Silly Stuff Challenge

A husband that's, as sweet as can be
but silly is the word that fits he
has a mind that's one of a kind
but still he is, a wonderful find
 
Enjoying the New Bed

He sees her lying in the bed
That he set up this afternoon,
With arms stretched out, and legs well spread.
He hopes that now is not too soon.
 
he wants her in the night
as well as the day
he feels her body is out of sight
and he loves her this way
 
foehn2 said:
Stupidity is often my specialty, and incredible stupidity might be considered my forte! I went through a phase where I wrote 32-line poems of rhymed monometer. What could be more incredibly stupid than that? I no longer have any of those dozens of incriminating pieces, but I was able to summon the disease once again for this thread:

Because
you thought
I was
a lot,
you grabbed
my hand
and dabbed
some sand

upon
the sheets
for fun
(deletes
an ex-
pletive;
expects
you live,

you un-
derstand
which one).
My hand
escapes
your grip
and drapes
your lip

with fing-
er kiss-
es. Ting-
ling bliss,
if I
find you:
a sigh —
I do...
It looks like fun! I'd like to read more of them.

I've occasionally tried to rhyme every accented syllable in a poem somewhere else in the poem. Here's an example that I have as Men and Women in my submissions list. I colored the syllables in the first four lines to show the matchings. The rhyme pattern of the first four lines repeats in the last four lines.

"Caress me, angel! Lift your dress!
My eyes would try your gift of thighs.
Come mess my brain and tease my stress!"
"Skirt, rise up high to please the guys!"

She's wet inside. Her lure is set.
His motion rocks her pure and slow.
Just let her ride without regret.
His flow now shocks her shout below.

I even think it might be too much rhyme, but it was fun and challenging. I don't think people really notice the rhyme unless it is marking the end of the line, which is I think its primary function.
 
FifthFlower said:
It looks like fun! I'd like to read more of them.

I've occasionally tried to rhyme every accented syllable in a poem somewhere else in the poem. Here's an example that I have as Men and Women in my submissions list. I colored the syllables in the first four lines to show the matchings. The rhyme pattern of the first four lines repeats in the last four lines.

"Caress me, angel! Lift your dress!
My eyes would try your gift of thighs.
Come mess my brain and tease my stress!"
"Skirt, rise up high to please the guys!"

She's wet inside. Her lure is set.
His motion rocks her pure and slow.
Just let her ride without regret.
His flow now shocks her shout below.

I even think it might be too much rhyme, but it was fun and challenging. I don't think people really notice the rhyme unless it is marking the end of the line, which is I think its primary function.







all i can say is AWESOME i'm sure it was a challenge for you but it was well worth it. i don't think i have ever seen one like that. i give this a 100 and say no......................rhyme wasn't to much.....................it was a really nice touch.i am very proud to have gotten to read your words of work. :rose:
 
Thanks, templeminded! :heart: I like how you, Unbridled_Passion and My Erotic Tail can keep up a poetic conversation in the Chasin' Chickens thread.
 
Something that came to me while eating something on break: Feasting on the Beast

It only makes sense to feed your food,
To fatten it up for the feast.
With mustard, it's best, and if you're in the mood,
There's the breast or the butt of the beast.
 
sometimes I feel overwhelmed
with the things life throws at me
but when I stop to think a minute
I know I am where I need to be

my happiness is all I need
to keep my life in check
no matter what I go through
I just say what the heck
 
FifthFlower said:
Thanks, templeminded! :heart: I like how you, Unbridled_Passion and My Erotic Tail can keep up a poetic conversation in the Chasin' Chickens thread.



you are most welcome and we all welcome you
to join in on conversations any time you wish :rose:
 
Men are from mars
loaded with cream
Women are from venus
cause' we like that penis
and joining with it
is our dream ;)
 
Hey diddle diddle the cat took a piddle
All over the bedside clock
The little dog laughed to see such fun
Then died from electric shock.
 
UnderYourSpell said:
Hey diddle diddle the cat took a piddle
All over the bedside clock
The little dog laughed to see such fun
Then died from electric shock.




OH MY GOD, HOW ON EARTH DID YOU EVER COME UP WITH THAT ONE.
YOU'RE AWESOME WITH BRINGING SMILES :D
 
Come lie with me and be my love
and fuck me in my bed,
till every thought of brevity
has left my reeling head.
Drink sweet scented juices
as you lie between my thighs.
Place your throbbing manhood
to stifle any cries.
As my lips about you feel
your saps rising will begin,
I will open wide my legs
and welcome you within.
As you stretch me to the limit
with your penetration size,
my song of adoration
will rebound across the skies.
 
pet my kitty
without the fur
I like it when you
make her purr
touch me, tease me
make me growl
before we're done
you'll make me howl
 
Older and Younger

While Tom might say that she is old
And Bill would call her young,
They both admit she's nice to hold,
And kiss, and, so I have been told,
Prove how well each is hung.
 
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