Angeline
Poet Chick
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- Mar 11, 2002
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You've raised the bar - talk about needing drink......
I read a lotta ghazals and listened to some jazz first.
And Wintermute is right: it's more of a puzzle than it would seem. I think part of it is that one is used to thinking up end rhymes, and the form forces you to look at a line a different way. It feels clumsy if you're not used to it. I had to delete a lot of lines that were awful before I started to feel it could work.