Willing to edit

[yssej]

it will be missed.

also, my story ill be sending you sometime... isnt the same as you read before. And its kind of "different"

 

[meg1]

that's fine....the story should "grow" as you go

i know...but i'm ready for it to end anyway....i'm ready to move on

just keep your fingers crossed that the next will be worth it as well

ok....i'm still online, but i'm in another room, so i'll check back in when i come back

 

[FunwithRyleigh]

well, here, i think you need more friends because the 'anon' out-number the members....


i've never understood people that couldn't find something supportive to say, and in editing especially you have to be careful because the whole point is to HELP those you are working with

I can't believe it!!!

I got a nice comment from an 'anon' today for Committed Part 2!!

*******
Sick but...
05/05/08 By: Anonymous
in a very erotic manner and the author wrote it powerfully that it wasn't sleazy or cheap at all. It has that dark element like Hannibal Lecter's story.

Good work there FwR. Wish to read more.

*******

Funny - yeah - that is what I was going for - creepy but erotic.

 

[meg1]

THAT'S WONDERFUL!!! see? not all anon's are jerks

I haven't read it yet, but don't worry, i will....i'm still catching up on editing before people yell at me no really, everyone is being wonderful, but i don't want to take advantage of their kindness by taking any more time than i need to.

i'm so happy they are liking your stories...that's the best compliment of all

 

[yssej]

to be honest, im not sure how to write the sex scene exactly, thats been my whole struggle.

i dont really have a problem with it but, i face a plot delimema kind of, because i want it to be like simple, but not have it go all the way full blown sex, and i just dont know how to convince my self or a reader that this build up just ends...

 

[meg1]

it is hard, at least with movies you can fade out....do you have the story written besides that?

 

[yssej]

no, not enitrely. but mostly its like 5 chapters and i just have to finish that chapter up.

 

[meg1]

don't feel like you have to send me a finished product, there are many people who send half-done things to see if i think they are on the right track before they go too far....

 

[yssej]

i need to get a little more filled in before it will make entire sense even partialy completed... so yeah I gotta do that.

ill send you some stuff soon then

 

[meg1]

i need to get a little more filled in before it will make entire sense even partialy completed... so yeah I gotta do that.

ill send you some stuff soon then

that works, no pressure

 

[yssej]

well, I am starting to finish it up now. Dont know if ill get to finish what I want to night. Hope I can... I have things to do later this week my great grandmother of 95 years old died this monday.

it was actually unexpected... but yeah i have to goto a catholic funeral thats like 6 hours long so... I doubt Ill be getting anything done friday. So hopefully ill have it done later tomorrow.


Oh, and this story is more "story" like your Eirin story. it made me want to write something interesting.


ohhhh, and after reading it. I would love ideas for a title. I am thinking something like "How to save a family"


also, just call me jessy.

 

[meg1]

FINALLY

I'm soooo sorry about your grandmother. It doesn't matter what age someone dies it, it is still devastating. (though 6 hours might tax my ADHD )

Wonderful, then I will be even more interested in reading it

Ok...did you read the title of my first story? Titles are not my forte. I'll see what I can come up w/ anyway.

 

[yssej]

well, funeral was okay. I have never been into a catholic church so that was new and different.


im trying to make this one area feel natural right now, the diaglog is kind of moving but not going the best.

 

[meg1]

well, funeral was okay. I have never been into a catholic church so that was new and different.


im trying to make this one area feel natural right now, the diaglog is kind of moving but not going the best.

i'm sorry, i know it was hard for you


take your time, I don't mean to rush you, i just want to keep up

 

[yssej]

im curious when #5 might be available ?

I just have not been in a mood to right lately, and i hope that its not negative towards you waiting for it.

 

[meg1]

i have not been in a good mood lately either, but i am working on it, and i hope it will be out soon.

i'm sorry it's late, i really thought it would have been submitted last week, i just couldn't get it done.

 

[yssej]

take your time, its worth it.

 

[meg1]

thanks, but i really am working on it....i know that the last chap will come easily...this one (and the last one actually) just aren't flowing for me

 

[yssej]

hm, i had a new idea come to me. and it actually fits my problem of not being able to break of the love scene.

but its kind of in a new direction. but whatever.


would you like to read it? take your time if you do. Id have to place some markers in where things are left out and where the rough comments would be. like " this happens here" but without detail.

 

[meg1]

yes, i would love that....just slip in how you think you want the unfinished scenes to go so i can get an idea of where you are going....that's sounds great

 

[megawriter27]

Hello why don't you response e-mails...

 

[meg1]

hello megawriter, I haven't had time to review your story yet, but I did get it, and should be able to review it this week

 

[yssej]

well, i am reading #5 as i type this. I like it as usual.

how many more of these?


also, i havent felt much like writing lately, so if you ever dont want to edit something IF i do finish a story, you know to feel free to say no. I dont want to be imposing on someone. But yeah, I started to live healthier in my day to day life. Infact, i dont drink caffine anymore. And its made me feel alot better, and that side effect means I dont feel like writing i think. When I was writing I would take sleeping pills just to make the night interesting.

I'd hate to have to start that over just to finish a story




edit: finished #5. I liked it, dont take this negatively. But, I didnt get into this one as much as the first piece. maybe it was the length, but it ended where it had to. Short, but necessary. please keep writing, I love this series.

 

[meg1]

jessy,

If you don't feel like writing, I swear you don't have to. I did like your story, but you should never make yourself miserable in order to be able to write.

I think most people here to regularly put out stories will tell you that they feel compelled to write. And if you don't feel that way, you shouldn't. SOMEONE needs to feel compelled to read ().

Furthermore, the story isn't going anywhere so far I'm not going anywhere, so if you feel like finishing it at sometime, we'll both still be here.

Yes, chapt 5 was very difficult to write. But it was necessary as a transition chapter to 6. I plan on ending it with 6.

 

[yssej]

it was much appreciated. Still an enjoyable read, I like how i cannot difinitively guess the ending for certain. So many predictible options come to my mind, and then... who knows about the wild card scenario(like in my story kind of.)


I love this vague cliff hanger.


also, I am glad that you liked my story, and I think, that since someone read it, that I am satisfied somewhat.

Thanks, again.