ANDTHEEND's Highlighted Stories

[andtheend]

Captured and Fucked by LadyAkiraRose

Captured and Fucked is a story that posted in the BDSM category. The link to the story is below.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=476599

Well, what can I say about this story? It was short enough that I'd call it a teaser. I especially liked the first paragraph and the last paragraph made me feel disappointment that there wasn't a hook.

I was half hoping and expecting that this was a game she routinely played with her husband.

It was an enjoyable read, but I wished there was more, more tension, more fear, more sex, and more imagery. Yeah, I wish there was more. I wanted to feel and be more in the character's head. What did she feel, really feel and what was she thinking, when he surprised her and placed that hood over her head?

This story was too good just to be a surface story and it could have been great had the writer taken the time and made the effort to go deeper. Nonetheless, it's an enjoyable read for anyone into BDSM and/or NonConsent/Reluctance.

Good luck with your story LadyAkiraRose. I hope my little highlight has put your story in the spotlight for a second chance read.

 

[andtheend]

Longing by rrk226

Here's a cute little story, called Longing, that posted in the Fetish category, by rrk226. The link to the story is below.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=477015

Definitely, the story would have been better had the author described Madison, the main character.

Moreover, a sign of an amateur writer, nearly every paragraph started with -ing words, turning, stepping, soaping, reaching, parting, thrusting, and pushing. It would have been better had the author mixed up the variety of how to start a sentence.

Can we say dangling participles, that is to say, not used when describing a man's penis?

Nonetheless, it's a fun story about a woman masturbating in the shower, while thinking of a man, Daniel.

Good luck with your story, rrk226. I hope I was able to help you get higher votes and more comments by highlighting your story.

 

[Bakeboss]

Re Payback's a Bitch

Although you are right that I'm a contestant in Survivor that is not the sole reason for the shortness of my stories. I feel that a short story should set a plot and characters and then give the reader a gentle push toward the end of the tale. A short story allows for the reader to use his imagination to augment the tale for his own pleasure. I realize that many people do not care for this type of story telling and want the author to fill in all the blanks so he or she may keep their own mind at ease but that is not my style. I personally feel a short story should be less than two thousand words to be considered a short story per say.

I feel like saying that a minute is more than enough time to read a dirty story or to make love but that would just be too embarrassing.

 

[andtheend]

Although you are right that I'm a contestant in Survivor that is not the sole reason for the shortness of my stories. I feel that a short story should set a plot and characters and then give the reader a gentle push toward the end of the tale. A short story allows for the reader to use his imagination to augment the tale for his own pleasure. I realize that many people do not care for this type of story telling and want the author to fill in all the blanks so he or she may keep their own mind at ease but that is not my style. I personally feel a short story should be less than two thousand words to be considered a short story per say.

I feel like saying that a minute is more than enough time to read a dirty story or to make love but that would just be too embarrassing.

A minute? Sixty seconds, Bake, may I call you Bake or do you prefer your more formal name of Bakeboss? No matter. I dare say that a story can be any length, nonetheless, it needs to be a long as it needs to be to tell the story.

I've read a few dozen of your stories. I like to read. And all of your stories that I read have left me unsatisfied. Now, I've never had sex with you, of course, but if you are in the habit of having sex for only 1 minute, then I probably say that you aren't satisfying your partner, unless you're having sex with yourself.

To me, a story needs a beginning, a middle, and an end, as well as background, description, and character development. All of that is mighty hard to do in just 2,000 words and from what I've read of your stories, they average half that amount. Either you are a genius or I'm missing something in my reading comprehension and literary interpretation, whenever I read one of your abbreviated, snippets of a story.

Good luck to you and thank you for taking the time to make a post to my thread. It was my pleaure meeting you, the 2010 Survivor Contest winner.

 

[sr71plt]

You'd think Freddie would make the smallest modicum of effort to hide himself in these alts if he's going to continue to claim he has none. But then, he's owned up to being more than one in the past and then still has had the balls to whine that he has none.

I wouldn't bother trying to explain anything to him, Bakeboss. It isn't going to go anywhere.

I think this is a good thread, though. It's always good to have highlighting of the stories posted here--and it keeps Freddie busy.

 

[andtheend]

I just wanted to throw this out there that if anyone has a story you'd like others to have a second look, you may post the link to your story here, along with a brief description about the story.

I'd like you to feel that this story highlight link is your link to use.

This way, if there's one place to go for suggested reading, perhaps, readers will come here to check out your story.

Lastly, I'm hoping that everyone who reads this will participate in the upcoming Nude Day contest, which begins on June 22nd. Maybe, if there are more people participating, there will be less of a chance that the same people will win the contest.

It's time the contributors regained control of the site from those who typically hog it with their 24/7 forum posts and self-promoting.

You keep writing and I'll keep reading and highlighting your story.

 

[sr71plt]

Good on ya, Freddie, in this endeavor. I'm all for those who post stories on Lit. weekly to get more reads for their stories.

 

[andtheend]

Just a thought, in case those are wondering.

I don't plan on highlighting those stories of authors who have an entire library of stories. I figure you already have a proven fan base and don't need my meager help to get reads.

I'm really looking more to help new writers and those writers who always find their stories posted at the bottom of the heap, such as in the case of SamuelX. Even though he's an established writer, he doesn't receive the respect that he deserves.

Lastly, if anyone has a story they'd like me to highlight, they can either post their request here or send me a note.

 

[sr71plt]

Scouries is salivating for your attention. He even said so.

 

[andtheend]

I should have mentioned that if you want your story highlighted here, it doesn't have to be a recent story. Maybe you have a story that you particularly liked writing and would like others to take a fresh look at it. Oh, maybe you only need a few more high votes to earn a red H.

It doesn't really matter when you wrote it.

It's unfortunate but once the story falls from the board and disappears in the archives, even though readers continue to read it, they seldom vote for it and nearly never comment on it.

I guess readers forget that writers are just as human as the readers.

I'll be back tomorrow with more highlights.

 

[andtheend]

Playing Santa by randallangdon

Here's a story from a single guy with an active imagination.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=477349

Well, for those who thought it's too early for Christmas, here's a little gift.

This is a fun story that we all wish would happen to us, especially when it comest to hot, sexy sister-in-laws.

Good luck with your story randallangdon. I hope this spotlight of attention will give you a higher score and more feedback.

 

[andtheend]

The Nightmare? by GreySlave

Wow!

GreySlave's The Nightmare, link below, is as wildly as it is weirdly erotic.

There were a few typo changes and a bit of looseness with the point of view, and unless it's a detective story told in the 1940's, I'm not crazy about stories that are told in the second person, although it suddenly switched back and forth to third person. Those switches made you too aware of the inadvertant changes throwing you out of the story and ruining the tension.

Yet, I understood what the writer was trying to do and it was a good effort on his part. He could have posted this in the BDSM section for those who like being bound, blindfolded, and gagged.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=477442

Good luck with your story GreySlave. I hope my spotlight of attention will garner you a higher score, more feedback, and better placement on the new story list the next time you submit a story.

 

[andtheend]

Forced Fuck by TIANICOLE69

Here's a story that posted in the incest category at the bottom of the new story section by a new writer. The link to the story is below.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=477273

Well, what can I say good about this story? The theme of this story was good, father daughter sex, forcing father to have sex with daughter. I'm sure there is someone who will imagine enough to get off, while reading this story. Only, I can't help but suspect that this story was written as a joke or as a test.

It was littered with grammatical mistakes. Surely, this story would have benefitted by having an editor read it over before posting it.

The writer was trying to do a bit too much with the story in a short amount of time. Perhaps, if the story had been longer and the characters more developed, it would have worked. Indeed, I liked the premise of it.

Good luck TIANICOLE69. Don't let the bashers get you down. I hope this bit of attention will garner you better scores and more feedback.

 

[andtheend]

Sometimes It’s Better Not to Share by SplendidSpunk

Below is the link to a story, Sometimes It's Better Not To Share by SplendidSpunk. It posted in the NonConsent/Reluctance category.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=477523

For those who love reading hot rape scenes, this story for you. SplendidSpunk is a decent writer and with a bit of a surprise ending, he can tell a good story.

I recommend this story to those who enjoy this category.

Good luck to you SplendidSpunk with your story. I hope this highlight of attention will garner ou a few higher votes and the feedback that you admitted you enjoy reading.

 

[andtheend]

Daddy Urges by rdwriter

Well, here's another story by another new writer. The link to the story is below.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=477529

Daddy Urges is about a father supposedly having sex with his sleeping daughter. I see I already have your attention by those who enjoy reading stories posted to the incest category.

There were some disturbing point of view switches but not enough to dissaude the reader from enjoying a story about father and daughter sex.

Good luck to yor rdwriter with your story Daddy Urges. I hope that my spotlight of attention will garner you a few more votes and some feedback. Welcome to Literotica.

 

[andtheend]

For those who have been following my story feedback highlighting thread, I hope to continue to do this for as long as I'm physically able.

I have a rare blood disease. Both my parents were carriers and I was the unlucky one. My brother and my sister did not get the disease, thank God.

Unfortunately, I'm dying. There is no cure. I was give 6 months to live a month ago. I'm hoping to make it through, until the end of the year. I'd like to spend one more Christmas with my son.

In the meantime, this story board has meant a lot to me. It has given me much comfort to write my stories. I really don't have anyone else to talk to about what I'm going through, other than my priest.

I know it may sound a bit odd, but I asked my priest to take over this thread in the event of my untimely death. FatherHolyGhost (not his real name, of course) is a great writer, better than me. I wish you could hear his sermons. He's wonderful.

He can definitely highlight stories, as well as I can. Hopefully, he'll even write a story or two. Of course, his stories will not be true sexual accounts, since he is a priest and not allowed to have sex. Yet, what stories are true sexually accounts anyway?

I hope you will give FatherHolyGhost a warm welcome. In the meantime, so long as I'm still healthy enough to continue highlighting stories and writing stories for the theme and Survivor contest, I hope you will give me your support with a vote, whenever my stories post.

Thank you and God bless you all,

Susan

 

[FatherHolyGhost]

Hi all my children,

Susan asked me to say a few words. I have given her the support that she needs in her time of need and I hope you will all continue to do that for her, as well.

Never would I have imagined I'd be posting here on such a site, yet, if Susan tells me that this site is good, then no matter. I don't know if I'll be writing erotic stories, but I can certainly highlight them, on her behalf, when that time comes. Hopefully that time will not come for many years. Hopefully they will find a cure to her disease soon.

Now, if you'd all join me in a prayer for Susan.

Hail Mary, full of grace.
Our Lord is with thee.
Blessed art thou among women,
and blessed is the fruit of thy womb,
Jesus.

Holy Mary, Mother of God,
pray for us sinners,
now and at the hour of our death.
Amen.

God bless you all.

Thank you and go with God.

 

[sr71plt]

And Freddie adds yet another alt to all of those he "doesn't" have.

 

[andtheend]

I was nervous writing what I did, but glad that I wrote it.

Thank you to all who sent me e-mails and PM wishing me well and a healthy recovery.

Thank you.

 

[michchick98]

And Freddie adds yet another alt to all of those he "doesn't" have.

Yeah, looks like he's trying to "kill-off" one because everyone figured out it was him. Of course, this new one is a dead ringer for him as well.

 

[michchick98]

For those who have been following my story feedback highlighting thread, I hope to continue to do this for as long as I'm physically able.

I have a rare blood disease. Both my parents were carriers and I was the unlucky one. My brother and my sister did not get the disease, thank God.

Unfortunately, I'm dying. There is no cure. I was give 6 months to live a month ago. I'm hoping to make it through, until the end of the year. I'd like to spend one more Christmas with my son.

In the meantime, this story board has meant a lot to me. It has given me much comfort to write my stories. I really don't have anyone else to talk to about what I'm going through, other than my priest.

I know it may sound a bit odd, but I asked my priest to take over this thread in the event of my untimely death. FatherHolyGhost (not his real name, of course) is a great writer, better than me. I wish you could hear his sermons. He's wonderful.

He can definitely highlight stories, as well as I can. Hopefully, he'll even write a story or two. Of course, his stories will not be true sexual accounts, since he is a priest and not allowed to have sex. Yet, what stories are true sexually accounts anyway?

I hope you will give FatherHolyGhost a warm welcome. In the meantime, so long as I'm still healthy enough to continue highlighting stories and writing stories for the theme and Survivor contest, I hope you will give me your support with a vote, whenever my stories post.

Thank you and God bless you all,

Susan

So is this on top of having an autistic child? Wow, such drama.

 

[FatherHolyGhost]

So is this on top of having an autistic child? Wow, such drama.

I pray you will find goodness in your heart.

There go you before God without a wrinkle. When it is your time for trouble, I hope someone is not as heartless to you, as you are to them.

I will pray for you.

 

[FatherHolyGhost]

And Freddie adds yet another alt to all of those he "doesn't" have.

You are in my prayers, my son, for you to change your wicked ways.

 

[sr71plt]

You are in my prayers, my son, for you to change your wicked ways.

No sweat, Freddie.

 

[andtheend]

Unpredictable by BlaqueDiamond

Don't you just love celebrity stories? Here's a good one by a new writer, Unpredictable by BlaqueDiamond.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=477594

I have to tell you, I was taken immediately with this story. The dialogue is right on, dead center. Good job with that.

In a sentence, I had a sense of Carmen. I could see her.

The writer's voice comes through loud and strong, but not intrusive. The character he creative is three dimensional.

I recommend this story. I only wish it was longer. I shall look to reading more from this writer. Good job.

Good luck with your story BlaqueDiamond. I hope my spotlight of attention garners you more and higher votes and more feedback.