..are they not beheld as Goddesses of perfection. Sacred Sexual Nuns HAAAAA! Hope I did not offend anyone! But that is what came to my mind....
Swirling in Du Lacs muddy bottom.

I want to know more of their housing living... "temples"? If I remember right.. to get to the temple.. one must walk serenely through gardens? I know this to be true in the tea ceremony. Before you enter the house for the ceremony you travel back through the gardens.. almost like going back thru time.. it is a spiritual experience that struck me so hard when I experienced the ceremony. I feel a connection here to the Malta temples.. the oldest in history.. worshipping home of the Earth Goddess.. some say a civilation with out Gender division in the hierarchy of importance. They say the temples represent the womb of Mother Earth...knowledge of this civilation is little.. .. held secret, this rings true also for the culture of the Geisha.. there is some connection there.. off to the books lol... thank you... this one should be good.

I know my poetry is hard to understand sometimes... lol.. but it is a combination of the mind, heart and spirit... I also found it very interesting that previously mainly men commented on my work.. with this newest poem Q sings... it was mainly women... very very strong sign there.. since it is in essence a poem of conception... birth.. transformation.. motherhood... I liked that...
So what do you think lol.. ramblings of the deep Lac... ideas that floated through my mind while nature took course and laid me flat on my back ... lol...mind fucking... ha! I got some one way or the other it seems... see being sick also brings out some great ideas!
Just a different type of orgasm lol.... hmmm...
Du~

 

[My Erotic Tale]

Re: Re: Re: Art.. who is Quetzalcoatl ?

Ty ty Art.. hope you enjoyed the link a little info behind the last line of the poem. and ty for the info behind your tiger.. outstanding~

I sit back and think Geisha.. I will have to read your work on it. The first thing that came to mind is Malta.. and the ancient myth of the Goddess.... secondly... Temple Priestess... and Inanna from Sumerian myth....somehow they are all connected. I do know little about the world of the Geisha..are they not beheld as Goddesses of perfection. Sacred Sexual Nuns HAAAAA! Hope I did not offend anyone! But that is what came to my mind....
Swirling in Du Lacs muddy bottom.

I want to know more of their housing living... "temples"? If I remember right.. to get to the temple.. one must walk serenely through gardens? I know this to be true in the tea ceremony. Before you enter the house for the ceremony you travel back through the gardens.. almost like going back thru time.. it is a spiritual experience that struck me so hard when I experienced the ceremony. I feel a connection here to the Malta temples.. the oldest in history.. worshipping home of the Earth Goddess.. some say a civilation with out Gender division in the hierarchy of importance. They say the temples represent the womb of Mother Earth...knowledge of this civilation is little.. .. held secret, this rings true also for the culture of the Geisha.. there is some connection there.. off to the books lol... thank you... this one should be good.

I know my poetry is hard to understand sometimes... lol.. but it is a combination of the mind, heart and spirit... I also found it very interesting that previously mainly men commented on my work.. with this newest poem Q sings... it was mainly women... very very strong sign there.. since it is in essence a poem of conception... birth.. transformation.. motherhood... I liked that...
So what do you think lol.. ramblings of the deep Lac... ideas that floated through my mind while nature took course and laid me flat on my back ... lol...mind fucking... ha! I got some one way or the other it seems... see being sick also brings out some great ideas!
Just a different type of orgasm lol.... hmmm...
Du~

Oh Du I do love your wit, your intellect rubs off like
buttercup flowers, your writings and cleverness
are like flowers blooming in the field of Lierotica
alluring like the snap dragon and enchanting as
the rose, colorful as a pansy and stong like the
tulips (two lips) <grin>

thanks ever so much for sharing this with me
awesome idea. mmm mmm good!

there was a thread last summer in the authors
hang out by cloudy about stories that were from the
dawn of time and riddled tales of explaining existence
it was enlightening and along those lines,
but the mayans could write many books of their
beleifs and ways and gods and customes with
ritual sex. Egypt was another. You got the thinker
thinking now <grin>

 

[Du Lac]

Re: Re: Re: Re: Art.. who is Quetzalcoatl ?

Oh Du I do love your wit, your intellect rubs off like
buttercup flowers, your writings and cleverness
are like flowers blooming in the field of Lierotica
alluring like the snap dragon and enchanting as
the rose, colorful as a pansy and stong like the
tulips (two lips) <grin>

thanks ever so much for sharing this with me
awesome idea. mmm mmm good!

there was a thread last summer in the authors
hang out by cloudy about stories that were from the
dawn of time and riddled tales of explaining existence
it was enlightening and along those lines,
but the mayans could write many books of their
beleifs and ways and gods and customes with
ritual sex. Egypt was another. You got the thinker
thinking now <grin>

Dearest Art!

We a- muse each other lol... love when I get a man thinking.... the mind is a wonderful place to play!

My first in the series is going to be Native American. While in the shower (lol.. that is where I am hit with most of my ideas and poems, with the hottest water pounding on my back... ) A chant of the maiden came in to me... a calling on the Buffalo winds that only the warrior.. the lone wolf can hear... that is going to be the essence of the next poem. I can't sing worth a fig but for some reason this chant came from my throat so beautiful... I was stunned! So I know it is the next poem!!! I am going to do some real world stuff... go for a hike at the Quabbin and feel the earth energy soak through me... the poem is almost there.. just a little research left in the areas of the Gods and Goddesses to fill in the blanks... but I feel it forming a conception, and growing with in... it is the coolest feeling lol.. Wacko du lac! I think Cherokee.. that is what I keep getting.... hmmm so hopefully this will work here is some artwork that jumped out at me right after the chant soaked in my soul..

Thank you so much for listening to the ramblings of a new birthing process.. lol... ha..
Du~
ps.. RE: your poetic exclaimations of my wit and writing.... now I know why I so loved your blooming or blossom poem.. it spoke to me so deeply... ty du~

 

[My Erotic Tale]

Well I know a Du Lac flower that has
blossomed and blossoming here at LIT~

tHANKS dU...

like FIRE and AIR we create <grin>
paint and brush, cup and liquid <smile>

things that go together good ...mmmmm
you are a muse!

 

[Guest]

Thanks Art for the mention on "Your One And Only Drug". I just noticed I forgot the "e" in the word "breathe". I spelled it "breath". I appreciate you looking past this.
sal

 

[My Erotic Tale]

Thanks Art for the mention on "Your One And Only Drug". I just noticed I forgot the "e" in the word "breathe". I spelled it "breath". I appreciate you looking past this.
sal

My mom always said if you can read it
understand it and it made you feel good
why worry over it missing a period at the
end, you know it's over! <grin>

but some are geared to find and pin point
these out so they 'feel' superior! Hog wash.
pompus ass's <grin> I don't think you'll find
where I have corrected any ones grammar
I'm not the grammar police, hehehe
I choose to encourage and inspire because
most people are their worst critics, right!

Loved your poem, keep writing and breath
deeply <grin>

 

[seranade]

hey Arturo

I have a new poem coming, keep an eye out for it.

 

[My Erotic Tale]

okay alby

I'll watch for it, how ya been bro?

 

[Guest]

My mom always said if you can read it
understand it and it made you feel good
why worry over it missing a period at the
end, you know it's over! <grin>

but some are geared to find and pin point
these out so they 'feel' superior! Hog wash.
pompus ass's <grin> I don't think you'll find
where I have corrected any ones grammar
I'm not the grammar police, hehehe
I choose to encourage and inspire because
most people are their worst critics, right! <--Oh yes!

Loved your poem, keep writing and breath
deeply <grin>

Thanks! That means a lot.

 

[champagne1982]

notes from a pompous ass...

Originally posted by My Erotic Tale
<snip>but some are geared to find and pin point
these out so they 'feel' superior! Hog wash.
pompus ass's </snip>

Many people who are geared to it or wired for it or otherwise notice the missing punctuation, do not look for the mistakes to feel superior. To point out the omission in a gentle way isn't being pompous, either, to my way of thinking.

When someone makes a spelling error that stands alone in a piece with otherwise immaculate spelling and grammar, those who show the error to the writer, in simple and friendly ways, are not being pompous or superior.

Unfortunately, sometimes those who call the people who do this 'grammar police' or 'pompous asses' find themselves being thought of as worse than an ass.

I like you, Art. You're honest and funny, but please don't slip into a rut of ridiculing those who help in different ways than you do.

 

[Liar]

I choose to encourage and inspire because
most people are their worst critics, right!

True. Most people are their worst critics.

But what you cometimes seems to overlook is that that often makes other people their best critic.