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[SofiaLaFrench]

Looking for a Beta reader.
Good afternoon ladies, well, at least it is where I am. I am looking for a beta reader for a lesbian story that I'm writing. The main female character is from my Encounter stories. I can provide background if you decide to help me, but basically, she pursues men and uses them for her pleasure. But this time, she is the pursued. I have about 2700 words so far (no sex yet) and I want some feedback on pacing, tension, etc. as this is my first lesbian story. Does anyone want to help?

 

[Lady2020]

Not into water play, but ice play sounds interesting.

 

[SofiaLaFrench]

Looking for a Beta reader.
Good afternoon ladies, well, at least it is where I am. I am looking for a beta reader for a lesbian story that I'm writing. The main female character is from my Encounter stories. I can provide background if you decide to help me, but basically, she pursues men and uses them for her pleasure. But this time, she is the pursued. I have about 2700 words so far (no sex yet) and I want some feedback on pacing, tension, etc. as this is my first lesbian story. Does anyone want to help?

WOW! Thanks so much for all the PMs! I have a beta reader now. You ladies rock!

 

[InCNCestBangPie]

For some annoying reason this thread dropped out of my radar, aka stopped getting alerts. Hate when Lit does that.

Absolutely same.

 

[SofiaLaFrench]

I love it when they self identify as a total ass. Ignore!

 

[v_indigo]

I love it when they self identify as a total ass. Ignore!View attachment 2344890

It’s very considerate of them

 

[Strixaluco]

I love it when they self identify as a total ass. Ignore!View attachment 2344890

That's at least 2 signs. First jumping into assumptions about you (and getting it all wrong) and then straight into action without bothering about consensuality. Well, 3 - also only caring about himself even in that action.

 

[SofiaLaFrench]

I went back at him twice, and he finally apologized YES!! Don’t f*ck with Sofia.

 

[Strixaluco]

I went back at him twice, and he finally apologized YES!! Don’t f*ck with Sofia.

WOW! You go girl!

 

[InCNCestBangPie]

I love it when they self identify as a total ass. Ignore!

I actually got an alert this time! You know, for the first time in like 3 weeks.

I love that the ones who try to build a connection over the course of weeks, always suddenly disappear, every damn time. Yet, the ones who I chat with one Tuesday a month at 9:30am, only when the moon is in a crescent phase & my friend's period is on — those are the ones who fall head over dicks in love (their version of love anyway). Make it make sense.

 

[v_indigo]

I went back at him twice, and he finally apologized YES!! Don’t f*ck with Sofia.

He started a whole thread to cry about it

https://forum.literotica.com/threads/why-i-dont-get-reply-from-girls.1609727/

 

[v_indigo]

Go the fuck away you trash

 

[SofiaLaFrench]

He started a whole thread to cry about it

https://forum.literotica.com/threads/why-i-dont-get-reply-from-girls.1609727/

Yeah, I saw that. Based on the typos I wonder if English is not his first language. I kinda feel sorry for him since I can’t imagine he's ever touched a real woman’s titty.

 

[v_indigo]

Ia Saying dumb okay

No, you aren’t dumb, you are an asshole. Go awah

 

[v_indigo]

SOfia is the main culprit

Oh you are so oppressed. You should probably go find a safe space

 

[SofiaLaFrench]

Oh dear! We have another man invading our women’s thread. Whatever will we do?

 

[Strixaluco]

@ToPleaseHim We got some trash here.

 

[Strixaluco]

SOfia is the main culprit

Culprit for a mistake YOU made? That's a very wicked way of thinking.

And BTW, this thread is forbidden for men.

 

[SofiaLaFrench]

SOfia is the main culprit

I’ll admit it. The peanut comment was mine. But damn @v_indigo , you must have had a mani and had your nails sharpened. You did some slicing and dicing in his whining thread!

 

[v_indigo]

See how she laughing after making mess

Why are you here, trash?

 

[v_indigo]

Bye unemployed someone sensible is saying something right so i have to listen .
I all happened in heat of moment dont have any bad feeling bye takecare

Awww now with the excuses.
Eat shit.

 

[SofiaLaFrench]

How many women did you randomly message “Hey mommy i wanna fck you hard” and how has that worked out for you?

How bad is your life going or how much free time you have

Thought that you were leaving little boy.

 

[Strixaluco]

How bad is your life going or how much free time you have

What part of "this thread is forbidden for men" do you not understand?

Well, the mods WILL see you out.

 

[genzsub]

I just want to say how much I you ladies!!

 

[SofiaLaFrench]

@Fcker8620 You started the shit show by popping uninvited into my PMs. See yourself out before you’re banned.