Voboy
Sometime Wordwright
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I’ve just read and commented, but to expand a bit more… I think it’s great but without Paula’s obvious consent to the shenanigans, the main characters present as really awful people, so that aspect was a struggle because I kept looking for the come-uppance. Perhaps if in a sequel Paula manages to send them all (or just her husband) down a literal chasm in some way, that will resolve itself…
I love writing awful people.
But yes, that's why I've never posted this before. It's about two years old. This year, I just decided "why not?" I've always liked the story, so I'm glad some others do too. Thanks.