The General Commentary Thread

[cherries_on_snow]

This
is a damn near perfect science poem.

Read more on the subject at: Wikipedia.

That is all.

Thank you Tzara. ---%---<@

 

[Neonurotic]

Champy, awesome! You make me want to do a glosa and I've never wanted to do one before (that, and I can't remember how to write them).

Everyone, that's some good poetry all around in every thread that's bumped with a poem.

 

[champagne1982]

Champy, awesome! You make me want to do a glosa and I've never wanted to do one before (that, and I can't remember how to write them).

Everyone, that's some good poetry all around in every thread that's bumped with a poem.

Thank you!!! You know UYS has a teach in thread? I look forward to reading your piece.

 

[greenmountaineer]

Champy, awesome! You make me want to do a glosa and I've never wanted to do one before (that, and I can't remember how to write them).

Everyone, that's some good poetry all around in every thread that's bumped with a poem.

I’m still working on ....Dirty Magazine which I love but will have to read a few more times.

 

[butters]

Lizzie is a fabulous piece GM.

it truly is!

 

[Piscator]

In Cherries' ongoing 007 run, Goodbye July, provides a fitting sendoff to the month.

 

[cherries_on_snow]

Thank you, Piscator. I enjoyed reading your last 5 senses poem. Yours and Champs.

 

[HarryHill]

I have a three act play in spastic iambic pentameter and don't know where to post it. Any ideas?

 

[HarryHill]

Thanks for no advice. I posted it in fantasy/sci/fi even though it is basically a 5 page poem most fun I've had writing in a long time

 

[Piscator]

Welcome ShanghaiTang and your The Shag-Smith File.

 

[HarryHill]

what was the time on that pass? nice run.

 

[Piscator]

Acknowledgements

I'm not sure where the old thread went but I thank Harry and mer for their kind comments on Turkey Dump and gm for the same for Les Demineurs

 

[HarryHill]

I love this line in your dancing poem Jada.

'I am the rag doll and the robot.'

 

[greenmountaineer]

I love this line in your dancing poem Jada.

'I am the rag doll and the robot.'

Seconded

 

[butters]

Seconded

annnnnnnnd thirded. unique line, so visual!

 

[Piscator]

annnnnnnnd thirded. unique line, so visual!

ditto

 

[todski28]

Well 25 lines an achievement for me it would seem, especially when I consider how much more I wanted to write, Im glad for the line limit though something needs to shut me up

 

[HarryHill]

You did good, really enjoying your poems. Congratulations on taking it to the line limit.
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I'ma stuffed, butters made ham and chicken pie, yum. So, superstitions...
I knew a person that would leave a room immediately if there was a doll in it. Musta seen some bad Ju Ju

 

[todski28]

You did good, really enjoying your poems. Congratulations on taking it to the line limit.
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I'ma stuffed, butters made ham and chicken pie, yum. So, superstitions...
I knew a person that would leave a room immediately if there was a doll in it. Musta seen some bad Ju Ju

I'm jealous I love a good chicken pie!


I was looking here for inspiration

https://www.huffingtonpost.com/bruce-wilson/most-americans-1829-years_b_4163588.html

I wonder if I could keep it to 25 lines though lol

 

[HarryHill]

gm remixes with the best.

 

[todski28]

gm remixes with the best.

It’s an interesting concept looked it up, because gm paints some interesting pictures
As well as conceptualisations
Though it could be argued that I engage in sophistry when analysing poetry

 

[greenmountaineer]

gm remixes with the best.

Thanks, Harry.

 

[greenmountaineer]

It’s an interesting concept looked it up, because gm paints some interesting pictures
As well as conceptualisations
Though it could be argued that I engage in sophistry when analysing poetry

Thanks, tod. I can be rather sophistic too.

 

[HarryHill]

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[greenmountaineer]

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Thanks,, Harry. I meant to write "solipsistic." Of course anything that comes out of a solipsist's mouth, he considers sophistry